
I Just Wanted to Retire and Was Forced to Become a General
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The Age of Great Pirates. The sea is turbulent and the strong ones are destroying the heaven and the earth. They are fighting each other. It is really frustrating! I, Lucilu Kulo, am twenty-four years old, and my biggest dream is to live my life safely!
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The mysterious theory of the pirate world ª
Who is Usopp? The one who kills those with the Rust Fruit ability with a slingshot. Who is the person with the ability of the Rust Fruit? The man who suppressed Sauron. Who is Sauron? The man who defeated Monkar the Axeman. Who is Axeman Mengka? The man who killed Garp with one axe. Who is Garp? A man who is a brother of the Warring States Period. Who is Sengoku? The man who single-handedly defeated the Blackbeard Pirates. Who is Blackbeard? The man who defeated Ace. Who is Ace? The man who fought Jinbei for five days and five nights with no outcome. Who is Jinbe? The fishman who killed Moria instantly. Who is Moria? A man who dares to confront Kaido. Who is Kaido? The man who shocked Ming Ge. Who is Brother Ming? The man who crippled Luo. Who is Luo? The man who can kill Viagra with one knife. Who is Viagra? The man who violently tortured Smoker. Who is Smoker? The man who captured Bucky alive. Who is Bucky? The man who ignores Hawkeye's slashes. Who is Hawkeye? The man who beat Luffy until he was unable to fight back. Who is Luffy? The man who killed the King of the Sea with one punch. Who is the king of the sea? The thing that bites off the red-haired arm in one bite. Who is the redhead? The man who easily blocked Akainu. Who is Akainu? The man who defeated Aokiji. Who is Aokiji? The man who broke Diamond Jozi's arm. Who is Jozi? A man who knocked out Laosha and vomited blood with one blow. Who is Lao Sha? The man who threatened to take the head of Whitebeard. Who is Whitebeard? He once competed with Roger for supremacy and was known as the strongest man in the world. Who is Roger? The pinnacle of pirates-One Piece. By analogy, Roger may be more powerful and can take two slingshots.
Every story can become a theater version
First of all, let me explain that the essence of this book is the self-created branch plot! Many people say they don't like the heroine in the book, and to be honest I don't like it very much either, but my mentality has changed and I regard her as a permanent supporting character who leads to branch plots. Then there will be no flaws in reading this book again! The supporting characters written by the author have their own stories and personalities, rather than characters written by ordinary pirate fans for the protagonist. This leads to the biggest highlight of the book: the branching story! Every story has the flavor of One Piece the Movie. People with rich imaginations like me can really play the branch stories in their heads and make themselves orgasm in their skulls! ! ! The main story will not be discussed in the normal operation of One Piece fans, but once you read this book to look forward to a branch plot after the main story, then this will be the beginning of your addiction to this book.
Why do you think Hancock is so strong?
These pictures confuse me. There is also a gap in the Overlord's color. How can Hancock's Overlord's color be compared with Barrett, the original Empress Luo Crocodile, Sabos, Morg, Luffy, etc. Combined to have one arm. The setting is infinitely close to the strength of One Piece. Can the Empress compare? Moreover, in such a big world, how can there be hundreds of millions of people with overlord colors? In addition, not only humans can produce overlord colors, but other races can also appear, so there are actually many overlord colors.
