[Shen Nong's Test of Poison]
【神农试毒】
Various seedlings with the potential to become gods
2我在西游的天仙之路
Youyutian
When Jiang Yuan traveled through time, it was the time of the second Huaguoshan War, and there were still five or six hundred years left before he could go west to obtain Buddhist scriptures. During the six hundred years, Wang Mang changed his dynasty, Liu Xiu restored the Han Dynasty, Zhang Daoling entered Shu and established a religion, Taiping Dao spread across the nine continents, and the world was mysterious. Why is the Dragon King of Jinghe so unruly? How did the six-eared macaque attain enlightenment? Why is there only the Bull Demon King left among the six demon saints? The three emperors ruled the world and the five emperors determined the ethics. What world did they rule and what ethics did they determine? How to seek the Tianlu, how to cultivate the Immortal Way, what kind of Hunyuan Dao Fruit does Yuqing Yuanshi Tianzun talk about? Gods, devils, five insects and five immortals, four major continents, ten continents and three islands... The world of Journey to the West has its own splendor and splendor, so there is no need for conspiracy theories.
When Jiang Yuan traveled through time, it was the time of the second Huaguoshan War, and there were still five or six hundred years left before he could go west to obtain Buddhist scriptures. During the six hundred years, Wang Mang changed his dynasty, Liu Xiu restored the Han Dynasty, Zhang Daoling entered Shu and established a religion, Taiping Dao spread across the nine continents, and the world was mysterious. Why is the Dragon King of Jinghe so unruly? How did the six-eared macaque attain enlightenment? Why is there only the Bull Demon King left among the six demon saints? The three emperors ruled the world and the five emperors determined the ethics. What world did they rule and what ethics did they determine? How to seek the Tianlu, how to cultivate the Immortal Way, what kind of Hunyuan Dao Fruit does Yuqing Yuanshi Tianzun talk about? Gods, devils, five insects and five immortals, four major continents, ten continents and three islands... The world of Journey to the West has its own splendor and splendor, so there is no need for conspiracy theories.
[Good Grass]★★★★ Xuanqi Xuanqi, the protagonist has a small plug-in, which is not very powerful. It uses what the protagonist sees, hears and experiences on his journey to seek immortality to slowly reveal the magnificent veil of this world, rather than just dumping the settings in one go.
3聊斋:从继承道观开始
A Little Wolf Wolf
New book: "Cultivation of Immortality in Troubled Times, I Have a Steel Scale" has been released. In the beginning, you inherit a Taoist temple, one person, one temple, one chat room, the method of immortality, Tiangang and earthly evil spirits to protect the Taoism, fox demons, ghosts, zombies... The chaotic world of Liguo. If you collect one ghost, you will be rewarded with one of the seventy-two earthly arts - Tongyou; if you collect one demon spirit, you will be rewarded with one of the seventy-two earthly arts - demon slaying; if you collect one weapon spirit, you will be rewarded with one of the seventy-two earthly arts - swordsmanship;...
New book: "Cultivation of Immortality in Troubled Times, I Have a Steel Scale" has been released. In the beginning, you inherit a Taoist temple, one person, one temple, one chat room, the method of immortality, Tiangang and earthly evil spirits to protect the Taoism, fox demons, ghosts, zombies... The chaotic world of Liguo. If you collect one ghost, you will be rewarded with one of the seventy-two earthly arts - Tongyou; if you collect one demon spirit, you will be rewarded with one of the seventy-two earthly arts - demon slaying; if you collect one weapon spirit, you will be rewarded with one of the seventy-two earthly arts - swordsmanship;...
[Grain]★★★☆ It's well written. The main character has a more complete character and it would be nice if it were a little richer. Let's see how it develops in the later stages. The plot of this book is okay and can be read in one sitting. So far, there are no bad points. It's just that the author's writing of fighting scenes and techniques is not very good. I hope to improve it more.
4修仙模拟:开局全点气运了
Burning Building And Lying In Snow
[Relaxing and humorous] [Bo Jun smiles] ---- [Name: Zhang Qin] [Available attribute points: 99999999] [Comprehension: 1] [Qualification: 1] [Luck: 99999987] [Appearance: 10] The game begins! ... [You drove an ox-drawn cart and left Fuyun Town, where you were born, and began your journey to seek immortality] [You are lucky to encounter cold tobacco that has been growing for three hundred years] [You are lucky to have encountered a hundred-year-old Polygonum multiflorum growing in human form] [You are lucky, there is a real Millennium Blood Glazed Flower on the front left] [You are lucky...]
