
One Strengthening Point a Day
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He cherishes the simple dream of cultivating immortality for three hundred years and living a wanton life. Step by step out of the mud: a mortal miner, a little transparent in the Qi-training stage, a little guard in the foundation-building stage... Until... The great walk in the tribulation stage, running rampant across the world. From being as humble as a weed to radiating light, and finally illuminating the world! Draw circles with your fingers, the equipment is incredibly powerful. Ordinary people are cultivating immortals. How can they do it without failure? Traveling through the world of cultivating immortals, you can strengthen your skills one by one every day. I am an ordinary mortal, struggling to survive in the early stage, and the road to immortality is long. I hope the world will be gentle. ... People and clouds are all floating in the clouds, life and death are not controlled by people. The road to immortality is a dead end, and corpses litter the fields. It's a handyman, it's a wild cultivator, it's a humanoid foundation-building pill... (Special reminder: It's hard to judge the human heart. At the beginning of the book, there are a lot of comments about blind people touching elephants, and demons are dancing around. The beginning is just to echo the ending. The plot is not routine, act according to your heart, and you are a semi-dark person who cultivates immortality!)
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Forced intelligence
Everyone knows how well this book is written. Some people praise it and say it is slow to develop, but I can only say... 1. Born in a farm family in a world of immortal martial arts, I can not work for ten years and still take care of my skin. How can I be happy?? Traveling through ten years, I really don't help at all, but I still do the spiritual victory method every day. I am relieved after being sold by my parents? Do you think this is normal? It's just a few chapters into this. You also said that you want to see the back. Do you have the confidence to see the back? The author is also old. 2. A normal person travels to a poor farmer's family, has not worked for ten years, and still uses mud as a skin care product. Do you think this protagonist's brain is normal? The author makes up for the pitfalls in order to prepare for immortality. Doesn't cultivating immortality depend on one's character? In fact, I quite admire the protagonist. 3. As you read later, you will find that it is even more outrageous. He and his cheap master, and how to use his spiritual stones, you will find that it is more streamlined and there is no technical difficulty. Others write about weird cultivation of immortality, systematic cultivation of immortality, and a little bit of cultivation. Here, they write about lazy people cultivating immortality, and the logic is also very strange. You find that this novel is not written for you, but for the author himself. As long as he feels satisfied, if we feel dissatisfied, we will be refuted after a few words and some untenable views. I also admire people who can keep reading, like that Kunlun No. 1 Immortal? 4. This great author has the most unique conception I have ever seen. His only characteristic is "bland", and his story arrangement is really unique. Three chapters later, the protagonist is sold as a piglet and sent to a mine for mining. Generally speaking, the protagonist prepares to escape while exploring the golden finger. The normal routine is to create chaos himself, or others rush into the mine, and the protagonist earns a fortune and escapes to heaven. In this article, after two years of mining, the author parachuted into the mine and suffered a landslide. The protagonist dug through a tunnel and escaped to heaven. He was unprepared and had no choice but to go robbing when he came out penniless. The protagonist has no initiative at all. To be honest, no matter how reasonable the reasons are arranged by the author, it is a waste of time to mine for 2 years. I feel that the protagonist is mentally retarded and cannot hold up the wall with mud. This is the slow heat that everyone likes. Traveling through the past 12 years, I don't know anything. I don't work at home, but work for others in other people's mines. I am a filial son!! 6. I said that this book has a more interesting plot behind it. The protagonist is chased by weak immortal cultivators. One of them is chasing, the other is running. There is no one who knows how to play in the game. None of the traps arranged by the protagonist were useful. The protagonist made a completely useless effort. The author explained that the preparation was too hasty. Three or four of the traps arranged were not triggered. The only one that was triggered was not lethal and was solved by a fireball. With this level of trap, it can lead to some monsters to die. Isn't it good to just survive. The strangest thing is that both sides ran out of endurance. When they were about to take a break and were about to run the second lap, they suddenly stopped and started trading on the same spot. After the transaction, no one attacked and the black hands broke up peacefully. The quality of this cultivator was too high, and the skills he was given were intact and not missing a few pages. No one will be confused by this plot. 7. Either you want to get out of here, at least it will feel better. This book accurately avoids all the cool points and is as bland as water. Either the layout of the writing is so wonderful that you will be attracted by the story. What is this of yours?
