Huben Lang

Was he threatened by his original family members at the beginning? Don't you even dare to fart? Does the original family have anything to do with pig trotters? How about killing everyone? The late Han Dynasty itself was an era of endless wars. It was about force, fighting for subordinates, and occupying territory! How come you managed to travel through time and become someone's son? A strong man is not threatened by anyone, he dares to fight, fight, and kill. As a time traveler, he has no worries and needs to be threatened by others? Is it still meaningful to be a filial son and a virtuous grandson?

The writing style is good, but the style of writing always has a sense of depression. It's really strange. It's obviously a systematic and refreshing article, but it doesn't seem to be smooth.

The character creation is okay, but there is a serious double standard. The princes of the Manchu Dynasty do not support the protagonist, but look down on him, but he has never been polite to others from the beginning to the end. I have never understood why Zhong Yao had to die. When someone came to declare a decree, he had to cripple him, or even directly kill this capable civil servant later on. War with the Xiongnu is even more childish. They have been enemies for hundreds of years, but 800 mares seduced the Xiongnu stallion, and the Xiongnu fell to their knees. No one cares about the Xiongnu horses? 800 Mares crippled tens of thousands of Xiongnu elites? Seeing this, I really can't stand it anymore. With 100+ chapters, readers abandoned the book and couldn't help but complain.

Everyone in your family and village slandered you as a bandit. You actually agreed to go down the mountain to join the army and die. Everyone thought you were a bandit, so couldn't you be a real bandit?

The more I wrote, the lazier I became. I ordered more than 300 chapters, but I couldn't finish reading a few chapters at a time. If you haven't fallen into the trap, don't. Always feel frustrated

In these 60 chapters, the time of the book has advanced by three days. Do you understand what a trivial book this is?

I have spent thousands of hours reading all the books in one go. Now I have forgotten many books after reading them for a few times and then I am too lazy to read them. I cannot sink my heart into them at all. The author is quite familiar with various ancient humanities, and his description of cold weapons is also good. I think the single biggest fault is that the author does not seem to understand the operating logic of bows and arrows very well. You have to watch the video of objective popular science introduction. The content is that the early portrayal of the protagonist is a bit too deliberate, which will make it difficult for some uninformed readers to read. It would be better to take it slowly or use various metaphors. Finally, I hope the update will be faster.

I've started writing the book. Have you hired someone to write it? Brothers, push me up! ! !

I fell in love with this book "Hu Ben Lang". I was too tired to catch up on it, so I read the author's "Chopping Horse" again. Personally I think it's very well written. It also has elements of cool writing, as well as details. It's still historical, and the plot is well written. Such content seems to be quite rare in China Literature's software. It's really rare. Overall, I feel that the author uses a deductive writing style that combines historical data and personal cognition within a framework, and his views are also quite refreshing. This is because there are very few novels from the late Eastern Han Dynasty that provide in-depth analysis from the perspective of studying valve valves and have reasonable logic and argumentation. I saw a lot of people squirting, but I personally didn't feel it. I found it quite exciting. Because the author has given reasons in many places, it makes sense when combined with the whole article. I think it is reasonable. If this is not reasonable, then in comparison, for example, in "Yongzheng Dynasty", as soon as the motivation of the fourth child or the plot cannot be advanced, Wu Sidao appears, and the logical flaws are promoted by Wu Sidao's character. What is a god-level story like "Yongzheng Dynasty"? Writing a story requires logic, and the transitions need to be consistent with the brain's cognitive repair reasons. But for example, in historical novels such as these, aren't the historical records we are familiar with most of the time illogical? I have read a story. There was a son of a slave girl and a petty official. His life had not been very good since he was a child, and he was looked down upon by all his peers. When he just entered adolescence, her aunt told her that her eldest nephew, your uncle, is the emperor, and your uncle has become a general... As a result, the male protagonist led troops to fight at the age of 18, and became a hussar general at the age of 20. To highlight the power of the male protagonist, a supporting role was specially added to him. This supporting role is a famous general, how awesome is he? A famous general whose name will be remembered forever, ended up going to war with the hero. The hero led a small force to chase n times the enemy's main force, but this awesome supporting character kept getting lost. If you don't know the history of the Han Dynasty, you will definitely think that this is really outrageous, random writing, and illogical... But the male protagonist is called Huo Qubing, and the supporting actor is called Li Guang. Let's look at Guan Yu's power in China. How many cheats must be used to make the world and the earth work together? Let's take a look at what stupid reasons Li Yan gave Li Yan who was holding him back after Zhuge Liang failed in his Northern Expedition? This is history. There is no logic, and it does not conform to the direction of the story in many people's heads, but this is history, and you can't blame the people who write history or God for not being able to write novels. So, whether you want to criticize or praise a book, I personally think it boils down to whether you can be on the same page as the author.

What I wrote before was pretty good, but what I wrote later was a bit taken for granted. No one is a fool. Cao Cao's attempt to hold the emperor hostage and control the princes did not go so smoothly.