I, Yu Uchiha, Am Devoted to Cultivating Immortality
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The world of Naruto is a hopeless world. Even the protagonist is a chess piece that has nothing to do with victory or defeat, let alone ordinary time travellers. Uchiha Yuu just wanted to eat something good, drink something good, and watch the sunset and moonrise with the kitten. By the way, become an immortal and beat the chess players to death. I'm not bothering you, so why are you having trouble with me? ----Uchiha Yuu does not practice magic, he practices Taoism and nature. What is Tao following nature? Yuu's answer is simple: suck in the natural energy, it will hurt and it will feel good.
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Official(75)Scraped 20d ago
"Dedicated to cultivating immortality"? ? Teach Obito and Shisui every day... Depending on the situation, I will also teach Itachi Senjutsu... Poison
Say good things in the comments. What's better? What's better?
Don't talk nonsense! Those of you who want to talk about good writing should first reflect on yourselves, whether you have read hard over the years. . . A very nagging book! ! Each action takes half a chapter to a chapter to explain why it is done. The author may think that his readers are imbeciles. . There is no amount of thinking that needs to be fed by the author himself. The details are as follows: After discovering the ambush, the psychological activities were exhausted for a chapter, explaining to the ninja cat what he was going to do and why he was so dry for half a chapter, and finally starting to assassinate, but he took the initiative to express emotion halfway through? ? ? Extremely poisonous
There are too many private activities and a lot of my own second designs. The key is that I also changed the original settings.
It's so long-winded. Just cook dinner and it's gone in one chapter. Absorbing natural energy. Sharingan is promoted. Chakra is wiped out? Can a dog's nose be unbearable if a corpse is exploded? You don't explain anything. Could you please tell me why my nose is temporarily disabled? How could a dog of this breed go to war? There is also the absorption of natural energy. There are no conditions, but it is so inexplicable. Then the natural energy is also divided into multiple attributes. . . It feels like the author has never read the original work, only read some fan fiction, and then wrote it himself. 8.3 Points. I really don't know how he got it.
If you don't know how to write, don't write hard.
There are many places that leave people speechless. If you don't understand what it means to be an immortal, don't write about it forcefully. Whether you are a mortal cultivating immortality or a rebellious immortal, which protagonist of cultivating immortality is like this? Fight when it's time to fight, retreat when it's time to, hesitate, look forward and backward, and still be a Uchiha cultivator. I think you are a Danzo cultivator. Ah, no, Danzo is still very decisive. You, the protagonist, can't touch Danzo at all. [Emot=default,01/]
The second set is too outrageous! Damn it! ! !
The author's second design directly made Susanoo's magical skill useless. Susanoo is just a chakra aggregation, and there is no mention in the original work that he can share pain with the user. As a result, you, a fan author, is fucking around here. Just opening up a Four Purple Yang Formation can make the protagonist furious in pain, what's the point of that? ! Susanoo starts pain sharing with the user. If Susanoo is damaged, the user will also feel pain. This is so unclean and nonsense! There is no sharing of pain, this is a magical skill that can fight and resist. With pain sharing, it can hurt you to death even if it doesn't kill you. The added attack power is not enough to cover the side effects of becoming a huge target. Who dares to use it, so what's the use? Block damage? Your body is not injured, but the pain alone can kill you! ! ! !
Highly toxic. To suppress it forcefully, it is better to write that the protagonist has just traveled through time. Besides, in this state of mind, he is still a god.
The very beginning of the first chapter blew me away and I didn't dare to read further. Thanks to you, I'll run away first~
Dedicated to cultivating immortality? But don't practice?
If you are dedicated to cultivating immortality but do not practice, what is water? Naruto can write up to 200 chapters at most, and I guess he has trouble writing even 200 chapters. Isn't QQ reading just money? [Emot=default,32/]
The collapse of the middle road
It was good at first, but suddenly it got weird when I arrived in the country of Sichuan. Strength no longer allows for a low profile. The so-called plans and layouts are like playing house, with no regard for logic. It feels like as long as you hold Shisui in your hand, it is equivalent to getting the sleeping dragon and phoenix chick, your destiny.
