Jian Zong Outer Gate

There are two kinds of immortal professions that I like. One is the medical immortal, who can use golden needles to save people from trouble and bring them back to life. The other type is the Sword Immortal. Being strong is temporary, being handsome is a lifetime thing, not to mention the swordsman is handsome and strong! The chance of the male protagonist in this article is a bead with unknown functions. It inherits the fur technique of the ancient sword sect. It can exercise spiritual consciousness and raise swords. The golden finger is not big. The subsequent strengthening depends on the protagonist's own efforts. Then I felt that this golden finger would consume the protagonist's good luck. Since picking up this bead, the protagonist will definitely encounter something unlucky when going out. Is this the training mechanism of the sword repair sect? If you don't go crazy, you won't survive. If you don't get strong, you will become cold? And the sect that the male protagonist joins now is also very interesting. All kinds of monsters and monsters gathered inside the door. Some were reborn, some traveled through time, and some took the old man with them. The leader of the sect is also a hidden swordsman, which is particularly in line with the temperament of a swordsman who goes crazy and is desperate for his life. Well... I am full of hope for the protagonist's bumpy future. I would like to make a small comment. It would be better if the rhythm of the writing could be better controlled. Before the highlight moment of the story, the rhythm could be tighter to create a sense of tension. The perspective should be more focused on the male protagonist, which can give us readers a better sense of involvement. Just like the highlight moment of the male protagonist in the Hundred Ghosts Picture Scroll, there are too many supporting roles, which somewhat distracts from the protagonist's idea. As a family, I hope the author will write better and better, come on, come on! Six thousand updates per day! PS: I really like the little green snake Hehe!

Oh my god, it's almost 300 chapters and there's still no foundation building, and the pace is too slow.

I have written more than 200 chapters, and there are only three comments. I really don't dare to read them. I just read the first ten chapters, and there wasn't anything particularly toxic about it, but it really didn't attract me. Maybe I'm not suitable.

The author's first book is quite good. Please support it.

It looks pretty good, keep up the good work💪💪💪💪💪💪

Good book thanks 👍. . . . . . The story is fascinating. Come on

Very good, very good, very good, very good, very good, very good

There are a lot of foreshadowings, and the supporting characters are also very online. I just don't know if the author can bring them all back later.

["2222We have to study hard, it's up to us ",""]

Looks good, at least the supporting characters aren't so stupid