[Relaxing and humorous] [Bo Jun smiles] ---- [Name: Zhang Qin] [Available attribute points: 99999999] [Comprehension: 1] [Qualification: 1] [Luck: 99999987] [Appearance: 10] The game begins! ... [You drove an ox-drawn cart and left Fuyun Town, where you were born, and began your journey to seek immortality] [You are lucky to encounter cold tobacco that has been growing for three hundred years] [You are lucky to have encountered a hundred-year-old Polygonum multiflorum growing in human form] [You are lucky, there is a real Millennium Blood Glazed Flower on the front left] [You are lucky...]
[Hay]★★☆ What are you doing? This way of adding some points doesn't look like something a normal person would do, okay? I also have problems with my expressiveness and I feel very uncomfortable.
5聊斋:我竟成了普渡慈航
Blood Glitz
The selfless Sanskrit sound saves the world, the life-threatening Sanskrit sound destroys powerful enemies! Amitabha, follow Pudu Cihang and save the world with great compassion! What, I was reborn and became a monk! This monk is not only fake, he is not a human being! Donor, my master wants you to help me practice.
The selfless Sanskrit sound saves the world, the life-threatening Sanskrit sound destroys powerful enemies! Amitabha, follow Pudu Cihang and save the world with great compassion! What, I was reborn and became a monk! This monk is not only fake, he is not a human being! Donor, my master wants you to help me practice.
[Grain]★★★☆ The protagonist carries a luck panel and is reborn as Cihang Pudu, the centipede spirit in Liaozhai. Starting from Liaozhai, the world view created by the author is larger. The writing is online and the plot is not procrastinating. It is a very interesting demon cultivator.
6The First Fahai in History
Xianxia史上第一法海
Maybe Probably
Fahai, the youngest abbot in the history of Jinshan Temple, made a big mistake by subduing a spider spirit who practiced under the Buddha just after he took over. Fahai also suffered from inner demons. In order to completely get rid of the inner demons, Fahai locked himself in the cold cellar of Jinshan Temple for five years. In the last year, there was a reminder in his mind every day. Mind + 10 Constitution + 200 Wisdom Root + 15... At first he thought it was the sequelae of the inner demon, but later he was surprised to find that these increasing attributes really made him stronger and stronger. Five years later, Fahai took over Jinshan Temple again. Facing the prestigious Master Yang who came all the way from the Western Regions. Fahai: You are so bold and evil, I can tell at a glance that you are not a human being. The mighty heavenly dragon, the World Honored Ksitigarbha, the Prajna Buddhas, and the Prajna Bama Kong have appeared! Carry forward: Master, spare your life! His true form suddenly appeared and turned into a giant centipede. Facing the green snake, Fahai said: Snake demon, I want you to help me practice! Several years later, I met the Tathagata in Leiyin Temple in the West. Tathagata: Fahai, you are too murderous. Fa Hai: Shut up, Tathagata Tathagata, I want you to show your true colors. Tathagata died! This book is invincible, welcome to try it.
Fahai, the youngest abbot in the history of Jinshan Temple, made a big mistake by subduing a spider spirit who practiced under the Buddha just after he took over. Fahai also suffered from inner demons. In order to completely get rid of the inner demons, Fahai locked himself in the cold cellar of Jinshan Temple for five years. In the last year, there was a reminder in his mind every day. Mind + 10 Constitution + 200 Wisdom Root + 15... At first he thought it was the sequelae of the inner demon, but later he was surprised to find that these increasing attributes really made him stronger and stronger. Five years later, Fahai took over Jinshan Temple again. Facing the prestigious Master Yang who came all the way from the Western Regions. Fahai: You are so bold and evil, I can tell at a glance that you are not a human being. The mighty heavenly dragon, the World Honored Ksitigarbha, the Prajna Buddhas, and the Prajna Bama Kong have appeared! Carry forward: Master, spare your life! His true form suddenly appeared and turned into a giant centipede. Facing the green snake, Fahai said: Snake demon, I want you to help me practice! Several years later, I met the Tathagata in Leiyin Temple in the West. Tathagata: Fahai, you are too murderous. Fa Hai: Shut up, Tathagata Tathagata, I want you to show your true colors. Tathagata died! This book is invincible, welcome to try it.