This book is bad
The first one or two chapters really made me vomit. In the first chapter, make excuses for your laziness. The excuses don't have to be reasonable. In order to strike up a conversation, I have to protect my appearance. I just don't help my parents work. My parents are still farmers. This highlights a protagonist who has no filial piety. In the second chapter, tell me, you can't let go of your past life. How can such an unfilial protagonist be unable to let go of his past life? Spouse? Then the previous chapter was about saving your appearance for the sake of striking up a conversation. If you were just an aboriginal, you wouldn't be criticized for not having filial piety, but the protagonist is a reincarnation and an adult, so you still don't understand?
It is recommended that friends who read this book do not read book reviews for the first 50 chapters.
To be honest, the plot and writing of the real book are okay, but the book reviews are really hard to describe, and there are all kinds of faults and troubles. Every sentence of the author, every plot, every setting, every explanation will be criticized by a large group of people. In fact, the quality of this book is not bad, but it is relatively slow to develop, and the protagonist is just an ordinary person. He is an ordinary person, and he is an ordinary person without much ability. If it were not for the standard plug-in for time travellers, I guess this kind of character would have no motivation to live. This plug-in is not so much the protagonist's golden finger as it is the protagonist's spiritual support. Really, I haven't seen such a frustrated protagonist in a long time.
A little weird, but look at it again
This novel feels very depressing and depressing. I've read almost 300 chapters and only have about 20 chapters? The main character is killing people randomly, and the rest are quite depressing, but these twenty chapters are really the explosion of long-suppressed things, which is really quite interesting. The story itself is probably about a super twisted world of immortality that is completely monopolized by upper-level forces. Although it is super twisted and dark, I think this world setting is unique and unconventional. As for whether this setting is reasonable or not, I think it is reasonable. Because this world of cultivating immortals does not have any external enemies, even the demon world mentioned in a few words is almost as corrupt and dark as this world of cultivating immortals. Personally, I feel that if the protagonist becomes the most powerful in the end and really wants the world to get better, he will have to keep killing and bring disaster to the world, so that the corrupt sect will have to cultivate geniuses and have to unite to face the disaster brought by the protagonist. Of course, this is just a personal opinion. Let's move on from the plot, let's talk about the characterization. The protagonist is similar to this world, twisted and sick. But whether the world has made the protagonist so distorted, or whether he is always like this, I will not comment. Let's just say that the protagonist stopped working when he was a child. In order to become a fairy in the future, he didn't want his face to get tanned or anything like that. Although the author has explained that if you go to work, you are likely to have a heat stroke or die, but I think this person is still very twisted, because he will give up everything because of a little trivial matter or a small possibility. He can choose to be lazy in the summer, but do what he can when it's not so hot. Such a character did allow him to survive in this twisted world of immortality, but he still felt very twisted. Maybe in that world, distortion was the norm. Let's talk about the character relationships. The relationship between the protagonist and several female characters is actually quite strange. There are two main ones: Yaoshu (too lazy to look for that word, I guess), and Ji Xianzi. Both women have provided help to the protagonist, and even Ji may have provided far more help than Yao. Although the help they provided may only be a little bit that they don't care about, the time Yao helped the protagonist did not ask for anything in return. But Ji has some calculations. Another point is that Yao is not strong enough and the protagonist is in a strong position over her. I estimate that only when the protagonist is strong enough to crush Ji and the forces behind her, or at least crush Ji and then escape the forces behind her, can he be admitted to the harem. Personally, I actually like Ji Duo more, because this person is thoughtful, calculating, and has a small temper, more like a living person, while Yao is like a vassal of the protagonist, and it may even be said to be a hindrance. But the protagonist may like Yao more, because Yao really loves the protagonist. Even if this love is initially based on wanting the protagonist's resources, the world is material, and there is no reason why love cannot be based on material things. In the final analysis, the core thought that drove me to read this book may be "It's so weird, take another look." It is indeed very bland, and sometimes the author even spends a lot of words to explain the twist in order to give an acceptable internal reason. However, I still want to know the ending of this story, because it is too depressing, and I am waiting for the protagonist's final explosion.
