Huddle in the Doomsday and Become an Immortal Alone

For example: a nouveau riche (who is in the Mahayana period purely relying on talent) plans to enter the real estate industry in 2022 (overcoming the tribulation and ascending) to achieve a class jump and become a master. However, the investment failed and he went bankrupt (failed to escape the tribulation). He packed up and went back to his hometown (the soul traveled through the apocalyptic wasteland), and showed off to the elders and aunties in the community (the apocalyptic natives) with the eyes of his previous wealth of tens of millions (the cultivation level of the Mahayana period). The whole thing is low. Even if he succeeded in ascension, he could not even reach the hundred thousand heavenly soldiers and generals who besieged Sun Wukong. Even if he failed, he still would not look at the phenomenon of his own time-traveling with awe. He works hard to collect information, works hard to develop and strengthen himself, and still laughs and plays house with mortals. Cultivation can improve the calculation power of the brain. Even if the cultivation level regresses, the basic logic cannot be lost. The phenomenon of time travel is unknown, the future is unknown, and one's own strength is the root of everything.

Could it be that this Mahayana was born in a female channel, the Mahayana ancestor who needs to explain to the junior Qi practitioner why he stole the Foundation Establishment Pill? Or is it a world where only saints can fly? The initial setting might as well be a real world where an ordinary cultivator travels to the end of the world and unexpectedly discovers that skills that could not be practiced before can actually be practiced. It's too boring, just like the novels from 15 years ago, which lowered my evaluation of Mahayana. For example, when I first started reading the novels, the fairy emperor was reborn in the city, and the nine-day mysterious immortal was in another world. This book has a similar feeling.

The author will not write about such a theme that combines the end of the world and cultivating immortals. Readers read this novel just for the enjoyment of immortal cultivators in the end of the world. We readers should not be mindless. The result is a hodgepodge of something that is both fake and insignificant, the technology is not technological enough, the apocalypse is not apocalyptic enough, and the cultivators of immortality are not enough to cultivate immortality. First of all, the power system of this novel is very vague. The author made the protagonist's previous life in the Immortal World of Wangxian Valley the same as that of the Low Martial Arts world. He is still more than a hundred years old in Mahayana. Are you writing a novel for women? Han Li next door has a plug-in for holding the sky bottle. He only became Mahayana after thousands of years and ascended after thousands of years. Among mortals, Jin Dan who is more than a hundred years old is an extremely evil genius. Don't tell me silly things like how you compare immortals to mortals. The author writes that the protagonist travels from the traditional world of immortals to the end of the world to fight against the scum of spiritual cultivators and bladed beasts. Both inside and outside the words describe that the civilization of immortal cultivators is stronger than the civilization of spiritual cultivators, and it also writes about the power system of traditional immortal cultivators. As a result, the author's description of the civilization of spiritual cultivators is grander and more shocking than the civilization of immortal cultivators. The whole novel is like writing about a Taoist priest in a mountain village who accidentally traveled to the world of cyber technology. It turned out that my Taoism on the mountain top is stronger than your technology. I remember that the novel should be written like this more than ten years ago. The author describes the main reason why the protagonist failed to overcome the tribulation in his previous life as not being able to refine his heart in the world of mortals, which is barely reasonable. But what is outrageous is that this powerful Mahayana man is actually playing a simulation game of cultivating immortals after spending more than 120 years cultivating immortality? Not even among geniuses. Judging from the current description, the protagonist's Mahayana is just as good as the mortal gods, or even worse than the gods. Compared with the civilization of spiritual practitioners and the blade beasts who cross the stars and fight in the interstellar, this god is completely unsatisfactory. You still use the forbidden magic of magic at every turn. Brother, if the magic of Wangxian Valley was so strong, it would have been defeated long ago. If it has been passed down for tens of thousands of years, wouldn't Wangxian Valley have any powerful forbidden magic? The protagonist progressed too slowly and it took me 1.15 Million words to start to reach the golden elixir realm. I know the word number of water whether it is water or not. The mysterious slate spiritual cultivator behind the psyker, the mysterious civilization before the spiritual cultivator, three blurry black shadows, confusing, classic matryoshka doll routine. The monthly tickets and achievements you have today are not because of how good your novel is, but entirely because of your stable capital. A good novel is as stable as it is, catering to the readers' expectations, not to the author's own thoughts...

We all know that a wonderful story needs ups and downs of the plot and exciting events to attract readers. However, if it is not handled properly and the protagonist is completely passively pushed forward by these major events and loses the ability to make independent choices and actions, it may affect the quality and appeal of the work. This is not to say that big events are unimportant; on the contrary, they are often the core driving force of the story and can add tension and excitement to the entire work. But the key is that the protagonist should show initiative and decision-making during these big events. When the protagonist is just wrapped up in big events, readers may feel that the protagonist lacks soul and personality, as if he is just a puppet, manipulated at will by the strings in the author's hand, and cannot truly arouse the reader's emotional resonance. A charming protagonist should be able to proactively respond to major events with his own wisdom, courage and determination to change the situation, rather than being blindly swayed by the situation.