[Good Grass]★★★★ It's great to write! It's also fun to read! It's just that the cultivation is unclear and the realm is unclear! Everything else is fine. It's a good Fahai book! Don't overwrite it, and don't bring too many modern language and actions into it, because it's not a time-travel novel, and Fahai's description is still within the acceptable range of readers! Come on, author!
7Zoo Code of Conduct
Suspense动物园守则录
Green Bamboo Orz
If you went to a zoo and the staff gave you a small, inconsequential brochure, would you read it carefully? Why are there strange regulations and rules written in the manual here? All the regulations seem to contradict and oppose each other. Who should you trust? Why him? Why Qiu Ping? As an ordinary person, Qiu Ping can only survive step by step in this zoo... (The protagonist's IQ is not high at the beginning) Group number: 832304618
If you went to a zoo and the staff gave you a small, inconsequential brochure, would you read it carefully? Why are there strange regulations and rules written in the manual here? All the regulations seem to contradict and oppose each other. Who should you trust? Why him? Why Qiu Ping? As an ordinary person, Qiu Ping can only survive step by step in this zoo... (The protagonist's IQ is not high at the beginning) Group number: 832304618
[Grain]★★★ It seems a bit interesting. The comment section is a weird story expanded according to a certain rule. I just don't know if it's because the story hasn't finished unfolding yet or because I didn't understand it clearly and I'm still a little confused.
8I Can Melt All Things
Science Fiction我能融炼万物
Reunion Red Pandas
Travel to a world where monsters are raging and those with bloodline rule the roost. The monsters and humans in this world are all descendants of ancient gods and beasts. As long as they awaken the blood of their ancestors, they can gain powerful power. . .
Travel to a world where monsters are raging and those with bloodline rule the roost. The monsters and humans in this world are all descendants of ancient gods and beasts. As long as they awaken the blood of their ancestors, they can gain powerful power. . .
[Hay]★★☆ There is no level or realm at all. The realm is calculated based on boxing strength. The level is determined by the level. There is no cultivation method at all. I rely on exercise methods such as sit-ups and push-ups and taking medicine to achieve breakthroughs. I don't know what to say.
9My Leisurely Life in the Courtyard
Multiverse我在四合院中的悠闲生活
Firewire Luoliancheng
I am Lin Fan, an ordinary person, an office worker. Unexpectedly, I ended up in a film and television drama in Siheyuan due to an accident. The people here are nice to talk to but not honest in their actions. The only way to do everything is to rely on yourself. Now that you have come, make peace with it. Once you have come, just live in this world. Marry a wife, have a few children, and live a leisurely life. There is no need to come to me, there is no point in coming to me. If you can help, then help. Forget the rest, I still have to live my own life.
I am Lin Fan, an ordinary person, an office worker. Unexpectedly, I ended up in a film and television drama in Siheyuan due to an accident. The people here are nice to talk to but not honest in their actions. The only way to do everything is to rely on yourself. Now that you have come, make peace with it. Once you have come, just live in this world. Marry a wife, have a few children, and live a leisurely life. There is no need to come to me, there is no point in coming to me. If you can help, then help. Forget the rest, I still have to live my own life.
[Hay]★★ It's too watery. Why is it watery? Other reviews must have said it. It's not that big of a difference. To sum up, I just can't get excited. I started flipping through the catalog halfway through. I didn't want to get involved at first, so I just acted like a transparent person. But in the end, I changed my mind and started to act like a good person. I'm really convinced.
10I Really Don't Want to Be the Lord of the World
Science Fiction我真不想当灭世主
Nothingness And Displacement
The new book "Absurd Games of Performance Artists" has been released, please appreciate it -------- Riel, a sophisticated and self-interested psychiatrist, enters a fully simulated consciousness game called [Hyperreality] at the sincere invitation of the game producer. Thought transmission, brainwashing speech, self-hypnosis, and the power of oath, in a game world where classes are highly solidified, Riel awakens the profession of "Expressor" and embarks on a journey of subversion. But the deeper you go, the weirder it becomes, the more you know, the more you fear! [Inner Society], [Future Infinite Monopoly Company], [Thinking Reorganization], [Consciousness Source Realm], he has unknowingly entered an intracranial war that transcends dimensions! Genes and memories, ideology and life continuation, the ship of Theseus slowly sails towards the unknown sea to explore the ultimate end of the world.