Too watery
The difference between ordinary people and normal authors and water gods. How to water 1. How ordinary people write: I put the battery into the flashlight. 2. The normal author's writing: I stuffed two AA batteries into the somewhat worn flashlight. 3. How to write the Water God: Now, I have an old-fashioned flashlight in my hand. Holding it, I felt uneasy. I looked at it and found that, like other old-fashioned flashlights, it had a cover on the hip that could be opened by rotating. When I opened the lid, as I expected, I was speechless when I faced the empty space inside. My brows furrowed tightly, and the feeling of wanting to commit suicide by throwing myself into a lake hit me from all directions. Because I was faced with a difficult choice - go downstairs and buy two batteries, or find two batteries at home. Where in life is there no trouble? Although it is daytime and I haven't had breakfast yet, as an old-fashioned flashlight, it does not have two AA batteries in it, which is very, very unreasonable. Has anyone heard of such a thing? How could I allow something that no one had ever heard of to happen? ? I'm human too! I have feelings too! ! ! It's just... Making a choice is really, really hard. When I go downstairs to buy batteries, I have to put on clothes and pants, I have to be careful that I forgot to bring my keys, I have to avoid speeding cars on the street, and I have to be wary of meteorites in the sky. Thinking of this, I am speechless... But if you look for it at home, my dear friends, after this age, who else still has AA batteries in their home? I thought about it over and over again, and was in a dilemma. I thought about it for almost two hours. . . . Finally, I couldn't help but let out a deep sigh. Well, I can only put these two AA batteries in my pocket. These two batteries were love tokens given to me by my former and former girlfriends. I thought I didn't have to make such a sacrifice, but it wasn't true. Everyone was involved in the whirlpool of flashlights and batteries. Life is a life of problem solving, and if you have an old-fashioned flashlight that doesn't have the right center of gravity, stick the batteries in it.
Others write hydrology, but you write popular science articles.
If hydrology and poison were one star, then you could only give two, You wrote a good novel as a popular science article, and the biggest flaw is that the setting of the recovery of strengthening points and the role of spiritual stones limit the use of multiple paths in the later stage. You will know the author yourself later in the writing. I saw that the main character is still practicing the third level of Qi, which will be released soon. Could you please tell me what the meaning of this is. The issues that have been popularizing basic science knowledge are no different from hydrology. If you don't have the ability to go your own way, just follow the trend and write a few million-word books to gain some experience.
suggestion
Personally, I suggest that the author should create a group and let readers discuss it. Otherwise, the author may not even feel the problems he wrote. If there is a group for the subsequent plot, we can discuss and improve it together! If you are really stuck, some readers may give you some suggestions. At present, unless an author writes articles of high quality and sufficient quantity, once readers have no time to read a book today, the feeling will be dull, and they may not even think of it unless there is a serious book shortage.
Very creative. It's a pity that I didn't control it well at all.
Very creative, but your writing is too slow. I can't stand it anymore. I estimate that I will never see the protagonist truly embark on the path of cultivating immortality in my lifetime!
generally
The setting is novel and the story is gripping. However, the narrative is procrastinating and frustrating. I read 51 chapters. I don't know how many words were written in Chapter 51, but at least 70% of them are the protagonist talking to himself in his heart. So nervous
There are more than 120 chapters, just read and vomit,
It feels like nothing happened in the front, but in the back, you were attacked by that woman three times. Others want to kill you. Why don't you return the mother's mother? After subduing the woman, you couldn't ask for any news and you stepped forward to put a coat on her. Why do you want to reform her? Four words, semen is in your brain, you can't walk when you meet a girl, she licks a dog, don't write if you don't know how to write emotional lines, you can still watch it without a female protagonist, I'm speechless
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Official(215)Scraped 29d ago
Forced intelligence
