Late Monks Create an Eternal Clan of Immortals

It's okay to write about a demonic elephant that shakes the earth. Is holding the ground upside down?

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Nowadays, many novels are influenced by the Dragon-Elephant Prajna Kung Fu. In fact, the power of elephants is just commonplace, and dragons are mythical creatures. Who can compare to the dragon species in terms of power? Many authors just follow what others say. Many Kung Fu techniques often use elephants to describe how powerful they are. Forget it if you write about martial arts. When you write about immortals, they also use elephants to describe how powerful they are. I don't know what that means.

The cheat sheet in this book is relatively weak, and I wasn't originally going to write a cheat sheet, but firstly, it's difficult to sign a contract, and secondly, it's difficult to visualize the protagonist's realm and skills, so I wrote a panel to remind readers of the protagonist's realm and skill attributes. Thank you for your support. It is very important to catch up on Tuesday. Please click to read the latest chapter.

Frankly speaking, this book is really well written, but there are a few issues that are very jarring. First of all, the main character practices the Elephant Demon Kung Fu and has such a heaven-defying magical power. Isn't it too much? Forget it if you have magical powers at the beginning. Is your technique too simple? If you accept that the technique is simple, the question is: Is it too easy to master it? You might as well give the protagonist some trouble! The second problem is that I have read a lot of genre novels, but the protagonist in your novel is too heavy-handed. He is old, disabled and disfigured, and has no personal charm, at least in the initial stage (´･_･`). So you have such a unique protagonist, how many readers do you think can accept it🤔. Maybe the alien transformation of the fetus will change the protagonist in the later stage, but you can be more straightforward, at least let people see some hope! To be honest, I'm really not a pretty person, but every time I think about the protagonist being old, lame, and fucking disfigured, I just want to say, forget it, let's not live forever like this😮‍💨

After finishing the things at hand, from now on, I will update 8,000 words a day, divided into two chapters. I usually post it in the early morning. After I post it, I will read it again and correct typos and logical problems. It usually takes about twenty minutes. This will not cause reading difficulties for Taoist friends who read during the day. In addition: The book review section and the book promotion section have been saying that this book requires eunuchs. Please don't spread rumors. I have no experience of being a eunuch. It is true that this book has poor results, and I ask for your support.

So far, the writing is very good, suitable for old bookworms. Come on, keep up the good work and don't blow up.

It can't be opened, and the talent system is unreliable He also practiced hard and was so miserable

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Because I am a part-time writer, I usually finish the first draft and framework first, and then read it several times to make modifications. This is a waste of time, so I have to update every time. There may be some problems with the logic and language in some places. Generally, modifications will be completed within 20 or 30 minutes after release. You can refresh a few times after seeing the new chapters. Thank you again for your support.