Covering the Sky: Dreaming Back to the Final Years of Mythology

Author, didn't you say before that this novel has multiple female protagonists? Why didn't you show up? There isn't even one person who has an affair with the protagonist.

The author Qin Yueyao, who is a goddess of Taiyin, is very suitable to be the heroine and the protagonist. She also knows each other and has great talents. She also has the foundation of the great road. She can develop relationships through some plots of heroes saving beauties, or she can explore secret places and be confused. The two of them lose their virginity together... The author's protagonist should be able to ascend to the Immortal Realm in advance. There is no need to stay in the world of Zhetian for millions of years. He can leave heirs and compete with the protagonists of later generations. He can prove the truth in the era of no emperors. The children born to the protagonist may also be chaotic bodies and can compete with Wu Shi. Anyway, the protagonist does not necessarily have only one child. One can be placed in Ye Fan's era and let them participate in the battles and friendships of the protagonist group in later generations.

It looks okay, but the first few pictures are full of vernacular. How can there be so much friendliness in a world where people from Zhetian cannibalize people? If you write about Zhetian, just write about Zhetian, and don't let characters from other places get in.

I wrote earlier that the fight between a group of six- and seven-year-old brats became the most intense competition in the sect. I guess these people were still wearing crotchless pants! At this age, if you don't practice well and lay the foundation, you have to fight with rookies to gain experience and write so many chapters. I mentioned how awesome the protagonist is, but in the end, the protagonist barely managed to win. I am really speechless. Also, I feel like I'm writing my year-end speech earlier. I'm just a kid and should finish my practice writing as soon as possible! Watching time traveler kids compete every day just acting cute is really not immersive.

The protagonist proves to be the Supreme Emperor! Establish your own training system! In my vision, I follow the Shinto world system (not believe in God)! Later, he collected all kinds of beauties with different talents and physiques to start a family! Let the descendants of the blood take the leading role in the training system! After the alternative enlightenment, go to Chaos to open up the world of Shinto and use it to prove the truth!

There are too many adjectives ## and ##. For example (Elder Xuanwei's voice echoed at the top of the mountain, with unquestionable majesty and kindness) It's really like me reading and writing essays to make up digital hydrology

The language is too childish, it is always encouraging, brainstorming, and there are signs of the Holy Mother. At level 4, it seems that no one has been killed, and Zhitian has to fight for everything. The outline of the story you wrote feels like playing house.

Generally, the pace is a bit slow. Others

There are some Taoist methods that are inappropriate for the time. After watching "Zhe Tian 3", I clearly know that the human form of the tribulation is still pretending to be a noob. It's disgusting.

What a fool. I can't stand it anymore. Writing an essay. So much nonsense