Everyone knows how well this book is written. Some people praise it and say it is slow to develop, but I can only say... 1. Born in a farm family in a world of immortal martial arts, I can not work for ten years and still take care of my skin. How can I be happy?? Traveling through ten years, I really don't help at all, but I still do the spiritual victory method every day. I am relieved after being sold by my parents? Do you think this is normal? It's just a few chapters into this. You also said that you want to see the back. Do you have the confidence to see the back? The author is also old. 2. A normal person travels to a poor farmer's family, has not worked for ten years, and still uses mud as a skin care product. Do you think this protagonist's brain is normal? The author makes up for the pitfalls in order to prepare for immortality. Doesn't cultivating immortality depend on one's character? In fact, I quite admire the protagonist. 3. As you read later, you will find that it is even more outrageous. He and his cheap master, and how to use his spiritual stones, you will find that it is more streamlined and there is no technical difficulty. Others write about weird cultivation of immortality, systematic cultivation of immortality, and a little bit of cultivation. Here, they write about lazy people cultivating immortality, and the logic is also very strange. You find that this novel is not written for you, but for the author himself. As long as he feels satisfied, if we feel dissatisfied, we will be refuted after a few words and some untenable views. I also admire people who can keep reading, like that Kunlun No. 1 Immortal? 4. This great author has the most unique conception I have ever seen. His only characteristic is "bland", and his story arrangement is really unique. Three chapters later, the protagonist is sold as a piglet and sent to a mine for mining. Generally speaking, the protagonist prepares to escape while exploring the golden finger. The normal routine is to create chaos himself, or others rush into the mine, and the protagonist earns a fortune and escapes to heaven. In this article, after two years of mining, the author parachuted into the mine and suffered a landslide. The protagonist dug through a tunnel and escaped to heaven. He was unprepared and had no choice but to go robbing when he came out penniless. The protagonist has no initiative at all. To be honest, no matter how reasonable the reasons are arranged by the author, it is a waste of time to mine for 2 years. I feel that the protagonist is mentally retarded and cannot hold up the wall with mud. This is the slow heat that everyone likes. Traveling through the past 12 years, I don't know anything. I don't work at home, but work for others in other people's mines. I am a filial son!! 6. I said that this book has a more interesting plot behind it. The protagonist is chased by weak immortal cultivators. One of them is chasing, the other is running. There is no one who knows how to play in the game. None of the traps arranged by the protagonist were useful. The protagonist made a completely useless effort. The author explained that the preparation was too hasty. Three or four of the traps arranged were not triggered. The only one that was triggered was not lethal and was solved by a fireball. With this level of trap, it can lead to some monsters to die. Isn't it good to just survive. The strangest thing is that both sides ran out of endurance. When they were about to take a break and were about to run the second lap, they suddenly stopped and started trading on the same spot. After the transaction, no one attacked and the black hands broke up peacefully. The quality of this cultivator was too high, and the skills he was given were intact and not missing a few pages. No one will be confused by this plot. 7. Either you want to get out of here, at least it will feel better. This book accurately avoids all the cool points and is as bland as water. Either the layout of the writing is so wonderful that you will be attracted by the story. What is this of yours?
This book is bad
The first one or two chapters really made me vomit. In the first chapter, make excuses for your laziness. The excuses don't have to be reasonable. In order to strike up a conversation, I have to protect my appearance. I just don't help my parents work. My parents are still farmers. This highlights a protagonist who has no filial piety. In the second chapter, tell me, you can't let go of your past life. How can such an unfilial protagonist be unable to let go of his past life? Spouse? Then the previous chapter was about saving your appearance for the sake of striking up a conversation. If you were just an aboriginal, you wouldn't be criticized for not having filial piety, but the protagonist is a reincarnation and an adult, so you still don't understand?
It is recommended that friends who read this book do not read book reviews for the first 50 chapters.
To be honest, the plot and writing of the real book are okay, but the book reviews are really hard to describe, and there are all kinds of faults and troubles. Every sentence of the author, every plot, every setting, every explanation will be criticized by a large group of people. In fact, the quality of this book is not bad, but it is relatively slow to develop, and the protagonist is just an ordinary person. He is an ordinary person, and he is an ordinary person without much ability. If it were not for the standard plug-in for time travellers, I guess this kind of character would have no motivation to live. This plug-in is not so much the protagonist's golden finger as it is the protagonist's spiritual support. Really, I haven't seen such a frustrated protagonist in a long time.
