This is What a Fairy Should Be Like

How can I put it? There is nothing wrong with what the author wrote, but I just feel uncomfortable. The selfishness, coldness, and sudden appearance of the pig's feet in the early stage are too awkward.

The following are just my thoughts after reading Chapter 51. The setting of this book is quite good. The protagonist's time-travel setting at the beginning is a bit tasteless. I feel that many people will be dissuaded in the first chapter. In addition, the psychological changes of the protagonist and other characters are very abrupt. This is the main dissuasion for me. From Degu to Jin Dynasty I went to Mr. Liu to start the mechanization of all the characters. I followed the protagonist for no reason. All the supporting characters were killed. It was obvious that the author was unable to do what he wanted. Then the protagonist made an abrupt transition and chose to go to the Jin Dynasty alone. I gave up decisively when I saw this.

Let's not talk about the actor's language problem. There are plane routes everywhere now. In the city, the plane flies so high that you can't hear the sound of the engine, but in the countryside, you can hear it, and it is very loud.

Forcibly reading Chapter 180 made me sick! It's far worse than the previous two books. The protagonist doesn't look like a fairy, but he's also a modern time traveler! Maybe the author made money from the two books, and his mentality changed when he became rich. He wrote the protagonist as a superior, some kind of ancient god who plays with ordinary people at will! Just like the old Taoist priest who planted pears, I want to give him two big mouths!

I believe you are a professional writer, but you never read your own work after you finish writing.

The beginning was a bit new, but I felt lame when I saw Chapter 37. Too bland

After reading the 300th chapter, I couldn't hold on and gave up. The author actually had a great beginning. Just the setting of Taoyuan and Tao Yuanming traveling through time and space made the beginning full of fairyland and unconventional. But later on, the setting of Journey to the West was gradually integrated into it, and the fairy spirit of this world view fell off a cliff. It's not that the setting of Journey to the West is not good, but it is too separated from the world view created by the author in the early stage. For example, the dynasty time does not match up, and the Journey to the West is forcibly placed in the Jin Dynasty, and the part about finding the Great Sage in the Five-Colored Sacred Mountain is even more awkward. Apart from the world view, the biggest flaw is the character design of the protagonist. Compared with Mr. Ji and Mr. Yi in the previous two books, Zhuang is simply cliched. The author wants to write him like Ji and Yi, powerful, noble, and fairy-like... Not to mention the controversy over the protagonist's morality in Shen Qingxiao's part, in terms of combat power alone, Zhuang's strength is entirely on the author's side. It is said that he is powerful directly, but at the same time it is vague and suppresses his power, making it difficult for readers to determine and feel. The Holy Land of Lingxiao is very powerful, comparable to the level of the World Honored One and Bodhisattva in Journey to the West. As a result, the difference cannot be felt at all in the battle. Some of the inferior little demon kings in Journey to the West find it difficult to deal with, so they rely on modern technology to solve it. The world view, protagonist's character, and combat power have collapsed. At this point, the "fairy spirit" that this article wants to create in the two books such as Lanke and Hongchen is gone.

It's a piece of shit. It's hard to comment. I've read so many novels. From the past 20 years to now, I've spent tens of thousands of hours on it. This is the first time I've seen a novel with a shitty beginning and no interest in reading.

It's understandable if the author doesn't update. He probably wanted to write another book like Lan Ke but didn't feel that way and finally decided against it.

The subject matter is boring, and the writing is even more cliché. There is no problem with the protagonist being selfish, but the awkward part is that there is no sense of involvement. There is no logic and the supporting characters are useless. Isn't this a pure human-machine novel? Will the world be better? The author should stop writing books and go home and farm.