The new book "Absurd Games of Performance Artists" has been released, please appreciate it -------- Riel, a sophisticated and self-interested psychiatrist, enters a fully simulated consciousness game called [Hyperreality] at the sincere invitation of the game producer. Thought transmission, brainwashing speech, self-hypnosis, and the power of oath, in a game world where classes are highly solidified, Riel awakens the profession of "Expressor" and embarks on a journey of subversion. But the deeper you go, the weirder it becomes, the more you know, the more you fear! [Inner Society], [Future Infinite Monopoly Company], [Thinking Reorganization], [Consciousness Source Realm], he has unknowingly entered an intracranial war that transcends dimensions! Genes and memories, ideology and life continuation, the ship of Theseus slowly sails towards the unknown sea to explore the ultimate end of the world.
[Ambrosia]★★★★★ Surreal game writing. A genius psychiatrist suffering from hyperamnesia got tired of playing all the popular games on the market and accepted an invitation from a mysterious man from another world. He entered a game world called "Surreal Paradise" and became the humblest miner in a highly hierarchical and highly authoritarian biotechnology society. He relied on his outstanding personal talent to kill the overseer, and then incited other miners to riot through an excellent speech. He advanced into a self-created professional "Expressor" who can interfere with reality through language, and embarked on the road to destruction. The setting is very interesting. Players can gain experience through the impact of different actions on the game world based on their own talents and professions, such as miners digging for ores, law enforcers maintaining order, archaeologists identifying relics, etc. The experience gained can be used to improve the player's biological level or professional level. Improving the biological level only requires It can increase attributes. In addition to increasing attributes, upgrading a career level will also gain professional skills. However, career improvement is just a further exploration of the biological potential. Therefore, the sum of all professional levels cannot exceed the biological level. Moreover, every 5 levels, players must find ways to complete tasks to break through the shackles of their own race before they can continue to upgrade. In addition, players can also discover relics from past eras in the game world. After meeting the corresponding conditions, they can enter the relic dungeon. In the dungeon, players can not only witness the history related to the relics, but also convert the relics into equipment bound to their own souls after completing the task. The higher the task evaluation, the stronger the bound equipment obtained. Through various copies of relics, the book shows readers the ignorant and chaotic Age of God before the Age of Order, the Age of Machinery with the dawn of civilization, the Age of Chaos with shattered glory, the Age of Fire with rekindled hope, and the Age of Thousand Kingdoms with heroes competing for hegemony, truly creating a It is a grand world with a long history, civilization, brilliance, technology and fantasy coexisting, and it vividly exposes the cruel oppression and shameless deception of the bottom class by the rulers of various eras. It makes powerful criticism and bitter satire on it, and has a hint of reality, which is worthy of repeated reflection. The character creation is also extremely brilliant. The protagonist's character is reminiscent of "Thriller Paradise". He has the same photographic memory, the same invincible rhetoric, the same good at analysis and reasoning, the same enthusiasm for exploring the game background, the same calmness with madness hidden, and the same interest that makes him take on the mission of subverting the order of the game and promoting the progress of the times. He is just like another Feng Bujue. The other players who appeared also had distinct personalities and vivid images, including the muscular but simple-minded, honest and big-bodied worker, the sharp-tongued white-haired lady whose ability to bully the weak and fear the hard is better than the protagonist's, the high-playing female mage who covets the protagonist's body, and the rebellious and confused bad girl batter, all of which are impressive. Highly recommended for those who like highly intelligent protagonists and surreal games.
11诸天纵横,从武林外传开始
Poor People Like To Perm Their Hair
Can the overwhelming power be better than Sunflower Acupuncture? Can you catch Xiao Li's flying knife with one finger of Lingxi? Can Sanshou Bapu catch the flying immortal from heaven? Can Wan Jian Guizong integrate Zongheng and Hehe? Can Ziying Qingsuo be broken and draw his sword to cut the sky? I have a sword, the name of the sword is Tears in the Sky, which can sweep away all the demons and monsters; I have a pot of wine, the name of which is Sun and Moon Qinghui, which can drink up all the heroic spirit of the world; my eyebrows are full of evil spirit, I leap into the air thousands of miles away, with a three-foot sword in the box on my back, to serve the heaven and show injustice to others!
