I Defected Before the Night of Genocide

Does the author have some misunderstandings about jounin? Seeing you fighting like a child makes you not feel immersive at all. Demura also said that there are not many jounin and there are not many jounin who can subdue you? I think there are at least 100,000 people in each village. Including family ninjas and civilian ninjas, there are at least 10,000 jounin. You tell me less. It also made me feel dry during the conversation. Especially when you are looking for Uchiha Fugaku, are you sure he will directly show you the kaleidoscope? (I am not a troll, it just makes my head hurt when I look at it)

After reading what you wrote, I am as good as three generations. If the third generation is so good, he will not watch the Uchiha genocide. You are really good Brother, think about it carefully, why is Naruto Uzumaki so miserable? When it comes to protecting him, no one with no brains would think so, right? Look at what happened to Naruto, brother, you are really awesome for writing the third generation so well.

Ke Ke Di. . . I thought it was an orthodox Naruto fanfic. . Sloppy

There is a big difference between what this author wrote and the plot of Naruto! The protagonist's series of actions are also very baffling!

It can be seen that the author of this book has put a lot of thought into it, but there are still some problems in some places. For example, when the protagonist Nimagatama is suspected of opening a kaleidoscope? If the kaleidoscope is turned on, then the protagonist must be a three-magatama; and it is a bit hasty to expose the future clip to Obito. The protagonist's strength is far inferior to Itachi. The protagonist's strength at the time is not worthy of Obito's task of setting up the Mizukage to test. As long as you beat the protagonist violently and then capture the genjutsu, how can you still act cute in front of you with so many bullshit. Not to mention the pitfall of the black reincarnation eye, is it possible that the protagonist's predecessor was so lucky or was he a reincarnation selected by Otsutsuki? Even if a fan wants to create something original, please abide by the cause and effect logic caused by factors such as Naruto's appearance in the plot.

You licked Konoha too much from behind, it's disgusting

There's nothing wrong with the first thirty chapters! It looks good, ever since the village was judged! It feels like it was written by two people! ! Adopt two children, raise them for a few months, and then use them to open their eyes? In the end, the indecision was not taken advantage of! There is also another mind in the protagonist's body, and after being helped, the protagonist is not worried at all! Well done! ! !

No wonder my grades are not that good, I don't want to die but I don't want to go dark to protect myself, I'm selfish but I want to be soft-hearted, I don't want to do anything but I compromise in the end. Is this all about opening a kaleidoscope? How is it possible? There is nothing readable in the whole story except that it screwed Naruto once.

You can still see it in front. But by Chapter 48, you can abandon the book after seeing the second round of the pistol. What is the most important thing about a book? It's simple and clear, but the result is weird and hard to understand. To be honest, moving abilities from other anime into Naruto is the most annoying thing. If you want others to watch other anime to watch Naruto, why should I watch you Naruto? I'll just go watch other anime. You just give the protagonist Kaleidoscope the simple and clear ability. One ability has been explained for almost 1 chapter. Is it still okay? A pair of glasses can reverse all ninjutsu Amplify one eye to expand the power of ninjutsu, c becomes a, b becomes s No kaleidoscope is invincible, so why else would you need the Samsara Eye? What's the nine magatama for? It makes sense. As a result, after chapter 48, I was upset.

This book is okay, but updates are too slow.