Elegy of the Tang Dynasty

After reading this, I just want to say one thing. The author's portrayal of Li Longji's later psychology is really good, but he puts the cart before the horse. The protagonist is still struggling to figure out what he wants to do after 500 chapters. In front of him, An Lushan, Yang Guozhong, Yang Yuhuan, and Li Heng showed that the wheel of history has changed. When I saw it later, I still didn't know what the protagonist was doing. I wrote 500 chapters based on historical evidence just to show how Li Longji tried to kill the Tang Dynasty in the later period. There are so many characterizations in the past just to follow the trend in the later stage? The author's writing skills are indeed good, but it can be frustrating no matter how you read it. I was so nervous that I was reading a story about destruction, killing, killing, and punishing. Fang Youde is a tool man who changes history, but the protagonist is watching the play nearby. In order to express the meaning of the word elegy, he actually held back 500 chapters and wrote the drama of the four kings' rebellion as a foreshadowing of the collapse of the building. Since he wanted to write an elegy, it resulted in The previous plot is as meaningless as paddling. In the later stage, no matter how well written the protagonist is, there is a high chance that it will end unfinished. The biggest poisonous point is that the protagonist is paddling. Chapter 500 has not yet been laid out, causing the reader to twist and turn no matter how much they read. It feels like they are reading the Destruction of the Tang Dynasty. The intention is no longer clear.

You write too slowly. Readers will collapse if you look at it this way. Although the author's writing is good, the coherence cannot keep up. Although the author wants to write about the Tang Dynasty, you add two protagonists to connect the past and the future. But what I see is that there are more than two protagonists. What will happen after this play?

Can you give some thought to the readers' feelings? If the author gets sick and gets into a car accident, the readers are very concerned about the author. Everyone supports the author's request for leave. The book has been written so far, so why can't it have more words or one more chapter? Also, I would like to remind the author that as a latecomer, Xiao Fang will definitely end the vassal separatism and the Tang Dynasty ahead of schedule. After all, Tubo massacred millions of Han people in Hexi. Since the Han Dynasty, the Hexi Corridor has become a place occupied by ethnic minorities. The sixteen states of Yanyun were ceded, the Gaoliang River was defeated, and the Dangxiang separatist regime became independent. . . . Wait anyone who goes back to that time would have tried to put an end to this.

Like other books that claim to be close to historical facts, large sections are plagiarized. In addition, since you want to express history, you should skip a few poems. This is very inconsistent with the character of your work. Politicians only have interests and means of distributing interests. Who cares about a stupid kid stealing a few poems? Even if he cares, it is good to keep him in a cage as a pet. 4 Stars is really high, mainly because the writing is fluent, but you lack the understanding and discussion of human nature. The fact that the emperor has different princes is due to the uniqueness of imperial power, but more importantly, the prince's subordinate officials need power, the stability of the political structure, etc. It is not that the emperor is crazy.

It is very special in time-travel novels. Father Fang means that if you kill one person, the world will be conquered, but he neglects to point out that the fault lies with the emperor, and Fang Zai thinks there is no hope. It is better to be Guo Ziyi than to be Anlu Mountain to rebuild the country. This is just like the aristocratic conflict during the Sui Dynasty.

How to use the "Southern Development Order"? Local wealthy people buy a development order (exploitation order: 5 acres, 10 acres, etc.) And buy as many acres as they want. The Datang Bingfeng Road Development Order is used for construction. It can not only receive money, develop the newly occupied land, but also transfer the growing population. Although there is a suspicion of making the place bigger, can it play a mitigating role in the situation of Datang at that time?

A good book, a masterpiece among history books.

Okay, okay, very good-looking, quite good-looking!

Is Fang Laila a robot? Is the protagonist's father a Tang fan who crossed over on his own initiative? The protagonist's passing through and even being stupid are related to this.

Diaomao, where is your book club? (When the group number comes, I will call you handsome )