Konoha: This Uchiha is a Bit Too Much

To be honest, the four most disgusting people in Hokage are Sarutobi (hypocritical double standard), Danzo (evil), Obito (evil) Itachi (disgusting damn wretch), Jiraiya (hypocritical double standard), and Naruto (hypocritical double standard). Acceptable rebuttal! I won't talk about the first few. Jiraiya (he is still a 60-year-old kid! What's wrong with him? It's all for Konoha, the village can't be in chaos!) Is cowardly, pedantic, double standards, and hypocritical. Naruto (Uncle Ningci, don't worry! I will reform Hinata) Neji??? Who is it??? Wakada's bed is so moist! Sasuke: I want revenge! Naruto: Haas! Don't you know you're wrong? What are you talking about?? I don't understand. You have to believe that people understand each other. In the world of Naruto, Otsutsuki Kaguya started by planting a sacred tree (converter), absorbing the planet's ley lines = dragon veins = natural energy, bearing fruits, stealing the fruits, half of them achieved immortality, and half of them turned into six-path brothers. Kaguya unites to kill all the monsters 🧞‍♂️The bandit bully, the Six Paths brothers were tricked by a toad into sealing Kaguya. The six brothers had a premonition that their mother was really divided by alien enemies. The Six Paths created a pure land, passed down the chakra device, and escaped by feigning death. His brother regretfully sat on the moon to accompany his mother. The Six Paths secretly hide in the Pure Land to harvest chakra. The secret arrangement is for the two sons (chakra devices) to constantly fight to cause war and attract attention. The above is the conclusion. Divine tree = energy converter (chakra is easy for most people to absorb) The original Naruto planet can produce 2 fruits. As long as the converter is obtained, even ordinary people can be immortal. The remaining energy of the planet is about 1 fruit. After absorbing the planet, there is a high probability that it will be depleted. As a time traveler, selfishness should be the most correct choice. (I have 100 million, and I don't mind throwing away tens of thousands to anyone who pleases me. I have no money and no strength, but I have to fight for the indigenous NPCs. I'm sick!) So if I really want to travel through Naruto, my first goal is to be immortal, and my second goal is to grow tall and beautiful. It's all about soul control, cultivating sex slaves, etc. What a loli, my dear sister! (Don't talk to me about crime) The famous nobles probably have more fun than you. After all, it's my turn to be a time traveler! Good and evil come from the heart. Third, as someone who has received ideological education, when I came to a small country, I wouldn't say kill them all. At least most of the people are ignorant. If you want to do good things, wait until you complete goal 1.2, Kill the upper class according to your mood, publish books, and promote modern social theory. After 3.5 Years, naturally most of the hatred will be gone, and there will be mutual trust between people! (Relative trust) After all, it is impossible for the world to have the absolute mutual trust that Naruto said. At this time, the foundation for peace has been reached!

First of all, I haven't finished the free chapters yet, so please ignore me if I say it will be better later. Let's talk about it briefly. I've always been frustrated, plotted, and established. It's really not pleasant to play like this in the hot-blooded manga. For example, if you want to replace Fugaku as the clan leader, you will show the kaleidoscope and single out all the dissatisfaction by yourself, and make sure it is done properly. Look at the pile of defenses you gave, and you also said that you look down on Itachi and look down on the top management of Konoha. You have become the person you hate the most... Finally, I don't know if it has been changed later. There are too many jingles and jingles. It's really annoying. Do you think you are trying to be clever? No, it's both dramatic and annoying, and combined with the hypocritical and stupid character of the protagonist, I really can't like it.

Let's talk about the advantages first The previous chapter was okay. The heroine was just a Boruto character, and I didn't like her very much at first. But the author's portrayal was good. She didn't write much, but she was brilliant. She dared to change the plot. This is something that many fan fiction authors don't dare to do. I think this aspect surpasses more than half of fan works. Talking about insufficient Ever since the Night of the Kyuubi, it has become more and more confusing, and it is very messy. I can't feel what the protagonist is going to do. He often moves here and there. I haven't digested the rewards given by the system before I go to the next task. The characters are seriously distorted. Danzo is Yin, Obito is crazy, and Minato is very Sunshine, but it does not mean that he has no IQ, and it seriously weakens Hei Ze's investigative ability. There are many things that Hei Ze should know in advance and make arrangements. As a result, Hei Ze often doesn't know anything, and only comes out to say a few words after the incident is over. This is not in line with the characteristics of the original old silver coin. Now it's Chelulu who talks back and forth. Summary Let's get some dry food. It's a big quantity and it's more than fifty points a piece. It's definitely enough words to pass the time. Ps: There are a lot of typos and omissions in the back. It is speculated that it may be voice input.

There are obvious fallacies in the book's understanding of character motivations

It's so average, I don't even know how it could get an 8. How to say it? A piece of shit. When you have strength, you still want to blend in with others. Shouldn't it be that I am a native of the motherland? The Eternal Kaleidoscope, or Uchiha Light. Basically, they are all super shadow-level. Konoha can't stop it. Two people can kill an entire village. What kind of conspiracy is there to integrate into Konoha? Is it necessary? At most, the life of the 4th Hokage and his wife, or the life of Senju, would be enough. After all, Sasuke and Naruto are from the 6th Path. What other plots are you playing? Would he play with you under absolute power? The fist is everything. If you don't obey, kill them all until you obey. Don't tell me that civilians are the most important. In the extraordinary world, the strong are everything. There is no such thing as a group of people who can defeat an extraordinary person.

There are too many poisonous points in forcing Obito to be blackened. I recommend you not to waste your time reading it.

Waste, a lot of nonsense! How many people did you ask to help you talk?

Is the author mute? If you don't correct the bad things that so many people say, it would be better not to write them.

The most annoying thing about writing novels is that they are written with subjective consciousness. They are forced to rely on a lot of excuses. They are cannon fodder and they comment on this and that. They are a time traveler and there are plug-ins and do not upgrade quickly. They are still criticizing. This criticism and that. I am really speechless. Luoluo talks a lot and it is not exciting at all. How can a time traveler have so much sense of belonging? You cannon fodder doesn't think about how to upgrade to the one who controls the heavens and the earth. Besides, who is the one who can't clean up Obito? I'm washing, Uzumaki Naruto is washing, what does that have to do with you? What else can I say about this? But what does this kind of thing have to do with your main plot? A person who has cheats and criticizes this and that is really speechless.

To be honest, the four most disgusting people in Hokage are Sarutobi (hypocritical double standard), Danzo (evil), Obito (evil) Itachi (disgusting damn wretch), Jiraiya (hypocritical double standard), and Naruto (hypocritical double standard). Acceptable rebuttal! I won't talk about the first few. Jiraiya (he is still a 60-year-old kid! What's wrong with him? It's all for Konoha, the village can't be in chaos!) Is cowardly, pedantic, double standards, and hypocritical. Naruto (Uncle Ningci, don't worry! I will reform Hinata) Neji??? Who is it??? Wakada's bed is so moist! Sasuke: I want revenge! Naruto: Haas! Don't you know you're wrong? What are you talking about?? I don't understand. You have to believe that people understand each other.