about this book
The combat power collapsed, where did it collapse? The protagonist comes with his own plug-in and it is quite small. I don't know where the plot fell apart. Thinking about it, it's better for the golden lion to die in the hands of the protagonist than to die in the hands of Luffy who just went to sea and didn't have the Haki of weapons or the Haki of knowledge, right? Once you get the Piaopiao Fruit, your combat power will go up, and you won't be invincible. You will have the quasi-Yonko strength through training. With the fruit, shouldn't you be more powerful? You can always fight against the Four Emperors. Luffy has only been trained for 2 years, from being a little pirate to fighting against the Yonko. The protagonist has been training for more than 20 years and still has great swordsmanship talent. If he can't beat the Yonko, what's wrong with him? Did you beat all the four emperors as soon as you came out? You still can't beat them. You got the fruit and you're not very proficient yet. Let's talk about the plot again, aren't those small theaters beautiful? Didn't the protagonist compete with silver medal players in those small theaters and gradually rise to the level of the four emperors? After that, combined with the fruit's ability, sword skills, and blood energy, is it still not possible to defeat the disabled Yonko? Get Kaido's fruit and combine it with genetic technology to eat it with a sword, and it suits you, and you have a stronger body and recovery ability. Your own sword skills plus blood energy that rivals the Overlord color, plus your own fruit's ability to control objects, and can even affect the weather. It has reached the point where one person is equal to three people. Is it outrageous? It hasn't grown up step by step. Then there are the problems with this book. First, I have nothing to say about the heroine. This is a matter of personal preference. But those who talk about falling in love with various beauties are really funny. The second issue is the character of the protagonist. I feel that it is very contradictory. Indeed, here are my personal opinions: 1. The protagonist does not want to take care of things, but he will definitely take care of the things in front of him. 2. Gou here doesn't want to cause trouble and enters the world of pirates. What about a large part of the story that Oda didn't write? We just follow Luffy's perspective to see the world. There are many things we can't see. There are many powerful people. There are many silver medal players with strange abilities, so it is best to be in the East China Sea where there is a foundation and no strong people. The navy has to patrol, and when it encounters pirates, of course it has to kill them when the other navy is confused. The strong Kuro has already secretly killed them in his spare time. As for why so many things happened in the future, without this book, there would be no need to read it, and it is impossible for the protagonist to ignore it when he encounters it. If he doesn't kill a strong pirate, will he kill him? 3. Regarding the war on top, it is really not good and there is no explanation. The author TND drove it out after waking up from sleep. But some people can't accept Ace's death. Come on, it was originally meant to be dead. On top of the war, the description of the protagonist is not good, and the psychology and discussion of Garp and Sengoku, as well as other naval pirates, are still okay. It's just that the protagonist has problems, very problematic. And Ace had to calm down in the end, forget it. I think this is where One Piece has changed. After all, there are always problems with long stories, and fans are asking for a continuation. But from here on, the nature of Luffy and his gang changes. Third, Luffy and his gang are not dead, which makes me very unhappy, and so do I, but there is nothing I can do about it. Kuro didn't want to see them at first, because there was Garp in the navy, and then he took action and sacrificed a Hades. The second time in the Chambord Islands, Garp came to see off his only grandson, and he died once. Then there is the red hair. After all, he is a Yonko and there is no way he can take Luffy's life by force. However, when going to Wano Country, the description of the red hair blocking him for the second time and beating the red hair was indeed too hasty. However, Kuro had an absolute advantage and would definitely win, and the red hair's purpose was to delay. This part was over. However, it was here that the author said that he was driven out after waking up from sleep. I didn't know that it was the same in the war on top. I must say TNND. When they arrived at Wano Country to harvest, Kuro and his group didn't care if there were more pirates and two Yonko. It would be more problematic to catch Luffy. He was a marine, and the dragon also came later. It's very unpleasant, but he really can't fall off. This is the problem with Luffy's background. If you have anything to discuss, please discuss it, but if you want to be tough, please find a good angle. Thank you.
Apex War is so poorly written.
The protagonist didn't behave at all. After he was sneak-attacked by the Whitebeard Pirates, he said he was angry and casually made two AOE gestures to clear out the soldiers, and then said that he respects Whitebeard and does not attack Whitebeard. Does Whitebeard respect you? He said he would sneak-attack you before. The male protagonist actually wasn't angry at all when he saw the female protagonist being beaten. At that time, the male protagonist had every chance to kill a cadre to make sacrifices to heaven. I believe you when you say that the protagonist has been replaced.