It's okay in the early stages, but becomes less interesting later on. 1 The logic is confusing. Metkai did nothing to help the protagonist achieve enlightenment. 2. The protagonist's words and deeds are inconsistent. On the surface, he is stubborn, but in fact, he seeks death from time to time.
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Official(75)Scraped 20d ago
"Dedicated to cultivating immortality"? ? Teach Obito and Shisui every day... Depending on the situation, I will also teach Itachi Senjutsu... Poison
Say good things in the comments. What's better? What's better?
Don't talk nonsense! Those of you who want to talk about good writing should first reflect on yourselves, whether you have read hard over the years. . . A very nagging book! ! Each action takes half a chapter to a chapter to explain why it is done. The author may think that his readers are imbeciles. . There is no amount of thinking that needs to be fed by the author himself. The details are as follows: After discovering the ambush, the psychological activities were exhausted for a chapter, explaining to the ninja cat what he was going to do and why he was so dry for half a chapter, and finally starting to assassinate, but he took the initiative to express emotion halfway through? ? ? Extremely poisonous
There are too many private activities and a lot of my own second designs. The key is that I also changed the original settings.
It's so long-winded. Just cook dinner and it's gone in one chapter. Absorbing natural energy. Sharingan is promoted. Chakra is wiped out? Can a dog's nose be unbearable if a corpse is exploded? You don't explain anything. Could you please tell me why my nose is temporarily disabled? How could a dog of this breed go to war? There is also the absorption of natural energy. There are no conditions, but it is so inexplicable. Then the natural energy is also divided into multiple attributes. . . It feels like the author has never read the original work, only read some fan fiction, and then wrote it himself. 8.3 Points. I really don't know how he got it.
If you don't know how to write, don't write hard.
There are many places that leave people speechless. If you don't understand what it means to be an immortal, don't write about it forcefully. Whether you are a mortal cultivating immortality or a rebellious immortal, which protagonist of cultivating immortality is like this? Fight when it's time to fight, retreat when it's time to, hesitate, look forward and backward, and still be a Uchiha cultivator. I think you are a Danzo cultivator. Ah, no, Danzo is still very decisive. You, the protagonist, can't touch Danzo at all. [Emot=default,01/]
The second set is too outrageous! Damn it! ! !
The author's second design directly made Susanoo's magical skill useless. Susanoo is just a chakra aggregation, and there is no mention in the original work that he can share pain with the user. As a result, you, a fan author, is fucking around here. Just opening up a Four Purple Yang Formation can make the protagonist furious in pain, what's the point of that? ! Susanoo starts pain sharing with the user. If Susanoo is damaged, the user will also feel pain. This is so unclean and nonsense! There is no sharing of pain, this is a magical skill that can fight and resist. With pain sharing, it can hurt you to death even if it doesn't kill you. The added attack power is not enough to cover the side effects of becoming a huge target. Who dares to use it, so what's the use? Block damage? Your body is not injured, but the pain alone can kill you! ! ! !
Highly toxic. To suppress it forcefully, it is better to write that the protagonist has just traveled through time. Besides, in this state of mind, he is still a god.
The very beginning of the first chapter blew me away and I didn't dare to read further. Thanks to you, I'll run away first~
Dedicated to cultivating immortality? But don't practice?
If you are dedicated to cultivating immortality but do not practice, what is water? Naruto can write up to 200 chapters at most, and I guess he has trouble writing even 200 chapters. Isn't QQ reading just money? [Emot=default,32/]
The collapse of the middle road
It was good at first, but suddenly it got weird when I arrived in the country of Sichuan. Strength no longer allows for a low profile. The so-called plans and layouts are like playing house, with no regard for logic. It feels like as long as you hold Shisui in your hand, it is equivalent to getting the sleeping dragon and phoenix chick, your destiny.
It's okay in the early stages, but becomes less interesting later on. 1 The logic is confusing. Metkai did nothing to help the protagonist achieve enlightenment. 2. The protagonist's words and deeds are inconsistent. On the surface, he is stubborn, but in fact, he seeks death from time to time.
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