The Heavens Begin from the World of Zhetian

I really want to know why you fell in love with people like Hong Yi for no reason. If you develop faster than the original protagonist, then they are trash. They have no effect on you and are still working as nannies. If you develop slower than the original protagonist, then you are trash and just abandon them. The nanny novel is really disgusting.

If the Holy Spirit is not born satisfactorily, then at least he is at the level of a saint. Why don't you write a piece of cake?

The journey of survival starting from Zhetian is written by the Holy Spirit

First, time travel. As clearly stated in the previous article, the protagonist can travel through different worlds at any time without consuming anything! As a result, the front has been blocking the great worlds such as the Tomb of the Sun God and the Sun! Doesn't it mean that even alchemy can help the protagonist seize the stone body of the god in the world of Zhetian? Isn't it Zhu Tianwen? Is the Desert Emperor not strong enough? Or is it that the great sage's devouring and capturing power is not enough to cheat? Since you can't write it, don't make it so easy to travel through the heavens! Not consumed yet! Absolutely hilarious! There are so many awesome abilities in the world, but you write about them! He... Tui...! . . . Second, thunder disaster. In the Yang Shen system, when the protagonist is at the peak of human immortality, he goes through the tribulation of creation in the Zhetian Realm? Great idea [thumbs up]! Then here comes the problem! In the thunder tribulation of the Yangshen universe, only the spring thunder of the vast world can allow ghosts and immortals to overcome the tribulation (unless there is a thunder pool in the world outside the territory), from the thought to the Yangshen. First? When the protagonist returns to Zhetian, a random thunder disaster will have this effect? ? ? Don't thunder occur in other worlds in the Yangshen universe? Why did the original author set it up that only spring thunder in the universe has an effect? ! Have you ever thought about it? Yang Shen is the creator of the Seven Tribulations alone. He can create thousands of small worlds at will. Although it is unstable, it is still impressive enough! If the lightning tribulation in the world of Zhetian is so good, then the protagonist can first cultivate the Yangshen system to become the Yangshen. After transcending the tribulation, he can return to Zhetian and use other people's tribulations (such as the four poles of ordinary geniuses). Shouldn't he simply become a Yangshen? Funny! . . . Third, the plot. Extremely funny! After the protagonist is not the Qing Emperor, and the second is not the Emperor's blood, he actually gets the Qing Emperor's soldiers? ? ? Also comes with the Emperor's Heart? ? ? At the beginning, there is only the Bitter Sea Realm. With the addition of a Godly Stone Embryo, can we activate the Qing Emperor's soldiers? ? ? There are also fragments of the Immortal Cauldron! Is that what the protagonist can get? ? ? Guess, is it because Ye Fan is lucky or because a certain empress is paying attention to him? ? ? It's really a second-person fanfic, so we don't need to think more about the original work? If you write without even thinking about logic, do you still have to say "Read it if you like it, but get out if you don't!"? Or "If you have the ability, write it yourself!"? Funny! . . . Finally, when reading this book, you should not think about the original work or follow the logic of the original work. Here, it is reasonable for the protagonist to get opportunities. It is reasonable for the protagonist to activate weapons at multiple levels, even if they are imperial weapons. Anyway, one sentence! Love to see it! Don't look away!

It's so rubbish, it's all about practicing cultivation.

The author's writing style is not like that of a novice, but the result is a lot of clichés, making the character of the protagonist very unlikable. Dog licking, a loser character, a lot of nonsense, always being superior to others, clown behavior jumping around, and all kinds of typical poisonous old routines. This has not even reached the stage when the heroine's poisonous points appear. It has already been dismissed, and it is a waste of subject matter.

At present, I see that the protagonist's strength system is like a patchwork of things. Everything belongs to others, and no one uses his own understanding to form a system.

Choosing the wrong start, what is the start of "Shading the Sky"? On top of the Sacrifice Dao, destroying the Dao of Heaven is the same as playing. The river of time will come back at every turn, going upstream, and everyone will play detachment, so how does your protagonist want to play?

The span is too big, a lot of things are not explained, it's uncomfortable to watch😖

After changing the body, it really looks like the original one╮(＿)╭It's useless