Looking to the Sky

Please note that this book is a pure political battle of wits. Love is no different. The protagonist is also controlled by the power of cause and effect and will never be able to sleep with a girl. Just like in light novels, there will always be someone who will hinder you at the last moment. It makes no difference whether you practice or not. Anyway, it is not your turn to display your personal combat power. Moreover, the protagonist's cultivation is always lower than that of the heroines. It's really depressing. The title and content of the book don't match up. It looks like a harem love story, but inside it's a hard-core political and intellectual story. The protagonist has more than two hundred chapters. I have never defeated anyone by myself. It's all because I have become stronger, but the opponent is even stronger. Either he can shake people off, or he can't use his words to escape, and he has an innate Taoist body. What a joke! It's okay at first and you find it interesting, but if the same thing keeps happening, you'll become more and more impatient. And because of this, all the dungeons played by the protagonist are meaningless. You play dozens of chapters and get an automatic training technique, but you don't mention it later. Upgrading is just as slow. Everything else is given to women. After writing so many chapters, the sense of achievement feedback in the entire book is extremely low. And they keep saying that adults, your love is like a kindergarten, you only know how to kiss, but an adult has already slept with you, and you still kiss, and even if you kiss on the mouth, someone will cut you off, it's really annoying.

This book has the qualifications to become a god. The description of the power struggle in the court is no worse than that of Da Gengren. The style is also humorous and logically interoperable, which is rare. However, I think there is still room for improvement. Reading the comments from book friends, I feel that the author is very good. However, the style of this book and some of the thoughts in it are completely different from The Watcher. It belongs to the same type of novel, but the thoughts buried in it are different. I have always believed that writing such a complex novel requires a clear line, without any ambiguity. Every behavior and every sentence is rainy. It has a completely different meaning. I hope the author can work harder. I really think this book can be compared to Dagongren. The best book I have ever read is Dagongren. But now I have to add this. Of course, it is only 800,000 words. If it doesn't collapse later, it will be a masterpiece. Come on! ! !

It doesn't look good, it can't be fucked, and it's never finished

It's a good start to a time travel fantasy novel, which becomes more and more like an urban love story. It's all trash dialogue that has no effect on the plot.

1. In the early stage, the protagonist was calm and resourceful, but in the later stage, he turned into a middle-class idiot. He was led by the villain, and he always gave the French military salute (at least five or six times, one or two times was okay. It was a real nt) and was often tricked by the villain. The protagonist is a loser so far, no one can beat him. He is either possessed by his grandfather or called Big Brother. He has no family background and has no characteristics of the protagonist. I wrote a story about fighting barbarians for a hundred or two hundred times, and the protagonist had a fussy role in the middle? The contribution is almost 0. Is this the protagonist? 2. The first 100 chapters are considered a good fairy tale, but later on, the true nature is exposed. It is a stupid zz novel. It keeps repeating endlessly about officialdom, power, and internal strife. The key point is that the more you write, the more confusing it becomes. You can't read it too intellectually. I guess the author doesn't even have an outline. 3. The last time I saw a story about Japanese pirates from another world was Tiancan Tudou's first book. It's 2024 and there are still stories about Japanese pirates and golden-haired ghosts in another world. Where is the mage? Isn't it against the law? Don't you feel low? I also want to write about immortals, mages, and competition for power and internal fighting within the factory. Do you have that strength?

This is really the worst. This is different from being abused. This is directly real harm. They have lived together for more than ten years, occupying almost half of their lives. During this period, they only relied on each other. A very delicate description of the relationship is that the protagonist reaches out and Tian Yan joins his hand. When the two were told that they were going to lose their memories, they were reluctant to leave at first. Then the protagonist rationally took over, analyzed the situation correctly, and then betrayed Tian Yan. Finally, he knew that Tian Yan had not lost his memory and responded confidently. Finally, he rationally analyzed everything, the situation, and his identity, and then emphasized that it was just a dream. In fact, Tian Yan also gained the upper hand at this time, and his emotions were directly overpowered.

I simply gave a bad review because the author took too much time off. I also turned off automatic purchase. It seems that I have to read the various websites in it.

It's written in a light-hearted way, everyone doesn't make any fuss, it's okay to watch a guy who is a villain, but actually not a bad person, cleans himself up bit by bit, and flirts with girls by the way. It has to be written about a court battle with a light-hearted title. It won't work if it doesn't include naozi. If it does, you will be beaten crazily. How do people who have traveled through time have a sense of belonging to their own family? No matter how they feel they belong later, in short, since they have a sense of belonging, then their little sister is slapped and served before she has done anything? You know the future direction well, but you still don't have the confidence to take care of your little girl who hasn't grown up yet? In comparison, isn't your Sima-faced brother more likely to do bad things? Why didn't I see any precautions on your part? Coming to such a world, foreseeing the future should be the biggest advantage. Anyway, judging from the results, you made the royal family's head roll off the sand, and he won the arm wrestling with the royal family, so why are you causing chaos? Shouldn't what you want to do is eliminate the people who threaten Ni Die? Now the Jiantian Pavilion, the sect, and the royal family are showing mercy at all times, and they have allowed people who should not be alive to survive. This person is still in charge of soldiers, is still a member of the royal family, and is still entangled with the protagonist. I really want to see how it will end in the future. Pi Gu decided to take the decision. He agreed with the family and also agreed with the family's position. He wanted to annihilate the sect. This was Ni Die's intention and he also wanted to overthrow the royal family. This was the expectation of your subordinates. So, do you comply and go against your beloved wife and ridicule your little sister who has done bad things? Or do you betray and meet with you with swords and then defeat Ni Die or be betrayed by Ni Die? You can't just wait and wait for Ni Die to die. If you can afford to wait, will the people around you agree? Don't talk about it. Of course you have the ability to make your subordinates listen to you when you are the master of the Prime Minister's Mansion. You were not the master of the Prime Minister's Mansion before Nidie died. Even if it was you, if you want to be a good leader, you don't just sit in that position. You have to convince the crowd, and the soldiers and crabs will not care. You have to convince the most powerful people under the Prime Minister's Mansion, right? They came from Ni Die and worked with Ni Die, didn't they just see that Ni Die had the qualifications to be a great emperor? You want to replace the entire map with a new one, is there anyone with you? Looking at the two plots so far, they are not bad. One is the real original protagonist, and the other is inviting the second prince to drink soup. Only through these plots can we see that this person is still a villain. At other times, he is neither yin nor yang, like a living eunuch.

There is a lot of trash talk, the pretense of innocence is too forced, the writing style is even more blunt, and some details have to be figured out suddenly. The characters are a mess. The first few dozen chapters were okay, but after more than a hundred chapters I was disgusted to the point of vomiting.

What is the reason for your lengthy attack on Xu Xinyao in one chapter? You said that the prime minister supported you but you betrayed him. Does that mean that even if you are from the landlord class, you cannot join the Red Army and everyone should become a royalist? Take the TV series as an example. The character of Duan Tianya, Duan Tianya, and Guihai Yi Dao, the anti-shenhou, is the same as hers. Are they different from hers? If the author doesn't understand it himself, then he shouldn't educate others. Does writing a web article have to be a guiding light?