Please Call Me Dao Zu

Fierce is fierce, just like the perfect world, but there is no backstage, no eggs, sooner or later you will die by calculation, or you will die without calculation.

Don't write so many chapters in the first realm. It's hard to grasp. I just read a novel before. The first realm has more than 200 chapters and I haven't finished it. There are eight or nine realms in the back, but it is finished in 600 chapters and the rest is unfinished. In this novel, I read almost 200 chapters and still practice qi. How to write the rest is very difficult. The great author Chen Dong also has this problem.

It looks good, but it has more than 400 cards, and it still feels a bit like building a base. The level is so slow in the early stage, so each subsequent big realm must not have hundreds of cards

I enjoyed reading it. In other novels, the protagonist has cheats and always suppresses his fighting power and still clings to it. In this novel, if you make me unhappy, I will kill you. At worst, this is the kind of pleasure that we want to die together. I have read a novel before that has a physical exercise method that is very suitable for the protagonist. The protagonist kills people so that their souls are imprisoned in his body and suffers for life after life. At the same time, he can exercise his body. It also allows his enemies to watch the protagonist become an immortal. If you dare to go against me, I will kill you and make you suffer for life after life. Or I can be a royal sail. It is so exciting to watch.

There is no big problem with the content of the work itself, but it has been stuck at a low level for too long. If the author had written more than 400 chapters about Golden Elixir or Nascent Soul, the results would have been much better, but it is still a pity. I look forward to the author's next work. The book itself is too procrastinating and drives readers away. If the content is slightly changed and the level is gradually improved to keep up, it will definitely be a masterpiece. Maybe the author originally wanted to write thousands of chapters, but ignored the market. If the mortal reaches Chapter 160 of Foundation Establishment, and the Golden Elixir reaches Chapter 120 of Nascent Soul (including Nascent Soul Consummation), then it should be no problem if you add them later. Because the protagonist Goldfinger is a snowball, it stands to reason that the higher the snowball, the faster it is. It's a pity, but I hope the author doesn't lose heart.

Now, in order to write the protagonists as useless counterattacks with extremely poor talents and extremely low starting points, these authors could just write them as a vegetative person dreaming of cultivating immortality.

The further I look back, the more I find the combat power, skills, and thinking described in the early stages to be ridiculous. Especially at the conference on the way back to the sect, there were Nascent Soul and Dao Zun. You are not like these golden elixirs. Your tone, slogans, and skills are louder than the sky. To others, you are just a toad or a bug sitting in a well watching the sky! And they don't even have the skills to advance to the golden elixir. Isn't this just a novice pecking each other, Xia Chong Yu Bing!

The protagonist gives people a feeling that there is something wrong with him at the beginning. He has no background, but he is still so crazy, and his personality is so extreme. He is not that awesome even if he is awesome. I could make do with writing this kind of story a few years ago.

A group of primary school students feel like they are fighting to the death.

These arrangements are fine, but they are too long. It takes 800,000 words to build the foundation and it will be difficult not to collapse after that.