Dachixianmen

Each of the two novels has its own depressing points, but after being suppressed, it does not fall below the bottom line, and there will be various climaxes and rebounds. You, a superior cultivator, come directly to bully the protagonist. The protagonist takes the initiative to jump into traps. You take the initiative to feed the protagonist with all kinds of weird plots💩, and the combat power is deliberately suppressed. There must be weird things to hinder the development. The protagonist of this novel is full of poisonous points in various plots. I really want to ask, are all the people reading this novel here to be tortured? In the process of suppressing Xuan Jian, I honestly felt that the depressing plot was justifiable, and the climax points in the later stages or after the plot were very satisfying, and there was no deliberately disgusting plot of bloody murder. After the suppression, this book was bland and underrated, 💩, my God...

This protagonist chose the wrong person, and he is still the leader, and his IQ is completely off the charts. My master is dead, and he still insists on getting closer to the Kongjianmen even though he knows it is related to his family's tradition. He has no clue about his insignificant development and is still good at expressing himself. Isn't this just a way for others to scheme against him? In many places, it has been overdone, and the emphasis on emotions is most vivid. The reason why others use you as a pawn is not because it is profitable. If you are so mediocre and useless, who the hell would be so boring to think about you and plot against you. There are risks everywhere. The biggest failure is that just like the Xuanjian Immortal Clan, the world view is too small. There are big bosses plotting every corner, and Jindan Zhenjun is watching when you go out... How small is this map?

There is no difference between turning it on and off. Since the head position is so busy and the pressure outside is so great, why not let others temporarily practice on your own behalf? You have to work hard on everything. You deserve to be practicing qi for so long. It is boring to watch...

The expectations were high at the beginning, but when it came to the life-seeking part, the plot got a little bit toxic. First, I practiced the fifth level of Qi and perfected it several times, then I practiced Qi and took foundation-building blood pills, then I took a thunder bath and it was like overcoming a tribulation, and then I practiced the sixth level. . . . . However, the author clearly wrote the Sixth Level of Talents to Seek Life! Couldn't it be written that taking Qi training pills to break through to the sixth level might cause the foundation to be unstable? Practicing qi is like going through a thunderstorm, even though it's just one exercise, it's really a bit overwhelming. There is also the practice of practicing qi and taking foundation-building blood pills. Is it necessary to take this blood pill? Does this elixir have to be in the foundation-building stage? The protagonist is practicing Qi😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋

The author said that it will get better in the future, and will not deliberately suppress the combat power, and it will feel better in the future. However, I did not see that. The main reason is that there are many settings copied from Xuanjian, not the practice system, but gold fingers copied too much. Basically, if you copy the Qi settings of Lu, I think it is okay, but the immortal skills in the later stages of Xuanjian are also highly imitated. Can you imitate a killing release, cultivating demon, and gaining pure Qi? ! As for the description of combat, it is indeed a bit awkward. From what I have seen so far, the Xuanjian practice system and the originality of the plot are extra points. There is no other feeling. It is basically at the level of a newcomer. I can't find any faults but there are no bright spots to remember. Generally speaking, it is the kind of book that is easy to be dismissed in the early stage when reading it. It is easy to be dismissed when reading it online. I hope the author can become more awesome in the next book. There is a saying that it is possible to stick to 1380,000 words...

After reading three chapters, I felt that the rating was too low. After reading ten chapters, I felt that the rating was appropriate. After reading chapter twenty, I just wanted to run away with a bucket.

Those who shake thunder are those who shake thunder. A heavy earthquake is an image, and its hexagram is "Heng". The ministers are frightened and their daggers are not tilted, which means that the gentleman is wary of the way of prudence. Yin and Yang are in thin phase, as the "Nei Jing" says, "water and fire are evil to each other", and thunder is born in this turbulence. In the past, Shaozi divided the image into four. Taiyin governs tranquility, and the sun drives motion. Although the yang hexagram is vibrating, it embodies the power of heaven and yin, and cooperates with the sun and moon to maintain the order of sacrifices. In the past, it was a sign of imperial power. "彖" said, "Shou Zong Temple She Ji", which is extremely noble. However, yin and yang are more victorious, with countless ups and downs, and later developed into the military strategist's "Yun Lei Tun" plan, gradually leaving the sacred and entering the mortal world. Alas! The thunder from the sky shakes hundreds of miles, and the world changes. How can its majesty only exist in Yao Xiang?

The writing style is nothing to say, it has the style of a classic fairy tale, but the plot is really unbearable, dozens of chapters are like boiled water. 1. Twenty chapters in, the protagonist has risen to a level, and there is no specific introduction to the level up. I read the comments and said that it is an imitation of Xuanjian. Does this mean that everyone has seen Xuanjian? I haven't read it, so I'm totally confused about what life and sex are. Where they come from, what they do, and what impact they have on breakthroughs, the author didn't mention a word. 2. The plot is depressing and has golden fingers. The only problem the protagonist encounters in the early stage is that his cultivation is insufficient and he will be annexed by other forces. So from the perspective of the protagonist, developing the sect is not the first priority, but improving one's own cultivation is. The protagonist does not have any system for recruiting apprentices through lottery. At this time, he does not want to explore the use of cheats, make money, and hide the sect. Instead, he takes the position of leader seriously. This is very unconvincing. 3. Create supporting characters before the main character is formed. What is the character of the protagonist? Is he flamboyant or honest? Is he an impulsive young man or a calm middle-aged man? Is he brave or wise? It feels like the protagonist is always changing. He is said to be calm and wise, like a novice when encountering problems, and he is said to be youthful and energetic, and then he looks old-fashioned.

First of all, give me a good review. After all, there are too few books that can be read. The setting of this book is based on the Xuanjian Immortal Clan, which is a method of developing family sects. The difference lies in the author's description of the characters. The author of Xuanjian is more mellow and sophisticated, and each person's character is clear and decisive. The protagonist of this book is too weak and has no principles. He relies entirely on others to improve his cultivation. It's a calculated gift. It's all arranged all the way, and the understanding and qualifications are also very poor. I don't know what the author wants to express, but you must at least have something to write a protagonist. After all, everyone reads online articles and they are more enjoyable. You have to write a protagonist with a character based on the template of an ordinary person. It seems laborious and unreasonable. After all, you have too much desire to become an immortal and an ancestor without any means. I hope it will be better in the future.

I read it together with the two books on Immortals. I'm used to seeing the system of mortals cultivating immortals, so it's a nice change of taste.