
The First Immortal King of the Perfect World
About This Novel
In the last years of Immortal Ancient times, Jiutian was almost broken. The war has never stopped from the beginning of the era to the end of the era. The king has fallen, the immortal way has ceased to exist, the smoke is everywhere, and all living beings are in ruins. In this war-torn era, a person who traveled from Blue Star stood up resolutely after seeing such a miserable situation! He decided to take over the battle flag! Lin Yue: "Maybe I can't change anything, but at least I should do something! At the same time, I also want to see what the end of practice will be like. Get the best of both worlds, why not!"
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Official(294)Scraped 20d ago
The writing is very good. Why is it so lonely if there is no female protagonist? There should be three or four female protagonists.
The realm of pig's feet is too vague
He has not survived the Tribulation of the Immortal King, he is at the level of the Ten Evils, and his physical body is comparable to that of a giant. There is no Immortal King Daoguo who would risk his life to fight against a giant like Wu Shang. The stone was enough to defy the heavens. If he hadn't survived the Immortal King Tribulation, he would have been almost beaten to death by Ao Sheng and the other three. There is a fundamental difference between whether there is Immortal King Daoguo or not. It is almost the same as having unparalleled combat power. Theoretically, the giants can forcefully break through the Quasi-Immortal Emperor, and the gap in the middle is not even a little bit. It's completely impossible to survive in a shopping competition with a being like Wu Shang, who is not considered weak even among giants.
I feel like all fantasy novels have more than a dozen protagonists.
I really don't understand that the person who can cultivate to the level of the quasi-immortal emperor didn't rise to the top by stepping on the corpses of countless people. It's understandable to leapfrog and fight in the early stage, but I really don't understand the leapfrogging in the later stages. In a perfect world, how many people the Huangtian Emperor beats are all from the same level. How can you beat several people by yourself?
I don't understand the protagonist's world before he traveled through time. Is the protagonist's original world the earth world from the third film of Zhe Tian? Or is it an ordinary earth without any supernatural beings? I can't understand the martial arts brought by the protagonist's time travel
The more you write, the more rubbish you get
Why does the author have the nerve to charge for this? The protagonist, the Immortal Queen, becomes more and more rubbish as he writes. An Immortal King does not have the power of an Immortal King. He can only be brothers with this and that one all day long. The author can go back and read the daily life of the original king. If there is nothing to do, an Immortal King is wandering around and even calls himself brothers with people in the human realm. Meng Tianzheng turns the Immortal King into a bastard.
嗷嗷嗷嗷呜呜女主有没有柳神?
Emperor of Heaven
Emperor Huang Tian, Emperor Meng Tian, a true immortal and an immortal king, are not even in the realm. Does that mean he can be called the Emperor of Heaven if there are no enemies in every realm? The protagonist has no sense of existence.
The first king of the ancient immortals, you are also the king and emperor of an era, and you are crazy and disgusting behind you.
You are a fellow Taoist. You are the pinnacle master of an era. Every ant you meet is a fellow Taoist brother. I don't deny that they will be powerful in the future, but they are weak and pitiful now. It's really ugly to do this when you're already writing about a fan. It used to be five stars, but now it's three stars.
Do you know what cause and effect is? For example, if the Immortal Emperor bows to an ordinary person who is not lucky enough, even if the Immortal Emperor does not have any ill intentions, the ordinary person will die on the spot. Did you know that the protagonist is the same as a SB, and his character is not as good as that of an ordinary person. If you want to read a mindless novel, you can come and read it.
The content of the article is not written in that way. Regarding the extreme ways, immortal ways, and character writing, it is still like a martial arts novel, and the output depends on shouting the names of skills.
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Official(294)Scraped 20d ago
The writing is very good. Why is it so lonely if there is no female protagonist? There should be three or four female protagonists.
The realm of pig's feet is too vague
He has not survived the Tribulation of the Immortal King, he is at the level of the Ten Evils, and his physical body is comparable to that of a giant. There is no Immortal King Daoguo who would risk his life to fight against a giant like Wu Shang. The stone was enough to defy the heavens. If he hadn't survived the Immortal King Tribulation, he would have been almost beaten to death by Ao Sheng and the other three. There is a fundamental difference between whether there is Immortal King Daoguo or not. It is almost the same as having unparalleled combat power. Theoretically, the giants can forcefully break through the Quasi-Immortal Emperor, and the gap in the middle is not even a little bit. It's completely impossible to survive in a shopping competition with a being like Wu Shang, who is not considered weak even among giants.
I feel like all fantasy novels have more than a dozen protagonists.
I really don't understand that the person who can cultivate to the level of the quasi-immortal emperor didn't rise to the top by stepping on the corpses of countless people. It's understandable to leapfrog and fight in the early stage, but I really don't understand the leapfrogging in the later stages. In a perfect world, how many people the Huangtian Emperor beats are all from the same level. How can you beat several people by yourself?
I don't understand the protagonist's world before he traveled through time. Is the protagonist's original world the earth world from the third film of Zhe Tian? Or is it an ordinary earth without any supernatural beings? I can't understand the martial arts brought by the protagonist's time travel
The more you write, the more rubbish you get
Why does the author have the nerve to charge for this? The protagonist, the Immortal Queen, becomes more and more rubbish as he writes. An Immortal King does not have the power of an Immortal King. He can only be brothers with this and that one all day long. The author can go back and read the daily life of the original king. If there is nothing to do, an Immortal King is wandering around and even calls himself brothers with people in the human realm. Meng Tianzheng turns the Immortal King into a bastard.
嗷嗷嗷嗷呜呜女主有没有柳神?
Emperor of Heaven
Emperor Huang Tian, Emperor Meng Tian, a true immortal and an immortal king, are not even in the realm. Does that mean he can be called the Emperor of Heaven if there are no enemies in every realm? The protagonist has no sense of existence.
The first king of the ancient immortals, you are also the king and emperor of an era, and you are crazy and disgusting behind you.
You are a fellow Taoist. You are the pinnacle master of an era. Every ant you meet is a fellow Taoist brother. I don't deny that they will be powerful in the future, but they are weak and pitiful now. It's really ugly to do this when you're already writing about a fan. It used to be five stars, but now it's three stars.
Do you know what cause and effect is? For example, if the Immortal Emperor bows to an ordinary person who is not lucky enough, even if the Immortal Emperor does not have any ill intentions, the ordinary person will die on the spot. Did you know that the protagonist is the same as a SB, and his character is not as good as that of an ordinary person. If you want to read a mindless novel, you can come and read it.
The content of the article is not written in that way. Regarding the extreme ways, immortal ways, and character writing, it is still like a martial arts novel, and the output depends on shouting the names of skills.
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I haven't read much of this genre. I was really out of books, so I was curious and clicked on it. I thought it was okay. I recommend you to read it. I was out of books, so I clicked on it and read it.




I haven't finished reading this book yet, but now that I've read it, I feel it's still okay. I think I've reached the level of a quasi-immortal emperor now. After all, the results are pretty good - I already have 10,000 monthly votes. Friends who are interested in perfection and are short of books can read this book.




This is one of the better-looking fan works I've seen, so go check it out 🉑️