Can the overwhelming power be better than Sunflower Acupuncture? Can you catch Xiao Li's flying knife with one finger of Lingxi? Can Sanshou Bapu catch the flying immortal from heaven? Can Wan Jian Guizong integrate Zongheng and Hehe? Can Ziying Qingsuo be broken and draw his sword to cut the sky? I have a sword, the name of the sword is Tears in the Sky, which can sweep away all the demons and monsters; I have a pot of wine, the name of which is Sun and Moon Qinghui, which can drink up all the heroic spirit of the world; my eyebrows are full of evil spirit, I leap into the air thousands of miles away, with a three-foot sword in the box on my back, to serve the heaven and show injustice to others!
[Grain]★★★ Finished reading the latest chapter. It's a decent martial arts game that travels through the heavens. Those who like casual Buddhist-style protagonists can watch it. The Wulin Gaiden part is quite long, but it's okay, and the content is still interesting.
12Movie Savior
Multiverse电影救世主
The Tenth Trumpet
We are at the helm of the earth's 2,500-year wandering voyage; we are driving mechas in a world invaded by monsters; we are saving mankind in a world where viruses are rampant; we are recreating a pure land in a city infected by zombies; we are searching for civilization in the wilderness after natural disasters... Above the vast ocean, Zhang Tianyuan obtained an island and has since become one of the players in the Lord game. He looked at his base, which could open a portal to the movie world, and couldn't help but fall into deep thought. If he can bring over 7 billion people from "2012" and 3.5 Billion people from "The Wandering Earth", will he definitely win this game?
We are at the helm of the earth's 2,500-year wandering voyage; we are driving mechas in a world invaded by monsters; we are saving mankind in a world where viruses are rampant; we are recreating a pure land in a city infected by zombies; we are searching for civilization in the wilderness after natural disasters... Above the vast ocean, Zhang Tianyuan obtained an island and has since become one of the players in the Lord game. He looked at his base, which could open a portal to the movie world, and couldn't help but fall into deep thought. If he can bring over 7 billion people from "2012" and 3.5 Billion people from "The Wandering Earth", will he definitely win this game?
[Good Grass]★★★★ The novel is quite good and has strong logic, but one drawback is that in order to highlight the protagonist, the supporting characters are forced to reduce their intelligence, and the elites of a country are described in a very unbearable manner. Also, China will never do anything unprepared. If you want to go to another world, China will definitely prepare a plan, such as a response plan before the virus outbreak, a response plan after the outbreak, etc. Even if the members of other worlds are led by the protagonist, the country will definitely send one or a few planners to provide suggestions to the protagonist.
13Start a Subspace
Science Fiction开局一个亚空间
Ultimate Eternity
The universe is shattered, the sun disappears, the earth is in danger, and the remaining humans are fighting among themselves crazily for a small number of survival spots. "They escaped! They escaped with all the resources!" "We... Have no hope." "Goodbye, world!"... Just when the order was about to collapse, someone suddenly opened the door to subspace: "Everyone, hope has not disappeared. Our journey should be the sea of stars!"
The universe is shattered, the sun disappears, the earth is in danger, and the remaining humans are fighting among themselves crazily for a small number of survival spots. "They escaped! They escaped with all the resources!" "We... Have no hope." "Goodbye, world!"... Just when the order was about to collapse, someone suddenly opened the door to subspace: "Everyone, hope has not disappeared. Our journey should be the sea of stars!"
[Good Grass]★★★★ The beginning of this time is much better than the previous book. From the opening of the Golden Finger subspace, to the defection of the consortium, to the reconstruction of human refuges relying on subspace, the plot is very smooth, and the atmosphere of the doomsday is also very strong, especially the countdown to the end of the last three months, and the explosion of despair is also very interesting. The follow-up depends on how the plot progresses after the subspace is established. There is no obvious relevant foreshadowing yet. Other civilized races should also flee when the universe is torn apart, right? It reminds me of "The World Enters the Age of Mythology" written by the previous author. All civilizations fled, but the collision between them was not intense, and the subsequent plot felt like it ended abruptly. I hope this book can make up for it.
14从一人开始升格诸天
A Slap To Wake You Up
At the beginning, you travel through time and become a blacksmith, gain a lot of skills, and awaken your world abilities. Divine Machine Hundreds of Refinements + Iron Puppet =? Command block: Since you don't want me anymore, then I'll leave? My world has transformed into all the heavens and realms!
