
One Piece: the Swordsman's Heart
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Thunder and sword, justice and evil, fighting and killing------------
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Official(1305)Scraped 20d ago
A very nice fan novel (it's not easy to find a good book these days) 😳
The protagonist is not a virgin, but her strength is also increasing step by step. She is not like other fan fictions, showing off all the way and slapping people in the face, opening up a harem, and not hesitating when dealing with enemies. The only drawback is that there are too few and not enough to see.
The author has to update 5 times tomorrow.
I have been following this book for a long time. To be honest, the author writes it very carefully. I enjoy watching it. I used to update 5 times a day, every day. Later it became 4 updates. I'm watching the second update at 3pm, and I'm watching the second update at dinner. ' It feels like it's part of life. No matter what other people say, I personally think it's pretty good. I hope that after the author's party (Big Sword), there will be a new update in the early morning. ~Thank you very much, I will give you another
I couldn't bear to watch it for a month. I watched it once today and it was a pleasure. In the end, it was not that exciting. Author update update update
Raise your hands after watching Samsara Paradise.
Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha
I feel like the protagonist is very perverted and extreme.
Does the protagonist really have the heart of a swordsman? I think it should be a murderous and selfish heart. It simply overturned my understanding of swordsmen. Of course swordsmen kill decisively, but the protagonist you described is a strong man. If someone weaker than you is dissatisfied with you, you will kill him. For example, when you kill the empress, you will get nothing from killing him. Of course you will regard it as a challenge to your majesty. After all, if you don't care for yourself, you will be destroyed by heaven and earth. But why are you chasing the Straw Hats? For a passionate battle? To deal with the people behind Luffy? If that's the case, just arrest and threaten the people behind Luffy to fight you. You have to kill them to lure them out! Moreover, the contrast between Weir before and after is too big. One moment he is a murderous demon, and the next moment he is gentle and considerate, which is really hard to cope with. There are three points in my reading of pirate novels. The first is about the empress, the second is about the Straw Hat Pirates, and the third is a story about the protagonist slowly growing up and becoming stronger. The protagonist does not need a heroine, or there is no systematic golden finger, but the protagonist does not need a virgin, and the most important thing is that the protagonist's personality is not distorted or abnormal. I only have two words for your book, extreme
It feels like the protagonist is only nice to Lolita😏😏
My personal opinion is just a suggestion, don't comment if you don't like it.
It's normal to not treat people as human beings when you travel to another world, and it's normal to know that the plot steals the protagonist's things. But you are writing a novel about the pirate world. No matter how powerful your protagonist is, everyone still likes the Straw Hat gang. Moreover, the strength and ability of the protagonist are poorly written. In the world of pirates, you cannot become strong through hard work. What you need is talent, physical fitness, or wisdom. The writing is not enjoyable, nor does it show the protagonist's efforts. The protagonist is really annoying if she is too perverted, but the perverted protagonist will not be lovable either. The protagonist is incompatible with the world of pirates, and coupled with the protagonist's personality, it cannot give people a sense of immersion. There is no crazy devil fruit, no system, it is not pleasing to see pirates like this intruding into the novel.
Does anyone have a book with a similar protagonist? He kills people like hemp and never leaves the water! ! ! Let me go, after reading this book, if I look at other protagonists, they are simply garbage, trash, Holy Mother, alas! ! Asking for introduction
Salute to all the judges
I think mosquitoes are too much trouble, I will update it at a later time depending on how much trouble it has. ~The Ming Dynasty manuscript disappeared, the computer exploded, he got a great health care, he drank (he said he drank and drank, but it didn't count every time), he sent away deceased people,... There were too many reasons. But what is worthy of praise is that the three updates every day are constantly more real. (Although it used to be 4 updates)
Trash, a murderous maniac, and he still rules the world, is he qualified? You made the Yonko so weak, you are so awesome, no one can beat you in just two or three years, you are so awesome, you can challenge the Yonko alone
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Official(1305)Scraped 20d ago
A very nice fan novel (it's not easy to find a good book these days) 😳
The protagonist is not a virgin, but her strength is also increasing step by step. She is not like other fan fictions, showing off all the way and slapping people in the face, opening up a harem, and not hesitating when dealing with enemies. The only drawback is that there are too few and not enough to see.
The author has to update 5 times tomorrow.
I have been following this book for a long time. To be honest, the author writes it very carefully. I enjoy watching it. I used to update 5 times a day, every day. Later it became 4 updates. I'm watching the second update at 3pm, and I'm watching the second update at dinner. ' It feels like it's part of life. No matter what other people say, I personally think it's pretty good. I hope that after the author's party (Big Sword), there will be a new update in the early morning. ~Thank you very much, I will give you another
