
Mortal Master Han Li
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Sun Huo: "Master, Han Li." (Daji) Others: "It turns out that he is Han Tianzun's disciple, whose name he has admired for a long time." Sun Huo: "O(∩_∩)O" Sun Huo: "Master, Li Feiyu" (big bad news) Others: "They are the disciples of Old Demon Li, and they joined forces to kill him." Sun Huo: "O_o"! Also known as: Family Master, Han Tianzun. "As Han Li's apprentice, I can run faster than him.
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Official(40)Scraped 2mo ago
It makes me laugh. Han Li has kindly cultivated you into such an awesome person. It's okay in the early stage, so I'll just accept one or two girls. I'm about to ascend to the spiritual world, so I'll accept any girls I see. After arriving in the spirit world, Han Li ascended to the immortal world. Take the master's wife first. Kill Han Li again. When you do this, you look awesome👍
Are you studying under Mr. Han?
The author is great, is the protagonist a disciple of Lao Mo? I see that many of my fans are of the same generation as Lao Mo. It's hard for others to adapt to you being his disciple! If I wasn't a disciple, could I change my name? Otherwise, others will not be able to stand it when they see the name.
The title of this book is a little strange, but the author's writing is okay, but I don't quite understand why he wanted to worship Han Li as his teacher? And there is no need to accept so many women. I think Song Yu and Mu Peiling are enough. Just four stars. I feel that the poison is a bit too poisonous. I still want to worship Han Li as my disciple even though I have an affair. The biggest poison is that it is too jarring.
Even if you are the apprentice of the old devil, the old devil will not care much about you. At most, he will lose some resources to you!
Not in the first chapter
However, if you build a foundation in your 20s, you will go from the 7.8Th level of Qi training to the late stage of foundation building in less than 10 years. In other words, you will reach the 7.8Th level of Qi training in your 10s. He is also a casual cultivator, what an amazing talent.
It's best not to use this kind of novel title when writing fan fiction, as it can easily lead to rejection. When I read Mortal Cultivation of Immortality, I brought in Han Li's perspective. I saw that other fans are basically the same generation as the protagonist. When I saw your title, I felt uncomfortable and felt that I was somehow a generation shorter. When I saw it, I rowed away.
big problem
Author, what you wrote is so fucking weird. I read it so well, but suddenly I'm missing a paragraph for you.
Overall it's okay, but not too many women
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Official(40)Scraped 2mo ago
It makes me laugh. Han Li has kindly cultivated you into such an awesome person. It's okay in the early stage, so I'll just accept one or two girls. I'm about to ascend to the spiritual world, so I'll accept any girls I see. After arriving in the spirit world, Han Li ascended to the immortal world. Take the master's wife first. Kill Han Li again. When you do this, you look awesome👍
Are you studying under Mr. Han?
The author is great, is the protagonist a disciple of Lao Mo? I see that many of my fans are of the same generation as Lao Mo. It's hard for others to adapt to you being his disciple! If I wasn't a disciple, could I change my name? Otherwise, others will not be able to stand it when they see the name.
The title of this book is a little strange, but the author's writing is okay, but I don't quite understand why he wanted to worship Han Li as his teacher? And there is no need to accept so many women. I think Song Yu and Mu Peiling are enough. Just four stars. I feel that the poison is a bit too poisonous. I still want to worship Han Li as my disciple even though I have an affair. The biggest poison is that it is too jarring.
Even if you are the apprentice of the old devil, the old devil will not care much about you. At most, he will lose some resources to you!
Not in the first chapter
However, if you build a foundation in your 20s, you will go from the 7.8Th level of Qi training to the late stage of foundation building in less than 10 years. In other words, you will reach the 7.8Th level of Qi training in your 10s. He is also a casual cultivator, what an amazing talent.
It's best not to use this kind of novel title when writing fan fiction, as it can easily lead to rejection. When I read Mortal Cultivation of Immortality, I brought in Han Li's perspective. I saw that other fans are basically the same generation as the protagonist. When I saw your title, I felt uncomfortable and felt that I was somehow a generation shorter. When I saw it, I rowed away.
big problem
Author, what you wrote is so fucking weird. I read it so well, but suddenly I'm missing a paragraph for you.
Overall it's okay, but not too many women