How should I put it? The plot and the name feel completely inconsistent. It talks about wanting to retire, but what does it do that seems like someone who wants to retire? During the war, you can obviously pretend not to contribute much, you can act like Garp or Kizaru, but you feel like you are afraid that others will not know you. The same thing happened later when Luffy went to sea. How have you beaten Rayleigh? Are you like this if you don't want to be promoted and want to retire? I don't want to go to the new world for safety reasons. Anyone who has watched One Piece knows what will happen to Luffy in the future. If you treat Rayleigh like this, aren't you afraid that he will seek revenge on you later? Do you really want to retire? I changed my name to Admiral. I think it fits the book better.
Chronic poison
Let's talk about the advantages first. Excellent characterization and storytelling skills. This ability is most vividly reflected in the "Kingdom of Stories", "Shishi Goro", "The Kingdom of Regaining the Heart of Resistance", and the psychological descriptions of the Golden Lion's Aloof Red World Destroyer and others. This is why I have been following this novel. There is no doubt that the author does have extremely powerful short story capabilities and psychological portrayal skills. Then there are the drawbacks. Contrary to the short-form ability, the author's long-form ability is completely unqualified. Reluctantly rising to the rank of general step by step is the main plot of this book, and the dramatic promotion is also a highlight. The author handled this point very poorly in the middle and later stages. Take for example when the Straw Hats go to sea and Rayleigh stops the protagonist. If it is really to avoid trouble and get credit, letting the Straw Hats quietly board the ship and go to sea, or play a cutscene with Rayleigh, is very consistent with the protagonist's big goal of not making meritorious deeds. But how did the author handle it? Lock the Sunny in the naval base to create conflicts, and let Leda be "injured" by Zoro, which escalates the conflict. She was beaten severely when she couldn't exert her full strength during the battle, which completely intensified the conflict. From the third perspective, this step is completely the protagonist's fault. So the big Sonny is locked in the naval base and your protagonist has been in Shampoo for two years. You don't know that he will be injured in the battle. He knows that once blood is seen, it will not end well, but he doesn't tell Lida not to take action. Just open a crushing pressure to solve the pretense and then get punched in the face. Yes, at first glance, the plot seems very reasonable in moving forward step by step, but if you think about it carefully, what the protagonist does is completely opposite to what he thinks. But there is no way, because the author lacks the ability to write novels, and the initial setting conflicts with the development of the plot. In order to cancel the plot, the author can only force the protagonist to "reducing his intelligence". This is why I say this book is a chronic poison. The combination of the author's excellent short story ability and insufficient long-form ability made me enjoy the first half and then became very uncomfortable in the middle and back parts. There is no doubt that this is a good book. I will always remember the pride of the golden lion, the aloofness of the red earl, the persistence of Wu Lang, and the king's sacrifice to arouse the people's resistance.
