Cultivation of Immortality Begins with Extracting the Essence
About This Novel
Lu Sheng opened his eyes through time travel and came to the world of immortality where natural and man-made disasters occurred, and became a little Taoist priest in a dilapidated Taoist temple. It was a severe drought and there was no rain for thousands of miles. The villagers at the foot of the mountain came to ask him to come out of the mountain to pray for rain. Unable to refuse, Lu Sheng forced himself to go out. Originally he just wanted to do a great dance, recite a few mantras, and fool him. The result was unexpected... [Thousands of miles of dry land, the essence of fire is successfully extracted, the progress of the Fiery Yang Technique is increased by five...] [The golden mountain is flooded with water, the essence of water is successfully extracted, the progress of the Water Movement Technique is increased by three...] From the Fiery Yang Technique to the Great Sun True Fire Technique, from the Water Swamp Technique to the Xuan Ming True Water Technique, Lu Sheng originally wanted to grow silently, but he did not expect that he would become a Taoist immortal master amidst natural and man-made disasters.
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No logic
Practicing Qigong requires accelerating the absorption of fire. If others don't invite you, you won't take the initiative to absorb it. You will make a bunch of excuses. It seems that others are begging you to practice before you can practice. A ghost appeared halfway, claiming to be the envoy of the Dragon Lord, and was beaten to death by the protagonist. The protagonist immediately believed the other person's words, was frightened to death, and immediately wanted to run away. Don't you have any doubts? The official came out to ask for rain (asking the protagonist to practice), but the protagonist was frightened by the ghost and decisively refused. I really can't stand it. The scores given by the reviews are very low, why are they so high?
What is justice?
A dragon king wants to eat 10 boys and girls. There is nothing wrong with committing heinous crimes. But it's even more disgusting to see the protagonist's pseudo-righteousness. In order to improve one's own cultivation. High-sounding. When it came time to face the Dragon King, he said that it would not be a loss to exchange 700 soldiers for the Dragon King.
Too much nonsense,
There is so much useless nonsense, it's like keeping a running account
I can only say that it is average
1. It's too wordy. Don't write so much about the protagonist's psychological activities. What psychological activities can fill a chapter? 2. The logic does not make sense. The conflict between the protagonist and the official is not necessary at all. Just say that the Dragon King does not allow it. Also, the reason for not absorbing the fire essence because no one invites me is too reluctant. This is obviously suppressing the protagonist's strength.
In the first chapter, after three months of no rain, the ground dried up, the rivers dried up, and the well water was almost gone. If you change it to three years, it's still about the same. If you can't write it clearly, you can just persuade them to quit in the first chapter.
It's about an old lady's foot-binding cloth. It's smelly and long. It's probably generated by AI. It's a simple sentence or two. I have to use half a sheet to write it for you. It's enough for an ancient horseman to have just one or two sentences. It's not that everyone doesn't understand it. After listening to a few chapters, I got tired and panicked.
There are too many meaningless explanations in the article. The author wishes that the protagonist had to explain several things just to eat or walk.
I have read more than 30 chapters. The writing and description are pretty good, but there are problems with the plot being indifferent and being too trivial and detailed. I hope to get closer!
The writing is immature and the plot progresses slowly (water) The protagonist doesn't have enough currency and the image creation is not good either.
The more I look at it, the more grass grows, and I feel so bad that I'm dying.
Rating
Community(0)
Official(20)
No logic
Practicing Qigong requires accelerating the absorption of fire. If others don't invite you, you won't take the initiative to absorb it. You will make a bunch of excuses. It seems that others are begging you to practice before you can practice. A ghost appeared halfway, claiming to be the envoy of the Dragon Lord, and was beaten to death by the protagonist. The protagonist immediately believed the other person's words, was frightened to death, and immediately wanted to run away. Don't you have any doubts? The official came out to ask for rain (asking the protagonist to practice), but the protagonist was frightened by the ghost and decisively refused. I really can't stand it. The scores given by the reviews are very low, why are they so high?
What is justice?
A dragon king wants to eat 10 boys and girls. There is nothing wrong with committing heinous crimes. But it's even more disgusting to see the protagonist's pseudo-righteousness. In order to improve one's own cultivation. High-sounding. When it came time to face the Dragon King, he said that it would not be a loss to exchange 700 soldiers for the Dragon King.
Too much nonsense,
There is so much useless nonsense, it's like keeping a running account
I can only say that it is average
1. It's too wordy. Don't write so much about the protagonist's psychological activities. What psychological activities can fill a chapter? 2. The logic does not make sense. The conflict between the protagonist and the official is not necessary at all. Just say that the Dragon King does not allow it. Also, the reason for not absorbing the fire essence because no one invites me is too reluctant. This is obviously suppressing the protagonist's strength.
In the first chapter, after three months of no rain, the ground dried up, the rivers dried up, and the well water was almost gone. If you change it to three years, it's still about the same. If you can't write it clearly, you can just persuade them to quit in the first chapter.
It's about an old lady's foot-binding cloth. It's smelly and long. It's probably generated by AI. It's a simple sentence or two. I have to use half a sheet to write it for you. It's enough for an ancient horseman to have just one or two sentences. It's not that everyone doesn't understand it. After listening to a few chapters, I got tired and panicked.
There are too many meaningless explanations in the article. The author wishes that the protagonist had to explain several things just to eat or walk.
I have read more than 30 chapters. The writing and description are pretty good, but there are problems with the plot being indifferent and being too trivial and detailed. I hope to get closer!
The writing is immature and the plot progresses slowly (water) The protagonist doesn't have enough currency and the image creation is not good either.
The more I look at it, the more grass grows, and I feel so bad that I'm dying.
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