A little weird, but look at it again
This novel feels very depressing and depressing. I've read almost 300 chapters and only have about 20 chapters? The main character is killing people randomly, and the rest are quite depressing, but these twenty chapters are really the explosion of long-suppressed things, which is really quite interesting. The story itself is probably about a super twisted world of immortality that is completely monopolized by upper-level forces. Although it is super twisted and dark, I think this world setting is unique and unconventional. As for whether this setting is reasonable or not, I think it is reasonable. Because this world of cultivating immortals does not have any external enemies, even the demon world mentioned in a few words is almost as corrupt and dark as this world of cultivating immortals. Personally, I feel that if the protagonist becomes the most powerful in the end and really wants the world to get better, he will have to keep killing and bring disaster to the world, so that the corrupt sect will have to cultivate geniuses and have to unite to face the disaster brought by the protagonist. Of course, this is just a personal opinion. Let's move on from the plot, let's talk about the characterization. The protagonist is similar to this world, twisted and sick. But whether the world has made the protagonist so distorted, or whether he is always like this, I will not comment. Let's just say that the protagonist stopped working when he was a child. In order to become a fairy in the future, he didn't want his face to get tanned or anything like that. Although the author has explained that if you go to work, you are likely to have a heat stroke or die, but I think this person is still very twisted, because he will give up everything because of a little trivial matter or a small possibility. He can choose to be lazy in the summer, but do what he can when it's not so hot. Such a character did allow him to survive in this twisted world of immortality, but he still felt very twisted. Maybe in that world, distortion was the norm. Let's talk about the character relationships. The relationship between the protagonist and several female characters is actually quite strange. There are two main ones: Yaoshu (too lazy to look for that word, I guess), and Ji Xianzi. Both women have provided help to the protagonist, and even Ji may have provided far more help than Yao. Although the help they provided may only be a little bit that they don't care about, the time Yao helped the protagonist did not ask for anything in return. But Ji has some calculations. Another point is that Yao is not strong enough and the protagonist is in a strong position over her. I estimate that only when the protagonist is strong enough to crush Ji and the forces behind her, or at least crush Ji and then escape the forces behind her, can he be admitted to the harem. Personally, I actually like Ji Duo more, because this person is thoughtful, calculating, and has a small temper, more like a living person, while Yao is like a vassal of the protagonist, and it may even be said to be a hindrance. But the protagonist may like Yao more, because Yao really loves the protagonist. Even if this love is initially based on wanting the protagonist's resources, the world is material, and there is no reason why love cannot be based on material things. In the final analysis, the core thought that drove me to read this book may be "It's so weird, take another look." It is indeed very bland, and sometimes the author even spends a lot of words to explain the twist in order to give an acceptable internal reason. However, I still want to know the ending of this story, because it is too depressing, and I am waiting for the protagonist's final explosion.
Too watery
The difference between ordinary people and normal authors and water gods. How to water 1. How ordinary people write: I put the battery into the flashlight. 2. The normal author's writing: I stuffed two AA batteries into the somewhat worn flashlight. 3. How to write the Water God: Now, I have an old-fashioned flashlight in my hand. Holding it, I felt uneasy. I looked at it and found that, like other old-fashioned flashlights, it had a cover on the hip that could be opened by rotating. When I opened the lid, as I expected, I was speechless when I faced the empty space inside. My brows furrowed tightly, and the feeling of wanting to commit suicide by throwing myself into a lake hit me from all directions. Because I was faced with a difficult choice - go downstairs and buy two batteries, or find two batteries at home. Where in life is there no trouble? Although it is daytime and I haven't had breakfast yet, as an old-fashioned flashlight, it does not have two AA batteries in it, which is very, very unreasonable. Has anyone heard of such a thing? How could I allow something that no one had ever heard of to happen? ? I'm human too! I have feelings too! ! ! It's just... Making a choice is really, really hard. When I go downstairs to buy batteries, I have to put on clothes and pants, I have to be careful that I forgot to bring my keys, I have to avoid speeding cars on the street, and I have to be wary of meteorites in the sky. Thinking of this, I am speechless... But if you look for it at home, my dear friends, after this age, who else still has AA batteries in their home? I thought about it over and over again, and was in a dilemma. I thought about it for almost two hours. . . . Finally, I couldn't help but let out a deep sigh. Well, I can only put these two AA batteries in my pocket. These two batteries were love tokens given to me by my former and former girlfriends. I thought I didn't have to make such a sacrifice, but it wasn't true. Everyone was involved in the whirlpool of flashlights and batteries. Life is a life of problem solving, and if you have an old-fashioned flashlight that doesn't have the right center of gravity, stick the batteries in it.
Others write hydrology, but you write popular science articles.