Read more than a hundred chapters
I saw the Whitebeard Pirates attack the Navy Headquarters, it was so vicious! Even if the protagonist wants 🐶, but during the group fight and the final battle, just because he doesn't want to be resented by Garp or worried about Luffy, he just doesn't work hard? Please, you are a soldier! Are you the only one who has traveled through time? It makes me laugh! Your comrades are all trying their best to kill pirates, but you still take advantage of this situation? Do you have the nerve to say you like a safe life? My hometown is gone, how safe is it? Are you still a shitty navy? I only have one word - just obey, tui! Rubbish! This is just my own opinion, don't criticize if you don't like it! What a rubbish! I still want 🐴 Vomited
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The mysterious theory of the pirate world ª
Who is Usopp? The one who kills those with the Rust Fruit ability with a slingshot. Who is the person with the ability of the Rust Fruit? The man who suppressed Sauron. Who is Sauron? The man who defeated Monkar the Axeman. Who is Axeman Mengka? The man who killed Garp with one axe. Who is Garp? A man who is a brother of the Warring States Period. Who is Sengoku? The man who single-handedly defeated the Blackbeard Pirates. Who is Blackbeard? The man who defeated Ace. Who is Ace? The man who fought Jinbei for five days and five nights with no outcome. Who is Jinbe? The fishman who killed Moria instantly. Who is Moria? A man who dares to confront Kaido. Who is Kaido? The man who shocked Ming Ge. Who is Brother Ming? The man who crippled Luo. Who is Luo? The man who can kill Viagra with one knife. Who is Viagra? The man who violently tortured Smoker. Who is Smoker? The man who captured Bucky alive. Who is Bucky? The man who ignores Hawkeye's slashes. Who is Hawkeye? The man who beat Luffy until he was unable to fight back. Who is Luffy? The man who killed the King of the Sea with one punch. Who is the king of the sea? The thing that bites off the red-haired arm in one bite. Who is the redhead? The man who easily blocked Akainu. Who is Akainu? The man who defeated Aokiji. Who is Aokiji? The man who broke Diamond Jozi's arm. Who is Jozi? A man who knocked out Laosha and vomited blood with one blow. Who is Lao Sha? The man who threatened to take the head of Whitebeard. Who is Whitebeard? He once competed with Roger for supremacy and was known as the strongest man in the world. Who is Roger? The pinnacle of pirates-One Piece. By analogy, Roger may be more powerful and can take two slingshots.
Every story can become a theater version
First of all, let me explain that the essence of this book is the self-created branch plot! Many people say they don't like the heroine in the book, and to be honest I don't like it very much either, but my mentality has changed and I regard her as a permanent supporting character who leads to branch plots. Then there will be no flaws in reading this book again! The supporting characters written by the author have their own stories and personalities, rather than characters written by ordinary pirate fans for the protagonist. This leads to the biggest highlight of the book: the branching story! Every story has the flavor of One Piece the Movie. People with rich imaginations like me can really play the branch stories in their heads and make themselves orgasm in their skulls! ! ! The main story will not be discussed in the normal operation of One Piece fans, but once you read this book to look forward to a branch plot after the main story, then this will be the beginning of your addiction to this book.
Why do you think Hancock is so strong?
These pictures confuse me. There is also a gap in the Overlord's color. How can Hancock's Overlord's color be compared with Barrett, the original Empress Luo Crocodile, Sabos, Morg, Luffy, etc. Combined to have one arm. The setting is infinitely close to the strength of One Piece. Can the Empress compare? Moreover, in such a big world, how can there be hundreds of millions of people with overlord colors? In addition, not only humans can produce overlord colors, but other races can also appear, so there are actually many overlord colors.
about this book
The combat power collapsed, where did it collapse? The protagonist comes with his own plug-in and it is quite small. I don't know where the plot fell apart. Thinking about it, it's better for the golden lion to die in the hands of the protagonist than to die in the hands of Luffy who just went to sea and didn't have the Haki of weapons or the Haki of knowledge, right? Once you get the Piaopiao Fruit, your combat power will go up, and you won't be invincible. You will have the quasi-Yonko strength through training. With the fruit, shouldn't you be more powerful? You can always fight against the Four Emperors. Luffy has only been trained for 2 years, from being a little pirate to fighting against the Yonko. The protagonist has been training for more than 20 years and still has great swordsmanship talent. If he can't beat the Yonko, what's wrong with him? Did you beat all the four emperors as soon as you came out? You still can't beat them. You got the fruit and you're not very proficient yet. Let's talk about the plot again, aren't those small theaters beautiful? Didn't the protagonist compete with silver medal players in