The Rise of the True Spirit of Mortals Cultivating Immortality
About This Novel
Traveling through time as a wild beast, eating grass and drinking frost and dew, Hao Ye had no choice but to accept his fate despite being unwilling to do so. Until that day, an uninvited guest suddenly came to the house of the second fool in the village. He was the third uncle who worked for Qixuanmen! From this day on, Hao Ye embarked on a treacherous but colorful road to immortality. (Mortal flow, non-original parties will not affect reading)
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Official(19)Scraped 5d ago
Follow upstairs,
I followed you upstairs to too many places, come on upstairs
This is a novel about selling dog meat over sheep's heads. I originally thought it was about the cultivation of exotic beasts, but it turned out that by practicing Qi, I could transform into them. When you write about demon cultivators, you write about demons, and when you write about people, you write about humans. If you write about demon cultivators as if they were human beings, it would be better to just read your book and read that the other protagonists are human beings.
I'm first
I am the first to support Youyou and don't want to be a eunuch.
I feel like it will be similar to other fandoms if it continues like this. No demon cultivator characteristics
It's basically the same as ordinary people writing novels. I don't know if the author has seen The Monkey King, in which the protagonist is also an earth traveler who transforms into a monkey. However, the author has a good idea and quickly transforms the protagonist's humanity into animal nature. Push the protagonist to the opposite side of humanity. The author can refer to the plot ideas of the Big Monkey. Really good! You can also learn from the plot of "Deer Monster Chasing the Deer" in which the protagonist and his friends escape together. It is to arrange a few or one or two monster companions for the protagonist to escape from the human monks together, and then arrange a plot in which the protagonist's companions are killed by human monks in order not to delay, or other accidents, so that the protagonist can recognize the reality and the fact that he is a monster. It's not good that the main character is a demon cultivator and his identity is too peaceful and stable.
My feeling after reading more than ten chapters
Can the author make the protagonist look like a monster, instead of treating the monster who stays up late as a human being, okay? If you write the monster as a human being, it will be no different from other fan fiction. Moreover, the protagonist has not realized that he is a demon in this life! , At least you should write that he is decisive and rational in his killing! Otherwise, I might as well read other, fanfics.
Not interesting, just written. It's so humble, so many details.
66666
The book that was written about 22 years ago is actually 25 years old today. Still updating. There are only about 200,000 words. Really 6. I rushed to the street and got home.
Author, please don't be a eunuch, come on
Another modern thought. Brainwashed youth. I think about pie in the sky every day. Goldfinger pretends to be a harem
very good
Very nice, some of them are very satisfying
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Official(19)Scraped 5d ago
Follow upstairs,
I followed you upstairs to too many places, come on upstairs
This is a novel about selling dog meat over sheep's heads. I originally thought it was about the cultivation of exotic beasts, but it turned out that by practicing Qi, I could transform into them. When you write about demon cultivators, you write about demons, and when you write about people, you write about humans. If you write about demon cultivators as if they were human beings, it would be better to just read your book and read that the other protagonists are human beings.
I'm first
I am the first to support Youyou and don't want to be a eunuch.
I feel like it will be similar to other fandoms if it continues like this. No demon cultivator characteristics
It's basically the same as ordinary people writing novels. I don't know if the author has seen The Monkey King, in which the protagonist is also an earth traveler who transforms into a monkey. However, the author has a good idea and quickly transforms the protagonist's humanity into animal nature. Push the protagonist to the opposite side of humanity. The author can refer to the plot ideas of the Big Monkey. Really good! You can also learn from the plot of "Deer Monster Chasing the Deer" in which the protagonist and his friends escape together. It is to arrange a few or one or two monster companions for the protagonist to escape from the human monks together, and then arrange a plot in which the protagonist's companions are killed by human monks in order not to delay, or other accidents, so that the protagonist can recognize the reality and the fact that he is a monster. It's not good that the main character is a demon cultivator and his identity is too peaceful and stable.
My feeling after reading more than ten chapters
Can the author make the protagonist look like a monster, instead of treating the monster who stays up late as a human being, okay? If you write the monster as a human being, it will be no different from other fan fiction. Moreover, the protagonist has not realized that he is a demon in this life! , At least you should write that he is decisive and rational in his killing! Otherwise, I might as well read other, fanfics.
Not interesting, just written. It's so humble, so many details.
66666
The book that was written about 22 years ago is actually 25 years old today. Still updating. There are only about 200,000 words. Really 6. I rushed to the street and got home.
Author, please don't be a eunuch, come on
Another modern thought. Brainwashed youth. I think about pie in the sky every day. Goldfinger pretends to be a harem
very good
Very nice, some of them are very satisfying
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