Duel Day at Hogwarts

I just want to know why the protagonist wants to be friends with Po Te? Going against Malfoy? Why do you want to make enemies for yourself because Andy is a buyer? Andy has not given the protagonist greater benefits, and the relationship is not deep. After making an enemy, he felt unhappy and cursed the senior class to death. The key point is that in this century, Dumbledore, the greatest white wizard, had no way to find the murderer, and it was useless to go back through time. Why do the first graders have to fight against Voldemort? I think what the protagonist gets is not the power of the troll but the IQ of the troll 👎 If you don't know the scope of the pocket watch, just ask Quirrell to block the life-killing curse. Is this a magic item or an invincibility talisman? Do you think you can defeat Voldemort who possesses Quirrell with a low-level armor spell? According to you, I can defeat even a troll. The protagonist of this book, Long Aotian, is not afraid of anything. He makes enemies everywhere in Slytherin. Do you think that pure-blood families are just the breadwinners? You are really not afraid of being secretly fucked to death when you leave school. The only trump card is a pocket watch that can withstand damage. Its function is that after being hit by the death curse, you can pretend to be dead and make a sneak attack👎. Could it be that the brain of the troll, the level 1 Iron Armor Curse and the Disarming Curse can protect you?

To sum up, the whole thing is Fighting the Sky in the guise of Harry Potter! Poison Point 1: The author used his shallow mental memory to create a "Golden Crucible" journal out of thin air without thinking. The academic journal in the potion industry in the original book is called "Practical Potion Master", and the highest paper award designed in it is called the Golden Crucible Award. You can just do it. I bought a Golden Crucible journal, and it was really disgusting to read it over and over again. These things are in the Harry Potter Encyclopedia and Pottermore, and you can find them by just searching. Fan fiction is not impossible to create, but the most annoying thing is to tamper with the original settings! Poison Point 2: The entire dialogue is in the style of Chinese waste-chai Liushuang and Dragon King novels. Do you know why Harry Potter is a classic of wizarding literature? It lies in its unique translation accent. The protagonist is rubbing his nose for a while, and chatting awkwardly with friends for a while. Are you the British version of Xiao Yan? 😅 Poison Point 3: The strength increases too quickly and the rhythm collapses! The protagonist in the first grade copied the Iron Armor Curse from a second-year co-con. In the original work, only the fourth and fifth graders were eligible to learn the Iron Armor Curse. In the OWLs exam, it only appeared as a test question on the theory of spells. It is also a must-have spell for Aurors. If you say that the protagonist is extremely talented and learned it on his own, I won't say anything. You can think of any second-year guy as being able to use it. Isn't that funny? What comes next is even more outrageous. The protagonist publishes a paper in a top journal in the potion industry in his first grade. This is like an elementary school student publishing an SCI paper or a high school student winning a Nobel Prize. Do you know what academic fraud is? No matter how talented you are, it takes time to accumulate knowledge and you treat others as fools? Poison Point 4: The plot design is a modified version of Battle Against the Sky, especially between the protagonist and Gavin. Don't be too awkward. Why don't you like to alienate and deliberately punish the protagonist? You still think with your Chinese thinking. It's embarrassing or not. It would be disgusting for the whole loser to return to the family. You still think it's a very scheming game. You act like Dumbledore is dead the whole time. Do you know what the White Devil is? Even if you don't need Legilimency, you can easily know what you are doing. How can you be so confident and engage in school violence? Can you survive for 3 seconds after traveling through time?

Campus violence is too obvious. You think Dumbledore is dead?

It's totally unsatisfactory. I haven't seen such a high-quality HP fanfic for a long time. The setting is also very good. I hope the author can stick to it. Come on🤑

I want to see the protagonist transform into animagus form and have sex with Kurkan ()

The writing is complicated and wordy, and some plots are inexplicable. It feels like it was forced and awkward. When you write a novel, you write the plot, not the explanation. Explanation throughout the whole story is very confusing.

First of all, the author's handling of the plot is extremely rough. It doesn't mean that if you are a member, you will not be scolded if you write poorly. After reading less than 20 chapters, I really can't stand it anymore. Many people are washing the floor here, but it is actually unnecessary because the logic in many places is very confusing. Don't tell me what's reasonable. Whatever arrangement the pen has in the hands of the author is up to him. The first time I entered Slytherin, I was shocked. . I thought it was an author who was born in 2005. After the young ones came to the old ones, everyone was unhappy with the protagonist and wanted to find fault? After 2020, everyone likes to read cool articles and farm, and the pace of the original Harry Potter books is not that fast. In the middle of the second grade, a second grader challenged you to a duel. A week after you entered the school, the second grader challenged you to a duel and you said you had a golden finger and you agreed directly? ? ? Do you want to be harder? Brother, you are a squib who has been exposed to magic for less than a month, and Goldfinger is not so buggy and is directly invincible. In order to set off the protagonist's duel partner, you actually have all kinds of second-year dueling skills and iron armor spells? ? After the third duel, the prefect who helped others bully you asked you to invest and make friends with you, and you agreed immediately? Since you are so cheap, why didn't you please Malfoy at first? You are so powerful, and then your brother is so weak. If Malfoy doesn't agree, at least he won't target you later. Can you write Long Ao Astronomy? . . Interspersed in the middle is the prefect threatening that if you don't earn back your points, you will have no peace in the future. Just say I will. A protagonist is not only stupid but also a coward. . This is still more than 20 chapters. . What happens next is really unimaginable. .

Forget it, the flaws are not to be concealed. The most harmful thing is that I don't want to learn magic at the beginning and go to Hong Kong to be an actor. I call it a joke, but it is annoying. There is also a high-scoring HP novel that eats several owls at the beginning. I don't want to go to Hogwarts. I don't want to read it. What HP do you want to write if you don't want to go? Don't go if you really don't want to go. Don't talk about Obscurus.

I'm really curious whether it has multiple female protagonists or it's original.

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