The Heavens Begin with Buddhist Disciples

It looks good, it looks good. I want to ask the author if there is a female protagonist in this book?

The first part is very good, but I want to complain about the Douluo volume, but the complaints are not sarcastic, because you are writing about Buddhist disciples and not violent monks like Pili.

As soon as I saw the Buddhist disciples, I lost interest.

Come on, author, Zhu Tianwen doesn't want girls anymore, go go go go go.

This book is poisonous, I can't seem to stop it😕

It can be seen that the author wanted to write something, but the writing style was not enough. The protagonist, a time traveler, is not as good as the natives. It's hard to like, some plots are illogical and extremely brainless.

The plot is a bit jumpy and incoherent. The first few dozen scenes or the whole volume of Chu Liuxiang is very jumpy. I feel that whether I have read Chu Liuxiang or not, it is not very friendly. Whether the author said that the protagonist is still very weak and is accumulating background, or whatever, in short, I read it as written. It feels like a hammer in one thing and a stick in the other. After passing through the plot in the author's perception, adding a sense of presence to the protagonist, and then getting some gains. However, if this volume is not seeking a deep understanding as a whole, it is still okay to read it in its entirety. The protagonist is weak and accumulates knowledge. After all, most writings are like this nowadays. The ten or eight people who went to Maoshan to apprentice with Uncle Nine all used the plot to catch zombies and ghosts. From this aspect, the author's writing is still better than those others. There's not much to say about Qin Shi Mingyue. It's well written. It's not very jumpy, or a little jumpy in plot, but even people who haven't seen it won't be confused. It's relatable and feels coherent. Although the Douluo Dalu volume is said to be a failure by the author, I think it is still acceptable. Except for the handling of the soul ring power level and the comparison of subsequent realms, and some of the handling of the character Han Fei are a bit flawed, everything else is still acceptable. Whether you read it or not, you will still have the desire to read it. , You can follow the plot if you know how to read it. The most important thing about Zhu Tianwen is that no matter whether others have read the original work or not, you must let people know that your writing is very coherent, so that people will not be confused, confused, or confused. So I feel that this volume is okay except for slight flaws. There's not much to say about Yangshen Juan. Except for the feeling that there is something wrong with the power comparison between the Heaven-Shielding Scroll and the subsequent Heaven-Shielding Scroll, everything else is okay. However, if you don't see the Heaven-Shielding Scroll, this problem will not be too prominent, and everyone understands it differently. How do you understand it, then how you write it is actually understandable. But this volume also highlights a problem, The description of the battle situation and the description of the battle plot are a bit too complicated and repetitive, and the problem of the Heaven-Shading Scroll is more serious. The other plots are okay. When it comes to the battle scenes, it is too long and long. One battle is two or three chapters long, a lot of nonsense, and sometimes the writing is a bit jumpy. It's not smooth or smooth, and it doesn't mean that you can't write grand battle scenes, nor that you can't write about the reactions of others. But your writing is so awesome in this realm, and so awesome in the next realm, and still so awesome in the subsequent realms. Although the language and writing are different, they express similar things, but can you not There can be a performance of gradual increase, but the relationship of gradual increase cannot be seen at all, and the writing is rather verbose, which makes me very irritated when I see the description of this kind of battle scene, and when I see this, I feel that it has nothing to do with Buddhism, and I also feel that there is a little problem with the power system. The writing method can be old, but you have to make people interested and comfortable to read, and you can't make people irritated. I suggest the author streamline the description of the battle scenes and write an incremental relationship. Don't let this realm destroy the world and pierce the world, the next realm destroy the world and pierce the world, and the next realm still destroy the world.

Can you cross the two worlds of heaven and perfection?

I haven't read it yet, so I read the comments first and found that many people are discussing the issue of the heroine. Brother, please read clearly. This is a Buddhist theme. How can there be such a thing as a heroine and a bad relationship?

I'm wondering what would happen if the Demon Prince and the Rainstorm Heart Slave met 😘 Is the prince's little wife on the run? 😜😜