Traveling Through Three Generations: Orochimaru, You Become the Hokage

It took all the efforts of the villain to catch up with Konoha thanks to Beiruhu, a half-assed scientist. My evaluation is to kneel down and sing Conquer for Beiruhu.

How can I put it, after reading more than 40 chapters, I feel that it has little to do with Naruto, so I used the name of Naruto, and the part between Jiraiya and Tsunade was very awkward. Tsunade doesn't like Jiraiya, it's just friendship. Jiraiya likes Tsunade, but he has a lustful mentality. More fun ~ Both of them are suitable to be single like in the original work. Almost everyone except Danzo, the style of painting has been completely changed. It is really uncomfortable to watch ~ The plot where the whole village misunderstood the protagonist and Noonoyu got together is also very awkward and difficult for people to understand...

What about the author's new book? Although this late book is not guaranteed, the front part is still good. I must write a good outline for the next book and cannot compromise with the editor.

Neutral rating. The author's writing is very good, the plot design is also very reasonable, and the logic is good. The subject matter is relatively new. Although it is a Naruto fanfic, the starting point is a group portrait in the court style. The characters are generally in line with the original Naruto novel and will not be too dramatic. The disadvantage is that the protagonist has a slightly low sense of presence and the plot pace is a bit slow. Although the author's writing is good and the text can make people smile, the pace is too slow and it is not enjoyable enough. This slow pace is somewhat unsuitable for the Naruto theme and gives people a feeling of being unable to ignite.

What should I say? It's a pity that I saw Chapter 9. The author's writing is okay, the dialogue is okay, and he tries his best to fit the characters. It is considered very well written. But I personally don't like fandom's adaptation of the original setting. It can be expanded and adapted in various directions where the original work is unclear or unclear, but I personally don't like making magical changes to places where the original work is clear or can be deduced. The lifespan of a ninja is not short, at least it can be said to be a normal lifespan. After all, it seems that the village of Konoha was only six or seventy years old, and there were only three battles, all of which resulted in unnatural deaths. This cannot be regarded as an argument for chakra squeezing the ninja's body. Moreover, Ohnoki is very old, but he can still fight, and Sandai is also an old man, and his combat level is not weak either. It can only be said that chakra does not greatly increase lifespan like cultivating immortals, but it can also maintain the body to a certain extent. As long as you are not killed or seriously injured that cannot be healed, you can still be energetic at least until you are eighty years old.

The idea is quite interesting. But somewhat idealistic, Orochimaru seems to have been robbed and admires the modern red cause. The male protagonist doesn't have much presence, he's more of a group portrait

It feels like a beautiful dream that only Infinite Tsukuyomi can have. In the dream, everyone has a bright future. But the bitter rain will eventually fall, just like the novel will eventually end, and the dream will also have an end.

Before reading, please note that this is a group portrait novel. There are not many roles for the three generations, only a few key points are mentioned. On the contrary, Orochimaru is really just a tool. He is indispensable in every plot of executing plans, researching and developing science and technology. The plot is very interesting. The author is very good. He can hide his clues for thousands of miles, and most of the pitfalls he writes are self-explanatory. The ending of the story is also unexpected and reasonable. Drama through seal lock line – – – – After the Nine-Tails Rebellion, after traveling through three generations, Orochimaru made the decisive decision to become the fifth Hokage, and proposed a joint policy to preserve the Land of Fire to gather the strength of the whole country. Black Zetsu asked Obito to unite with the other four countries to develop a free alliance. Scientists from both sides Orochimaru and Beiruhu science competition. During this period, Orochimaru's masterpiece of ninjutsu science, Satsuki, was born. The Goku ninjas and Otsutsuki opened the Box of Bliss to open the age of gods. The gods Madara fought hard against the fifth, sixth and third generation Hokages before the two sides negotiated a peace. After a period of peace, the real protagonist Naruto grew up and became a partner with Mitsuyue. Because of the dragon-veined flying thunder god Kunai left behind by the fourth generation, Mitsuyue found that it was impossible for her and Naruto no matter which time and space, defected to join the Kong Ninja side and went to infinite parallel time and space to find a way. However, those of us who are familiar with Naruto know that Mitsuki is a Boruto character, and Mitsuki can only usher in a collapse that will lead to the destruction of the world. Finally, with the help of the third generation, Naruto returned to death and reversed time and space, allowing everyone to return to before Mitsuyuki's defection with their memories, a happy ending.

It's okay. I felt quite comfortable reading it. And the author, can you tell me how many vests you have? Vests are popular these days, right? I found that many authors like to wear vests. The vests are one after another. I feel that you can play eunuchs by wearing a vest, right? If you are not used to wearing a vest and writing about it, then you are a eunuch. If you did it, can you tell me that this book is also your vest? I hope you can continue writing. I feel like you must have a lot of vests sitting here. Let's talk about it.

Did the author still fail to withstand the pressure from the editor? It's such a pity