The True King Has Arrived

Ordinarily, in the world described in the plot, there are no distinctions between good guys and bad guys, and where do so many explanatory narrations come from, and do some inexplicable things, and the people who meet the protagonist suddenly become modern NPCs. A long and sensational plot is written, which is not even as good as a novel written by a novice. I can only say that it is suitable for some children who do not have much cognitive ability and discernment.

If you write about the Five Kingdoms Rebellion period, it's okay, but you write about the Anshi Rebellion in the Tang Dynasty. Please read more and learn more about history. Otherwise, you shouldn't write historical articles about magic reform. It's a rubbish book.

Advantages 1. The content is smooth and the plot is okay. 2. The writing is touching and can be considered sensational, it depends on how the readers take it. Others 1. The monster said that the protagonist smelled very good. The protagonist wore the monster's smelly clothes and smeared his face and was able to get away without being recognized. The smell could not be covered up. 2. The protagonist goes to a pawn shop to pawn a knife. The shopkeeper has no defense power, and there are no thugs and no assistants. He only has a rolling pin. If he has no defense power, anyone can steal it. How is it possible? 3. He pawned his only weapon, and the money from selling the weapon was exposed and was robbed by gangsters. 4. Bandits rob rangers. The common people at the bottom have no strength. They are poor in culture and rich in martial arts. Those who can afford to be rangers have money, connections and strength. They are not afraid that people with relatives, strength and influence will provoke green forest experts or officials. 5. The trophies are said to be returned to their original owners. How can you tell the difference? Take a broken knife you picked up from a monster. There are good knives among the bandits' trophies. 6. The bandits' cottage actually kept the old, weak, sick and disabled for several years for what purpose. Those who could be exchanged for money were exchanged for money, and those who could be used as slaves were slaves. What could the old, weak, sick and disabled be used for, and why were they kept?

Chapter 7 is awesome. For a man-eating demon, does the author's demon slaying still need to subdue his heart? Is it called subduing demons and slaying demons if their obsessions dissipate?

I'm too lazy to write. It's rubbish rules and I need more word count.

It's pale and sensational. Your writing power can't support the story you want to write. If you force it to be written, it's just a piece of shit. The fighting power behind it will directly collapse and become a piece of shit.

The more I read, the more chaotic the writing becomes. The plot is only narration accounting for 90% of the story, and it is also forced to explain that in a troubled world, I can't survive but still make trouble everywhere, how can I really be a gentleman? Does the title of this book match the content?

I feel drowsy at first sight, has a mediocre sleep-aid effect, and is easily confused. The background of the Tang Dynasty is too ridiculous. Since it is not the Tang Dynasty, why bother with it? It was a mess, and Li Taibai's sword came out. Why don't you write about Gao Lishi's magic boots?

I can't even finish one chapter, I just feel like there's a lot of nonsense

Just know water and a plot. All kinds of water. .