While writing about how important labor is in this city, he also writes about raising the gangsters who do nothing to harm the city. While even mentally ill people are being operated on and turned into labor machines, gangsters are being allowed to kill people. The price/performance ratio of the high-level officials raising these gangsters for organ replacement is much lower than the forced "donation" of organs from death row inmates. Are the high-level officials all idiots? There is a problem with the most basic background logic of this novel

It keeps making sense, but the question is, was it written by the author himself? If experiencing all kinds of things in the world is the Tao mind, then do most people have the Tao mind? For a being with a long lifespan, experiencing all kinds of things in the world is more of a way to relieve boredom when life becomes boring! Can the outlook on life of immortals be the same as that of ordinary humans who live for decades? Can experiencing the world of ordinary people help immortals hone their Taoist minds? It makes sense to say that monks walk in the world to accumulate merit, or to experience and comprehend the seven emotions and six desires, but it is nonsense to hone their Taoist heart!

To be honest, the plot in the underground fortress is not bad, the apocalyptic atmosphere is very good, and it is quite fascinating. The plot after leaving the underground fortress is simply a mess. The apocalyptic atmosphere has collapsed and turned directly into a mecha combat novel. Both the worldview and the power system are chaotic. I just write whatever comes to mind. Is there an outline? Human political struggles are written like playing house. Fighting is written like villagers fighting with each other. It is said that it is a combination of cultivating immortals and technology. Is there wool technology? Some broken knives, a broken formation plate, and some inexplicable elixirs are all related to technology. Doesn't it rely on nuclear weapons? In the author's perception, technology = mechanical girl = mecha. I don't know what I'm writing about the power system of cultivating immortals. At every turn, magic techniques consume potential. Author, do you want to take a look at what you are writing? If you don't know how to write, you can just copy the spells from the next door's Immortal Cultivation Writings, such as formations, elixirs, weapon refining, spiritual beasts, and physical training. Has the author written about the feeling of cultivating immortality in that field? It seems to work inexplicably, without even paying attention to energy conservation. It's like a person with 0 points in science is writing a science fiction article, without any science at all, relying entirely on fantasy and imagination!

Not bad. But you said this is a person who cultivates immortality in the Mahayana period. Don't you need some mental training? Then why do you write like a child? It's obviously not a natural period. Are evil spirits so important? If you have magic skills, don't practice them. Selling dog meat on sheep's heads. And he doesn't look like a Mahayana cultivator at all. It feels like a little kid. This setting is estimated to be able to be improved by just practicing. There is no need for mental training. Then it becomes more than 120 years old, and the setting is also outrageous. Then there was not much aura in the world. You can use magic techniques but you don't need to. Moreover, your magic way of setting is also very good. If you use it casually, there will be backlash in various ways, and it will not be fast to improve your cultivation level. Then who is going to practice magic? It's also quite magical

What is being auctioned next is a box of Xuanmai that a fellow Taoist found in the immortal temple left over from ancient times..." The hall was suddenly noisy. The old man in the auction house waved his hand to tell everyone to be quiet and said, "You must all know the magical effect of Xuanmai. If you meet an opponent, it depends on who can last longer. If you eat a small piece of Xuanmai at this time, it is estimated that the opponent will immediately wallow in despair and give up. This kind of divine object cannot be measured by ordinary crystals? Anyone who has treasures of the same price can also exchange them." "The auction begins now! The base price is 10,000 top-quality fairy crystals." "I'll offer 30,000 top-quality fairy crystals!" "I will give you 100,000 top-quality fairy crystals!" "I will produce a can of authentic Jiaduobao!" "... Everyone was silent for a while. Jiaduobao, that is the best fairy crystal worth millions! "I'll give you a pack of spicy sticks! "Just when everyone was sighing helplessly, a domineering voice came from the second floor of the auction hall!? What! Everyone looked in disbelief when they heard the words. What is spicy strips? Is that the world has not yet opened? A peerless divine object bred in chaos, some supreme treasures that have been passed down for thousands of years. The Taoist priest might not be able to take out one, let alone a pack. Everyone looked at the place where the sound came from, and saw a man in his early twenties sitting there. What was shocking was the logo on the Taoist robe he was wearing, "It turned out to be the mysterious and powerful Lan Xiang Academy!" And it is the most terrifying excavator series among them! "Lanxiang Academy?,? When people hear this name, they immediately think of it as powerful!? It is said that a university professor provoked a student from the Lanxiang Excavator Department, and then he used an excavator to crush him all the way, and the mountain gate was shattered.

Is this really a book written in 2024?