I Was a Swordsman in Ancient Japan

One stone here can feed you for a year. The protagonist has fifty stone a year. But he still has forty-nine stone, so he can't buy daily necessities such as oil, salt, clothes? Do you have to deduct it from the food? So you can only drink porridge? How cheap is the food set by the author in this article?

1. The power system is a bit broken. Skill points become more difficult to obtain as you go forward, and then the effect is not very good. Is this reasonable? 2. The female protagonist, Omachi, the emotional drama is too blunt. Anyway, I hate this person. I have written so much about it, so I might as well not write about it. Ronin, who lives and dies with a sword. He has to get a female ninja to come out. How can he drag his family to wander? Or find a place to settle? And don't you know what the emotional drama you wrote is like? It's so cruel. I'll add the rest later, I can't stand it.

It's understandable, but obviously the author didn't think it through, and the pressure was too much. The initial level was 5, which is just about the normal level, maybe still below. After all, the protagonist's living standard at the beginning was really poor, and he might be undernourished. In other words, for a strong person, the attribute might be 10 points or more. As soon as the protagonist reached 8 points, the improvement effect started to decrease. It was too much. In the later stage, when there were many challenges, and the physical quality had to reach at least 2 times, you should consider suppressing it. Moreover, the consequence of this design is that the role of body digitization has completely disappeared, and readers can no longer simply know the various abilities of the body, because 1 is obviously ≠1. The second point is that skill points and experience points can be obtained quickly and in large quantities, but in order to suppress the protagonist, it seems unreasonable and forced to reduce the intelligence. The third is the problem of adaptation. The protagonist does not look like a time traveler at all, let alone a Chinese. Although the current situation is stressful, he kneels too skillfully and naturally, and there is no inner struggle, which is natural. I originally gave it three stars, but when it came to the third point, I couldn't stand it, so I dropped another one.

The attribute points are several times or higher than others, but they are only not much better than others. Isn't this a problem?

The subject matter is quite attractive, and the system settings are okay, but the writing is really not fluent, there is a lot of nonsense, and the author's skills need to be improved. The plot is okay but the writing is too awkward. The ancient routine of adding more points if you can't afford to lose really persuades you to quit. The breakthrough before the battle was ten years ago. Don't say that you, who lost the breakthrough, still asked for another fight. The person who hid his strength was killed instantly? The description of the battle is really bad. I suggest the author rewrite it. If he is well prepared and not in such a hurry, it will probably be a good book.

There is a process of increasing combat power from low to high. This is very normal. However, shouldn't combat power be increased quickly in the early stage and slowly in the mid-term, and super slow in the later stage? Why should we limit the protagonist's combat power from the beginning? If we are afraid that the combat power will collapse, we can limit it at the beginning when the combat power reaches a high level. System, the restrictions from the beginning made me feel that the protagonist is a little better than ordinary people, and the increase in combat power is super slow, and the numerical point design is wrong. Directly using numerical points to upgrade skills, the skill rewards can also be increased crazily, isn't this forcibly lowering the protagonist's IQ?

Even if you change it to two skill points and one attribute point, it would be better to directly reduce the added points and the effect will be lower. The power system will simply jump, and it will become weaker and weaker. I am speechless. I don't understand what the author is thinking. He just comes up with it.

If you have money, you can play together, but they are all just playing around with first- and second-level trumpets. Everyone who understands understands, and I won't explain much to those who don't understand. Even if I explain, you still won't understand. People who really understand have already liked it, while those who don't know how to pretend to understand are still confused. Do you understand?

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It is recommended that the author delete the Qiafan book review, because it gives people a really bad feeling, and many people abandon the book just because of the Qiafan book review. There seems to be a lot of trolls in this book. Although many people have given me advice not to bother with it, it makes me feel quite bad after reading it.