If hydrology and poison were one star, then you could only give two, You wrote a good novel as a popular science article, and the biggest flaw is that the setting of the recovery of strengthening points and the role of spiritual stones limit the use of multiple paths in the later stage. You will know the author yourself later in the writing. I saw that the main character is still practicing the third level of Qi, which will be released soon. Could you please tell me what the meaning of this is. The issues that have been popularizing basic science knowledge are no different from hydrology. If you don't have the ability to go your own way, just follow the trend and write a few million-word books to gain some experience.
suggestion
Personally, I suggest that the author should create a group and let readers discuss it. Otherwise, the author may not even feel the problems he wrote. If there is a group for the subsequent plot, we can discuss and improve it together! If you are really stuck, some readers may give you some suggestions. At present, unless an author writes articles of high quality and sufficient quantity, once readers have no time to read a book today, the feeling will be dull, and they may not even think of it unless there is a serious book shortage.
Very creative. It's a pity that I didn't control it well at all.
Very creative, but your writing is too slow. I can't stand it anymore. I estimate that I will never see the protagonist truly embark on the path of cultivating immortality in my lifetime!
generally
The setting is novel and the story is gripping. However, the narrative is procrastinating and frustrating. I read 51 chapters. I don't know how many words were written in Chapter 51, but at least 70% of them are the protagonist talking to himself in his heart. So nervous
There are more than 120 chapters, just read and vomit,
It feels like nothing happened in the front, but in the back, you were attacked by that woman three times. Others want to kill you. Why don't you return the mother's mother? After subduing the woman, you couldn't ask for any news and you stepped forward to put a coat on her. Why do you want to reform her? Four words, semen is in your brain, you can't walk when you meet a girl, she licks a dog, don't write if you don't know how to write emotional lines, you can still watch it without a female protagonist, I'm speechless
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A somewhat special novel about mortals cultivating immortals. In other words, it is the layman's version of cultivating immortals. The portrayal of the protagonist is not very likable; He came from time-travel and was born in a farmer's family. I have a system in my body, but I don't know its use. Life is miserable, the future is gloomy, Because he saw an immortal, he determined to become an immortal. In order to preserve the beauty, we have taken care of it since childhood. If you don't work hard, you won't work hard. My parents blamed me and my family was poor and in dire straits. Not thinking about progress, just hoping to seek immortality, Behaves weirdly, doesn't get along with others, My heart is as high as the sky, my life is as thin as paper. In fact, he is an ordinary person who is used to the modern comfortable life and is a little ruthless to reality. He comes to an ancient society with a harsh environment. He does not want to accept his fate, but he is unable to change it. He has a system, but it has never been used. After seeing an immortal passing by with a sword, he determined to become an immortal. He relied on his own imagination to prepare for the cultivation of immortality. Cultivation into immortality has become the protagonist's only hope and ideal in life. Just an ordinary person. That's why we call lay people to cultivate immortality. I'm tired of those routine novels about cultivating immortals. For a change of taste, it's surprisingly good. The protagonist's psychological activities are very rich, but the protagonist himself is withdrawn, and he is alone and helpless in his quest for immortality. Naturally, there is no dialogue, so we can only write more about the protagonist's psychological activities. The writing of this book is very clumsy, and the author is probably afraid of being criticized. He spends a lot of space explaining the basis of the protagonist's behavior and the basic setting of the world. Although the author is not good in terms of plot line, many branch lines that can be developed are skipped directly or skipped a few strokes. But because there are many psychological descriptions and explanatory words, it seems very long-winded. But this can be considered the style of this book. It's actually rare to be able to write in a personal style. Although it may cause some people to dislike it, I don't really hope that the author will make any changes. Compared with those routine novels about cultivating immortals, this kind of step-by-step, time-consuming novels about cultivating immortals still has its merits. In particular, the author has his own considerations for the world settings. Many settings seem very reasonable, which shows that the author really put effort into the construction, which is rare. A gentle and slow plot, if this book continues like this, it will probably be a late bloomer. Overall score, 7 points, excellent product.




It's rare to find a book about cultivating immortals that suits my taste so well. It's really good. (*๓´╰╯`๓)♡ ✧*. ٩(ˊωˋ*)و✧*. (∩ᄑ_ᄑ)⊃━☆Love magic (இ﹏இ`。)I am single...




Good




It's also a story-telling piece. Personally, I think it's okay. Although I feel like the protagonist was a waste of time in the early stage, the story's characters are still established.













