Mortal: Rebirth of Qingyi Layman

There is no golden finger or system in the book, so how did the pig's feet come to the mortal world? As a relatively normal person, shouldn't I sort out my skills and magical powers when I first traveled through time? Running around before even recovering to the Nascent Soul realm at the beginning? The most speechless thing is the logic behind the settings in the book. For example, the fairy magic obtained is just mentioned in one stroke? After finding the Palm Heaven Bottle, you are actually afraid of affecting the plot? Then if you are afraid of changing the plot, shouldn't the pig's feet lie down and wait to die? The most unreliable thing is that the pig's feet found the spirit stone vein, the big head took it away, and the small heads were thrown away? What does the pig's foot want to do? I guess I didn't even write an outline when I was writing this book, right? Write whatever comes to mind?

Got everything? I still want to return it, and I don't dare to argue with Old Demon Han about anything. Are you traveling through time? Why do you write fan fiction? It's uncomfortable to watch.

? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? Can you write about the spirit world? ? Give it back

When the protagonist discovers the Sky Palm Vase, the mortal Han Li has not yet been born, and has not attracted the attention of Han Li in the reincarnation at all. Therefore, the Palm Palm Vase has not been discovered. The current Palm Palm Vase is ownerless and has no cause and effect.

This book is hopeless. Are there no better novels about cultivating immortals? Nowadays, every one of these novels has toxic points that make people uncomfortable. I usually quit after reading the beginning. It's so rubbish.

This is the trashiest mortal fanfic I've ever written.

Do you want to return the Zhang Tian Bottle? I don't want to see it anymore after seeing this. I want to return the ownerless thing that took sixty years to find? It's not a time point that Han Li can monitor in reincarnation, damn!

What are you writing about? You'd better stop writing

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It's very well written, link by link.