I, the Mortal, Come from the Great World of Xuanhuang

In fact, I have always been thinking about the perfect fandom next door who is trying to grab Shi Hao's chance. Why do the mortal fanfics like to lick Han Li and either dare not grab the Sky Palm Vase or give away resources? I want to say that many people have never read the Immortal World chapter. They are just like Yuanyun. All Taoist ancestors in the mortal system have no ability to travel through time. In the whole text, only the mutated Sky Palm Vase and Bottle Spirit can travel through time. , And at the end of the Immortal World Chapter, Han Li only relied on part of the power of the bottle spirit to travel through the past. Han Li himself has a far-fetched permanent certificate of strength. Although he is known as the Taoist of Time, he only has some abilities such as time acceleration. Similar to the Kamen Rider next door, this closed time loop is very easy to break. It is obvious that the Eternal Certificate belongs to Shi Hao, or the Immortal Fang Han, or the Immortal Rebel Wang Lin. Regardless of talking about this, Han Li still turned left and became the Immortal Emperor perfectly. Moreover, the strength of the Dao Ancestor is weak across the galaxy, and even a single individual cannot boast. Even Shi Hao's opportunity next door dares to be snatched, and here we are afraid of this and that. However, many colleagues like to recruit Nangong Wan, Zi Ling and other old devil women. *** How is this different from grabbing the sky bottle? It's very funny, let alone Han Li. Samsara Han Li has no time to hide in ancient times or today, and he still wants to interfere with the lower world. You treat the majestic power of the interface as a decoration. I can only say that it is very eye-catching. This book is okay. In fact, it kills Han Li. I am not surprised.

Why bother with so many women if you don't write about the harem? ? Moreover, the women you provoked in the mortal world did not see any benefits from you, such as magic weapons, exercises, pills, etc. They were left alone for decades, and there was no description of any emotions. When did you face your own heart and accept them all? ? It's okay to just be friends. I usually help the other person practice more and give him some resources. I guess they won't refuse. It's better than just fishing like this, right?

I feel that the increase in combat power is too slow. Immortal life is supposed to increase combat power quickly. You are still a mortal, and getting a qi training method as a mortal is like having never seen the world. Just a tenth level of body refining, which lasted dozens of chapters. I don't know what you are thinking. You can't be called a poisonous person, but you look so boring that people can't stand it.

Here, first of all, when writing the mortal chapter, especially the Chaos Star Sea chapter, there are some flaws. The most important thing is the timeline, which was written in a hurry. Second, regarding the immortality system, the writing of the physical body breaking through the magical realm is very wrong. In the original text, the protagonist's divine transformation has 12-3 horsepower. Even if it is a little more perfect, it can only have 20 horsepower at most, but once it breaks through the realm of supernatural power, it can only have 200 horses at most. (The physical body breaks through the supernatural power, which is only ten times the difference at most.) How can it have thousands of horsepower? The mortal system is based on Qi training. The immortality method breaks through supernatural power by combining physical energy and blood with mental power and turning it into magic power. However, Qi training in the mortal system basically does nothing to improve the physical energy and blood. I'm curious, where does the energy come from to give you thousands of horsepower as soon as you break through? The original work mentioned that practicing Panwu's powerful magical power can reach a maximum of one hundred horses in the physical realm. Breaking through the magical power can only reach a thousand horses. One hundred horses in the physical realm can be used as a limit. Even the Dragon God Pill, the best heavenly elixir that appears in the original work and can be used in the physical realm, is not so powerful. The Dragon God Pill allows even those who do not practice the Three Thousand Great Dao specifically for the physical body to reach the Hundred Horses level in the physical realm. Therefore, the author is really a bit arbitrary in writing in this regard. Secondly, let's talk about the comparison of the two realm systems. Mortals, practice Qi. Establish the foundation, form the elixir, Yuanying, and transform into the spirit. . . Eternal life, ten levels of physical body, and ten levels of supernatural powers. . . As long as the Qi Lian Thirteen Perfection's combat power is not close, there is no pressure to deal with the 12-3 horse's magical transformation, but once you practice the skills related to the Three Thousand Avenues and add spiritual weapons, you can crush the Qi Lian Dzogchen. Yes, the eternal system. Once you break through the magical power and practice the great magical power, your combat power can rival that of pill formation. But if you want to win, you have to look at how much power you have and whether your supernatural powers are perfect. The realm of horsepower and mana of around 100-200 is still a bit far behind. 🉑Once you break through the true essence, you can rival the Nascent Soul stage. After all, the structure of the immortality system is basically ten times different. . But once you break through Yuan Gang and compete with ordinary gods in the early stages of transformation, plus magical powers, spiritual weapons, and treasures, there will be no problem. Eternal life system, early stage. The realm of yin and yang is a key point of combat power. Invincible God Transformation, there is no problem in dealing with ordinary practitioners. But once you break through the realm of heaven and human beings, practice various magical powers, and reach the three thousand avenues, you will basically be invincible if you are a master or less, if you are a particularly evil person. Plus the Taoist tools, the Mahayana stage is useless. After all, the gap between the mortal system and the immortal system is too big. And. The immortality system has too many methods. Of course, it must be a kind of heavenly person who is particularly defiant. Generally speaking, the immortal golden elixir stage corresponds to the Mahayana of mortals.

The realm of immortality cultivation is divided into the following ten levels: 1. The secret realm of the physical body: health maintenance, strength training, moves, hardness and softness, divine power, breath, interior decoration, bravery, psychic, magical transformation. 2. The secret realm of supernatural power: the realm of magic power, the realm of true essence, the realm of Yuangang, the realm of yin and yang, the realm of heaven and man, the unity of all dharma, the seeds of golden elixir, the catastrophe of wind and fire, the law of heaven and earth, and changing destiny against heaven. 3. The secret realm of immortality: Longevity Realm, Immortal Body, Cave Heaven Realm, Cosmic Light Realm, Creation Realm, Heavenly Position Realm, Realm King Realm, Mixed Cave Realm, Void Immortal Realm, and Truth. 4. The secret realm of immortals: Celestial Immortal, Divine Immortal, Mysterious Immortal, Da Luo Jin Immortal, Ancestor Immortal, Yuan Immortal, Holy Immortal, Supreme Immortal, Heavenly Lord, Immortal King, Supreme Broken. 5. The secret of eternal life: eternal life.

This book is very difficult to read. There are so many typos and punctuation marks. The narrative tone and many expressions feel very far-fetched. To be honest, the plot is not coherent at all. The pig's feet described in the book feel like a waste and immature mind. I insisted on reading more than a hundred chapters. I can't stand it anymore. It's hard for the author to write so many words. It feels like the plot is pieced together. Like this, a paragraph comes to mind here, and a paragraph comes to mind there. There are repetitive narrative descriptions in many places in the book, that is, the number of water words, and they appear again and again. I think at least one-third of the words should be removed. Moreover, the characters described in the book feel like they have been dumbfounded by pig's feet. The pig's feet are also a bit too self-righteous, and the character shaping is not good. I feel that the author has failed in describing it, alas.

If you stay in the eternal world for a year. People in the mortal world all die of old age. Does this setting make sense?

By the time Han Li gave birth to a baby, Fang Han had grown to the point where he could destroy the spirit world with his wave of hands. The growth rates of the two books were so different that forcing immortality to write a mortal plot would only lower the protagonist's level.

I hope the author can update it to more than 600 chapters.

The trash protagonist has a treasure that he has to expose and practice for so many years. He behaves like a trash and acts like a retarded person.