At the beginning, you travel through time and become a blacksmith, gain a lot of skills, and awaken your world abilities. Divine Machine Hundreds of Refinements + Iron Puppet =? Command block: Since you don't want me anymore, then I'll leave? My world has transformed into all the heavens and realms!
[Good Grass]★★★★ He traveled to the world under one person and obtained the Golden Finger Minecraft Command Block. Now he met Ma Xianhong and created the New Jiejiao Sect together, learned the magic machine and the Immortal Thief of Liuku. Now you are ready to perfect the golden finger to open the portal and start your journey to the heavens.
15Play All over the World
Multiverse玩遍诸天世界
I Wish I Could Add More In My Dream
If you were given the ability to freely travel through various fantasy worlds such as novels, animations, movies, and television, how would you develop? Should I study under Uncle Jiu, Ip Man or Yue Buqun at the beginning? Go to "Super Out of Control" to gain telekinesis? Go to "Never End" to seek potions? Taking advantage of the plot to get the golden finger of the original protagonist? Is there an opportunity to acquire the protagonist in advance based on foresight? Stealing the magic power of the original protagonist? To take back the beauty of the original protagonist? ................................................................................. Can you play? This book teaches you how to become invincible in three chapters easily!
If you were given the ability to freely travel through various fantasy worlds such as novels, animations, movies, and television, how would you develop? Should I study under Uncle Jiu, Ip Man or Yue Buqun at the beginning? Go to "Super Out of Control" to gain telekinesis? Go to "Never End" to seek potions? Taking advantage of the plot to get the golden finger of the original protagonist? Is there an opportunity to acquire the protagonist in advance based on foresight? Stealing the magic power of the original protagonist? To take back the beauty of the original protagonist? ................................................................................. Can you play? This book teaches you how to become invincible in three chapters easily!
[Grain]★★★ The author's structure is too small, or the protagonist's imagination is not big enough. Since time travel is not passive but active, you can go wherever you want. Even the text version of the novel can go there. There are no restrictions. It shouldn't be a YY novel of a few hundred words written by yourself. In the novel, you can just eat, drink, and be omnipotent. What kind of bicycle is needed?
16American Comic Bounty
Multiverse美漫悬赏令
King Of The Night
Reward order: John Wick (bounty 2 million): For a car and a dog, I am clearing out the household registration book of another family. Delores Abenassie (5 million bounty): Have you ever been to Westworld? If you've been, you've seen her. Predator, (bounty 10 million): Who is the prey, him or you? Starscream (bounty 50 million): You can consider leading it to the next reward. Magneto (bounty 100 million): You can consider leading the previous reward to him. Godzilla (bounty 300 million): If you see it opening its mouth to breathe in... There's no need to do anything... Because there's no point in doing anything else. Ronan the Accuser (bounty 1.2 Billion): Dance, baby, embarrass him to death! ! ! My name is Laika Scott. Aquaman New York, Ultimate Rake Ear, Suits. And, Board of Governors Rookie of the Year.
Reward order: John Wick (bounty 2 million): For a car and a dog, I am clearing out the household registration book of another family. Delores Abenassie (5 million bounty): Have you ever been to Westworld? If you've been, you've seen her. Predator, (bounty 10 million): Who is the prey, him or you? Starscream (bounty 50 million): You can consider leading it to the next reward. Magneto (bounty 100 million): You can consider leading the previous reward to him. Godzilla (bounty 300 million): If you see it opening its mouth to breathe in... There's no need to do anything... Because there's no point in doing anything else. Ronan the Accuser (bounty 1.2 Billion): Dance, baby, embarrass him to death! ! ! My name is Laika Scott. Aquaman New York, Ultimate Rake Ear, Suits. And, Board of Governors Rookie of the Year.
[Hay]★★☆ It's too messy. Too many earth plots are integrated together and it can be said that the city is a vast area. But after some aliens and super power plots are integrated, will the plots of ordinary people remain the same as before? In addition to S. H. I. E. L. D., There is also the Men in Black. Not to mention the equipment of the Men in Black, not to mention aliens, even Thanos may have to consider it. The gun of the man in black, the planet destroyer, I don't know if Thanos can withstand a single shot.
