Vampire Girl's Journey to Nairn

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This is a book about the transformation of ice cubes written by a very cool author. It's miserable and miserable, and it's not easy to create. Please give me more support...

Plot: 8.6 Creativity: 8.8 Recommendation level: 8.8 Two dimensions Transform Light or single A vampire who wants to be a detective?

The book is very good. I saw the killings and touching the corpses. It's a pity that no good things were released. Thanks to the old gun structure, the book started very well. The entry point is very interesting with cross-dressing and cuteness. Already invested. If I want to improve, I can only say that I need to have a deeper understanding of the core of the game. I have never played Lao Gun, so I can only suggest that it needs to be reconstructed and have a different soul from the original. There are also some obvious problems, the characters' language is similar. The perspective of the protagonist is relatively scattered, and there is no need to write about the toilet. From awakening to the frozen state to entering the town, there is a good progressive rhythm and the wilderness map is wasted. It is better to use indirect writing methods as much as possible on the divine level. Ordinary readers have never played Lao Gun, so the introduction and popular science are a bit lacking. These issues are more complex to deal with and can only be balanced slowly.