those small theaters and gradually rise to the level of the four emperors? After that, combined with the fruit's ability, sword skills, and blood energy, is it still not possible to defeat the disabled Yonko? Get Kaido's fruit and combine it with genetic technology to eat it with a sword, and it suits you, and you have a stronger body and recovery ability. Your own sword skills plus blood energy that rivals the Overlord color, plus your own fruit's ability to control objects, and can even affect the weather. It has reached the point where one person is equal to three people. Is it outrageous? It hasn't grown up step by step. Then there are the problems with this book. First, I have nothing to say about the heroine. This is a matter of personal preference. But those who talk about falling in love with various beauties are really funny. The second issue is the character of the protagonist. I feel that it is very contradictory. Indeed, here are my personal opinions: 1. The protagonist does not want to take care of things, but he will definitely take care of the things in front of him. 2. Gou here doesn't want to cause trouble and enters the world of pirates. What about a large part of the story that Oda didn't write? We just follow Luffy's perspective to see the world. There are many things we can't see. There are many powerful people. There are many silver medal players with strange abilities, so it is best to be in the East China Sea where there is a foundation and no strong people. The navy has to patrol, and when it encounters pirates, of course it has to kill them when the other navy is confused. The strong Kuro has already secretly killed them in his spare time. As for why so many things happened in the future, without this book, there would be no need to read it, and it is impossible for the protagonist to ignore it when he encounters it. If he doesn't kill a strong pirate, will he kill him? 3. Regarding the war on top, it is really not good and there is no explanation. The author TND drove it out after waking up from sleep. But some people can't accept Ace's death. Come on, it was originally meant to be dead. On top of the war, the description of the protagonist is not good, and the psychology and discussion of Garp and Sengoku, as well as other naval pirates, are still okay. It's just that the protagonist has problems, very problematic. And Ace had to calm down in the end, forget it. I think this is where One Piece has changed. After all, there are always problems with long stories, and fans are asking for a continuation. But from here on, the nature of Luffy and his gang changes. Third, Luffy and his gang are not dead, which makes me very unhappy, and so do I, but there is nothing I can do about it. Kuro didn't want to see them at first, because there was Garp in the navy, and then he took action and sacrificed a Hades. The second time in the Chambord Islands, Garp came to see off his only grandson, and he died once. Then there is the red hair. After all, he is a Yonko and there is no way he can take Luffy's life by force. However, when going to Wano Country, the description of the red hair blocking him for the second time and beating the red hair was indeed too hasty. However, Kuro had an absolute advantage and would definitely win, and the red hair's purpose was to delay. This part was over. However, it was here that the author said that he was driven out after waking up from sleep. I didn't know that it was the same in the war on top. I must say TNND. When they arrived at Wano Country to harvest, Kuro and his group didn't care if there were more pirates and two Yonko. It would be more problematic to catch Luffy. He was a marine, and the dragon also came later. It's very unpleasant, but he really can't fall off. This is the problem with Luffy's background. If you have anything to discuss, please discuss it, but if you want to be tough, please find a good angle. Thank you.
Apex War is so poorly written.
The protagonist didn't behave at all. After he was sneak-attacked by the Whitebeard Pirates, he said he was angry and casually made two AOE gestures to clear out the soldiers, and then said that he respects Whitebeard and does not attack Whitebeard. Does Whitebeard respect you? He said he would sneak-attack you before. The male protagonist actually wasn't angry at all when he saw the female protagonist being beaten. At that time, the male protagonist had every chance to kill a cadre to make sacrifices to heaven. I believe you when you say that the protagonist has been replaced.
How should I put it? The plot and the name feel completely inconsistent. It talks about wanting to retire, but what does it do that seems like someone who wants to retire? During the war, you can obviously pretend not to contribute much, you can act like Garp or Kizaru, but you feel like you are afraid that others will not know you. The same thing happened later when Luffy went to sea. How have you beaten Rayleigh? Are you like this if you don't want to be promoted and want to retire? I don't want to go to the new world for safety reasons. Anyone who has watched One Piece knows what will happen to Luffy in the future. If you treat Rayleigh like this, aren't you afraid that he will seek revenge on you later? Do you really want to retire? I changed my name to Admiral. I think it fits the book better.