17I Handed in the Crossing Door
Multiverse我把穿越门上交了
Mage Of Resentment
Zhu Jue has obtained the time-travel gate system. As long as he travels to other worlds to complete tasks, he can continue to become stronger and transcendent. But after he went around the world of "Alien 1" in the first copy and quickly discovered that he was an ordinary person, it seemed difficult to complete those difficult tasks... He didn't want to give birth to aliens, so he immediately decisively chose to hand himself over to the country! And since then he has lived a happy life as a useless person, with the country doing the work for him and enjoying the benefits with the country...
Zhu Jue has obtained the time-travel gate system. As long as he travels to other worlds to complete tasks, he can continue to become stronger and transcendent. But after he went around the world of "Alien 1" in the first copy and quickly discovered that he was an ordinary person, it seemed difficult to complete those difficult tasks... He didn't want to give birth to aliens, so he immediately decisively chose to hand himself over to the country! And since then he has lived a happy life as a useless person, with the country doing the work for him and enjoying the benefits with the country...
[Grain]★★★ The subject matter is quite good, but the protagonist's presence is too weak. I think it would be okay to change to a dog. Moreover, the sentence seems too laborious. Every time I have to find the subject, predicate, object, and definite adverbial complement. Can you write the sentence more smoothly? There are so many attributive adverbials and it seems too uncomfortable. Can't you split it into several sentences? A large sentence can be broken into two or three short sentences, so that it is not tiring to read and easy to understand.
18I Have a Seal of Two Realms
Xianxia我有一枚两界印
Watermelon Eats Grapes
With a jade seal, you can freely travel to different worlds. Originally thinking that it was an ordinary ancient world, Lu Zheng, who had no ambitions, planned to become a free young man, enjoy the life of a rich man, find a few red sleeves to add fragrance, go shopping and eat, and live out this simple and boring life. Until... He gave a meal to the beggar at the door, and Jade Seal got a few rays of luck... The fox girl came at day, and the ghost came at night. Quanzhen came to the door, but the Zen master blocked the way. It turns out that this world is not simple...
With a jade seal, you can freely travel to different worlds. Originally thinking that it was an ordinary ancient world, Lu Zheng, who had no ambitions, planned to become a free young man, enjoy the life of a rich man, find a few red sleeves to add fragrance, go shopping and eat, and live out this simple and boring life. Until... He gave a meal to the beggar at the door, and Jade Seal got a few rays of luck... The fox girl came at day, and the ghost came at night. Quanzhen came to the door, but the Zen master blocked the way. It turns out that this world is not simple...
[Grain]★★★☆ Modern and ancient fairy tales cross paths with each other. The protagonist can gain luck by changing the fate of others and then improve himself through luck. The ancient plot is okay, but the modern plot is a bit nostalgic. Overall not bad.
19从斩妖司开始召唤玩家
Apple Coffee Flavor
Question: How to rebuild the Demon Slayer Division reasonably and efficiently? Step one: Recruit players as employees who are diligent, motivated, willing to work overtime, capable of resisting and fighting, and who are not afraid of life and death. Step 2: Draw a cake. Step 3: Abandon your conscience and become a planer! PS: The NPC stream is the main line, and the fourth natural disaster player stream is the auxiliary line.
Question: How to rebuild the Demon Slayer Division reasonably and efficiently? Step one: Recruit players as employees who are diligent, motivated, willing to work overtime, capable of resisting and fighting, and who are not afraid of life and death. Step 2: Draw a cake. Step 3: Abandon your conscience and become a planer! PS: The NPC stream is the main line, and the fourth natural disaster player stream is the auxiliary line.
[Grain]★★★☆ The plot is okay, but the setting... Is too crude. When I read the introduction, I thought it was about natural disasters involving players from another world. But when I saw that the latest chapter only had three players, I didn't know what the background was like. It didn't have the depressing feeling of a troubled world with demons, but instead it had a cynical and bleak feeling about the human world in the Chinese comics about exorcism and subduing demons. I don't know what the player's natural disaster is for, but it feels like he took off his pants and farted.