I couldn't bear to watch it for a month. I watched it once today and it was a pleasure. In the end, it was not that exciting. Author update update update
Raise your hands after watching Samsara Paradise.
Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha
I feel like the protagonist is very perverted and extreme.
Does the protagonist really have the heart of a swordsman? I think it should be a murderous and selfish heart. It simply overturned my understanding of swordsmen. Of course swordsmen kill decisively, but the protagonist you described is a strong man. If someone weaker than you is dissatisfied with you, you will kill him. For example, when you kill the empress, you will get nothing from killing him. Of course you will regard it as a challenge to your majesty. After all, if you don't care for yourself, you will be destroyed by heaven and earth. But why are you chasing the Straw Hats? For a passionate battle? To deal with the people behind Luffy? If that's the case, just arrest and threaten the people behind Luffy to fight you. You have to kill them to lure them out! Moreover, the contrast between Weir before and after is too big. One moment he is a murderous demon, and the next moment he is gentle and considerate, which is really hard to cope with. There are three points in my reading of pirate novels. The first is about the empress, the second is about the Straw Hat Pirates, and the third is a story about the protagonist slowly growing up and becoming stronger. The protagonist does not need a heroine, or there is no systematic golden finger, but the protagonist does not need a virgin, and the most important thing is that the protagonist's personality is not distorted or abnormal. I only have two words for your book, extreme
It feels like the protagonist is only nice to Lolita😏😏
My personal opinion is just a suggestion, don't comment if you don't like it.
It's normal to not treat people as human beings when you travel to another world, and it's normal to know that the plot steals the protagonist's things. But you are writing a novel about the pirate world. No matter how powerful your protagonist is, everyone still likes the Straw Hat gang. Moreover, the strength and ability of the protagonist are poorly written. In the world of pirates, you cannot become strong through hard work. What you need is talent, physical fitness, or wisdom. The writing is not enjoyable, nor does it show the protagonist's efforts. The protagonist is really annoying if she is too perverted, but the perverted protagonist will not be lovable either. The protagonist is incompatible with the world of pirates, and coupled with the protagonist's personality, it cannot give people a sense of immersion. There is no crazy devil fruit, no system, it is not pleasing to see pirates like this intruding into the novel.
Does anyone have a book with a similar protagonist? He kills people like hemp and never leaves the water! ! ! Let me go, after reading this book, if I look at other protagonists, they are simply garbage, trash, Holy Mother, alas! ! Asking for introduction
Salute to all the judges
I think mosquitoes are too much trouble, I will update it at a later time depending on how much trouble it has. ~The Ming Dynasty manuscript disappeared, the computer exploded, he got a great health care, he drank (he said he drank and drank, but it didn't count every time), he sent away deceased people,... There were too many reasons. But what is worthy of praise is that the three updates every day are constantly more real. (Although it used to be 4 updates)
Trash, a murderous maniac, and he still rules the world, is he qualified? You made the Yonko so weak, you are so awesome, no one can beat you in just two or three years, you are so awesome, you can challenge the Yonko alone
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Mosquito Brother's famous work, this book is relatively poisonous in the early stage because it is a novice, but it explodes in the later stage, and it quickly becomes semen, and it is very popular. This is a masterpiece of Dark Flow Pirates fanfic, and it is worth reading. The only thing you need to endure is the poison in the first few dozen chapters. Let me tell you something secretly. "Momonosuke died miserably!!!" Rating: ⭐⭐⭐⭐




Blood... You shed a lot of blood! Eyes... I can't keep my eyes open! Here... Is this the end? The world of the strong... I am not willing to give in! I am not willing to give in! If you really can't survive, then please let your body burn! The moment the blade swiped across my cheek, my blood began to boil... Reborn in the world of One Piece, I don't want fruits, I don't follow the ship, for once in my life, I want to be the strongest swordsman in the world, and use my sharp blade to sweep down the world in front of me! This book belongs to the dark style and is a battle series. It tells the story of the protagonist in the world of One Piece, using swords, blood, and killing step by step to make himself stronger. Even if the opponent is an admiral, he will be killed if he says to kill him... Here, there is no such thing as leaving someone under the sword! Are you still looking forward to better fan fiction? Click the follow button and the hottest two-dimensional novels will be delivered to you immediately. Y(^_^)Y




This book is not about following the ship, it is about real pirates. You can kill them if you want. For example, in the early stage, you won the lottery by killing two navy, and you entered the Naval Research Department and killed Vegapunk. It was very passionate and burning. The plot setting is a bit of a no-brainer, but IQ is still on the line, so I won't be able to watch it at all. It's perfectly okay to pass the time when you're bored.




A very nice complete novel.











