Mortal: I Only Came to the System after I Reached Nascent Soul

The garbage is poisonous as hell. When I saw a woman leaving the factory, she was verbose for a long time, explaining her past. Explain your mother. The protagonist is already a Nascent Soul, and he still looks like a virgin. I can't move when I see a woman

Han Li, the protagonist, only came into contact with cultivation in the early stage of Yuanying. After Han Li formed the elixir, the protagonist still stayed put. The original work Han Li was only 40 years old from the early stage to the middle stage of Yuanying. The protagonist has a system and talent, but he still can't break through after a hundred years It is estimated that the protagonist will be promoted to the mid-stage after all the supporting characters have broken through the Nascent Soul, and then it will be a pleasure to see the Nascent Soul defeat the Huashen in the mid-stage Nascent Soul . The combat power will continue to improve, but the realm will never rise.

You have already cultivated to become an immortal. If you become a Ninja Turtle even if you are a Nascent Soul, then your cultivation is not in vain.

Below the standard, the introduction to the laws of the dark forest and so on, which is indeed a mortal background, and then the human touch, and the interaction between masters and brothers, damn it, people who are hundreds of years old act like middle school students and buddies. There is no sense of stability as a cultivator. If a mortal with this kind of out-of-character personality really survives, he probably won't live to adulthood. If you can't write, go home and see your grandpa. I'm looking to see if your grandpa's grandpa will be like you. After 300 years of practice, you can only improve your cultivation level, but not your brain. I slipped away and didn't even look at the free ones.

Let me tell you my personal opinion. I also came across this book by chance. I read it with the intention of giving it a try. I thought it was a cool novel or a stud novel, Ruozhi's book. Unexpectedly, it wasn't until after reading it that I felt that the author of this book was not a newcomer, but might even be a hidden boss. I haven't even clicked on the author's homepage yet. I read it in one go and was still unsatisfied. It was like eating out at a restaurant. I didn't put the bowl down until I licked the bottom of the bowl clean. This book is close to the original work and has enough details. There are many details in the novel about cultivating immortals that no veteran can write. For example, when it comes to the spiritual stones used for cultivating immortals and the purchase of magic weapons through trade, some authors just mention them in one go, some authors go into detail, and some authors directly dismantle the spiritual stones and turn them into spiritual crystals. I was also confused when I saw them. Moreover, this book does not lick the protagonist at all, nor does it have a stallion. It is not like playing poker in a harem like other novels of the same name. At the beginning of the book, you have the desire to read more. As we all know, most of the novels about cultivating immortals either start with four spiritual roots or five spiritual roots. Either the parents died, or they suffered a lot of hardships before slowly becoming stronger and growing up. This novel is completely direct about Yuanying, and even the experience of becoming Yuanying is described. Of course, the book written by the author is not perfect. There are always a few problems that can find flaws, but the problems are not major and the general direction is still grasped. I think the author's foreshadowing of this incarnation may be of great use in the future. It's just a incomplete version now, and it should be completed later. When they meet a strong enemy, the opponent will probably be confused, how can two identical people cooperate so smoothly. It's like the people walking out of the mirror. Could they be twins? I've been talking for so long, and I'm grateful to be here. What I said before is just my heartfelt opinion on this book. Great write up! It's great. There are very few novels written by mortals with the same name that are so beautiful. I hope the author doesn't want eunuchs, hhh

It's good in the early stage, but not so good in the later stage. There is a golden finger that is more outrageous than the entire mortal world and forced me to downgrade it. If I hadn't looked good in the early stage, I would have given you one or two stars.

The writing is terrible, the plot is rubbish, it's all narration, it treats people like fools, it's too far-fetched, it's not dedicated to cultivating immortality, and it even went out of its way to have a baby.

It's hard to explain in one sentence, the dialogue is long-winded and the system is useless. If Han Li doesn't improve, the author won't be able to write the plot.

Nangong Wan is so popular in the 3D area that she doesn't accept her. This is not to my liking.

What happened to Nascent Soul? Among mortals, Nascent Soul is trash. I can only shake it in the mortal world. In the spiritual world, you are not even as good as the bottom. What's more, there is a fairyland. It would not be strange for someone without Goldfinger to run out of life and die in the mortal world. The title of the book also despises the fact that Goldfinger came late.