20游戏入侵:我选了最弱职业召唤师
Yunyanfufeng
The real world and the game world merge, monsters come to the world, and beasts are raging in the city. In order to eliminate monsters in the dungeon, everyone with player qualifications must hunt monsters, choose a profession, continuously become stronger, and protect human cities from destruction. Elemental mage, fire and ice, destroy everything! In the priesthood shield battle, Mount Tai collapsed in front of him but his appearance remained unchanged. However, Han Yu, who had high hopes, chose the summoner profession, which no one would choose. "Summoner? Are there any candidates for this profession? Don't even dogs play with it?" "Who would team up with a summoner? Let him fight slowly by himself. The two summoned creatures are not enough for me to step on." "I heard that his talent is not bad, why can't I think about it so much that he changed his profession to a summoner." Until one day, Han Yu was standing behind a Huyun Leopard as big as a mountain, drinking tea, and a giant skeleton hand emerged from the ground and gently squeezed the boss to death. People discovered that Han Yu's summons would not disappear and could even be continuously cultivated!
The real world and the game world merge, monsters come to the world, and beasts are raging in the city. In order to eliminate monsters in the dungeon, everyone with player qualifications must hunt monsters, choose a profession, continuously become stronger, and protect human cities from destruction. Elemental mage, fire and ice, destroy everything! In the priesthood shield battle, Mount Tai collapsed in front of him but his appearance remained unchanged. However, Han Yu, who had high hopes, chose the summoner profession, which no one would choose. "Summoner? Are there any candidates for this profession? Don't even dogs play with it?" "Who would team up with a summoner? Let him fight slowly by himself. The two summoned creatures are not enough for me to step on." "I heard that his talent is not bad, why can't I think about it so much that he changed his profession to a summoner." Until one day, Han Yu was standing behind a Huyun Leopard as big as a mountain, drinking tea, and a giant skeleton hand emerged from the ground and gently squeezed the boss to death. People discovered that Han Yu's summons would not disappear and could even be continuously cultivated!
[Hay]★★☆ The wild water setting during the battle affects the reading atmosphere quite a bit. Every time the heroine and the summoned animals come out, they don't fit in well with the environment. The setting of the main character does not have the feeling of panic, but every time I encounter something, it is unsatisfactory. All the efforts to understand it are in vain. Later, I always felt that the time traveler setting appeared among the indigenous people. Mainly because I thought that the protagonist suddenly became a time traveler because he had no experience. I felt that the previous logic was too unreasonable.
21Marvel Philanthropist
Multiverse漫威慈善家
Mint Vera
"I had a dream, a very exaggerated dream." "What dream?" Scarlet Witch was a little confused. The others also cast strange glances over. "I dreamed that I became a very strange person. Tony, Natasha, Captain, Director Fury, and even the respected Master Ancient One, all tried their best to kill me. Even you, Wanda, swore that we would never live together. This makes me sad!" The Avengers next to them were all silent. Captain picked up his shield, Thor held his hammer tightly, and Hawkeye drew his bow to full length. Wanda, on the other hand, raised her hands with a complicated expression, and the scarlet light gradually rose, "Chen Mu, unfortunately, this is not a dream." "Oh, that's good." Chen Mu breathed a sigh of relief with lingering fear. The next moment, the sky collapsed. The introduction is weak, so move on to the main text. Keywords in this article: relaxed, mischievous, everyday, invincible, after... Special reminder, the protagonist is very evil, very holy, very dark.
"I had a dream, a very exaggerated dream." "What dream?" Scarlet Witch was a little confused. The others also cast strange glances over. "I dreamed that I became a very strange person. Tony, Natasha, Captain, Director Fury, and even the respected Master Ancient One, all tried their best to kill me. Even you, Wanda, swore that we would never live together. This makes me sad!" The Avengers next to them were all silent. Captain picked up his shield, Thor held his hammer tightly, and Hawkeye drew his bow to full length. Wanda, on the other hand, raised her hands with a complicated expression, and the scarlet light gradually rose, "Chen Mu, unfortunately, this is not a dream." "Oh, that's good." Chen Mu breathed a sigh of relief with lingering fear. The next moment, the sky collapsed. The introduction is weak, so move on to the main text. Keywords in this article: relaxed, mischievous, everyday, invincible, after... Special reminder, the protagonist is very evil, very holy, very dark.
[Grain]★★★ I felt pretty good in the first few chapters, but then it got really good. It's still the same problem. The plot of American comics is actually very weak, but the world view is well established. If you want to write fan fiction based on the world view of American comics, you need to be good at writing stories. The wisest way is to write unit dramas. If you think of Marvel's screenwriters as writers of fan fiction, you will find that Marvel's storylines are actually unit dramas. Japanese comics are different. They have a stronger story and can completely follow the story line of the original work. The disadvantage is that it will basically fall apart in the later stages.