Chronic poison
Let's talk about the advantages first. Excellent characterization and storytelling skills. This ability is most vividly reflected in the "Kingdom of Stories", "Shishi Goro", "The Kingdom of Regaining the Heart of Resistance", and the psychological descriptions of the Golden Lion's Aloof Red World Destroyer and others. This is why I have been following this novel. There is no doubt that the author does have extremely powerful short story capabilities and psychological portrayal skills. Then there are the drawbacks. Contrary to the short-form ability, the author's long-form ability is completely unqualified. Reluctantly rising to the rank of general step by step is the main plot of this book, and the dramatic promotion is also a highlight. The author handled this point very poorly in the middle and later stages. Take for example when the Straw Hats go to sea and Rayleigh stops the protagonist. If it is really to avoid trouble and get credit, letting the Straw Hats quietly board the ship and go to sea, or play a cutscene with Rayleigh, is very consistent with the protagonist's big goal of not making meritorious deeds. But how did the author handle it? Lock the Sunny in the naval base to create conflicts, and let Leda be "injured" by Zoro, which escalates the conflict. She was beaten severely when she couldn't exert her full strength during the battle, which completely intensified the conflict. From the third perspective, this step is completely the protagonist's fault. So the big Sonny is locked in the naval base and your protagonist has been in Shampoo for two years. You don't know that he will be injured in the battle. He knows that once blood is seen, it will not end well, but he doesn't tell Lida not to take action. Just open a crushing pressure to solve the pretense and then get punched in the face. Yes, at first glance, the plot seems very reasonable in moving forward step by step, but if you think about it carefully, what the protagonist does is completely opposite to what he thinks. But there is no way, because the author lacks the ability to write novels, and the initial setting conflicts with the development of the plot. In order to cancel the plot, the author can only force the protagonist to "reducing his intelligence". This is why I say this book is a chronic poison. The combination of the author's excellent short story ability and insufficient long-form ability made me enjoy the first half and then became very uncomfortable in the middle and back parts. There is no doubt that this is a good book. I will always remember the pride of the golden lion, the aloofness of the red earl, the persistence of Wu Lang, and the king's sacrifice to arouse the people's resistance.
Read more than a hundred chapters
I saw the Whitebeard Pirates attack the Navy Headquarters, it was so vicious! Even if the protagonist wants 🐶, but during the group fight and the final battle, just because he doesn't want to be resented by Garp or worried about Luffy, he just doesn't work hard? Please, you are a soldier! Are you the only one who has traveled through time? It makes me laugh! Your comrades are all trying their best to kill pirates, but you still take advantage of this situation? Do you have the nerve to say you like a safe life? My hometown is gone, how safe is it? Are you still a shitty navy? I only have one word - just obey, tui! Rubbish! This is just my own opinion, don't criticize if you don't like it! What a rubbish! I still want 🐴 Vomited
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Like the title, the writing is also good




Gou elite I'm strong, but I don't stand out The credit is all yours, please let me live a quiet life. The Age of Great Pirates. The sea is turbulent and the strong ones are destroying the heaven and the earth. They are fighting each other. It's really frustrating-- Can't get excited! I, Rusiru Kulo, am twenty-four years old, and my biggest dream is: Live this life safely!




Character card name: Lu Xilu, Ku Luo Male: 24 Occupation: Navy Swordsman Hobbies: Smoking and salted fish Idol: Iron Fist Finn Bodi Dream: I want to live my whole life eating and drinking safely in the East China Sea. I envy my fellow Navy Iron Fist Finn Bodi the most, and I think that only living as cool and unrestrained as him is my life. --Taken from the readers' summary in the book review area




An unconventional pirate novel. The protagonist has an extremely monstrous personality. The first three chapters are the best this year in terms of excitement. The author's writing style is very good. It is most likely that the old author has changed his vest. The layout of the writing reminded me of "The Pirate Code".























