A Swarm of Heavy Artillery Bombarded the Cultivators

Two points for the setting, and then give a good review of this recently popular book. Let's talk about the advantages first: settings (gone) Let's talk about the shortcomings: I saw around chapter 600, when the protagonist is in the early stage of Golden Elixir, and has many poisonous points, so I'll list them in detail. 1: The protagonist can always advance to a higher level (refining qi to build the foundation, building the foundation to build the golden elixir, and the golden elixir to defeat the Yuanying). The key is that you don't know why he is that way. He just has a flying sword and has different inheritances! 2: The author instilled a lot of his own views in the book, which made me very uncomfortable. The protagonist he created gave people a sense of tearing. On the one hand, he is a mama's boy, and on the other hand, he is extremely cold-blooded towards his nephew. The most important thing is that the protagonist's own uncle is very good to the protagonist. In the plot, he was given a pill, which is equivalent to his uncle giving 80 yuan to the protagonist out of 100 yuan. However, the protagonist has developed a... Billion, he gave 1 yuan to his nephew and then claimed that he didn't want the family to grow bigger and affect the interests of the Immortal Sect. The most poisonous thing was to give passers-by a foundation-building pill and give a lot of resources to classmates and call it "borrowing". It gave the audience the feeling of a very torn protagonist. On the one hand, he is a brainwashed and dedicated persona, on the other hand, he is a selfless dog-licking persona, and on the other hand, he is a cold-blooded and ruthless persona! So torn! ! ! 3: The setting of Xianmen in it is very interesting. It is a direct copy of modern China to become Xianmen China. The author is a Sichuan native, and the Sichuan elements in it are very interesting to me! ! ! Also, the tanks and warships inside gave me the impression that it was not a future world but a return to World War II. The only one that has kept up with modern times has a drone. Hahaha, you can also use the entire Gundam! 4: The writing is poor and the content is watery, giving people the feeling of "well said, don't say it again next time". To sum up, this book has a very high rating and is very popular in my opinion. Compared with the same type of book (I Have a World of Immortality), the rating is much lower than this book. However, whether it is setting writing or content, this book is scorned. By the way, there is also a new book by Wenzhao Gong, and the setting quality of this book is also acceptable. I recommend it to friends who want to read this kind of setting, although the rating is not as high as this one. But! ! ! The ratings are really nonsense. As a senior bookworm, I personally tested three books and compared them, and this book only got two stars (contributed a setting).

Author, look at these three, you should study hard

After reading some, I feel that it does not feel like a cluster of heavy artillery. The form of warfare is too modern, or the thinking is limited by modern warfare. It is still a tank and an aircraft carrier. Moreover, the power of the protagonist has nothing to do with these. It is completely classical cultivation. Even if a few words about magnetic fields are mentioned, the ampere accelerated flying sword is still a classical cultivation, and there is no shadow of immortal cultivation technology at all. Moreover, air and space fighter planes are not as good as air and space mechas. If you want to develop your imagination, why not be more bold? You can use spirit son acceleration cannons, spirit son amplification consciousness radars, launch outer space space stations, lay out ring-boundary war networks, carry out space-based weapons strikes, etc. Read more science fiction novels and then turn them into fantasy. This will not only develop your imagination.

A real Qi Refining monk drives the fairy island and drags tens of thousands of stars, searching for the high-dimensional law of all things that conforms to the rules of derivation for such a top-quality Wanyang Foundation Establishment Pill. Fake Qi-refining monks can't even consume the energy of a thousand stars in one practice, and they are worried about a main battle tank.

I came here to read Starry Sky Professional. People said that Wen Chao Gong imitated his settings. I was really pissed off. This book is fine. I feel sorry for my sister if I am stabbed in the back (high school is good, I understand, but I am not a high school student, so I can't substitute). I'm gone. I'm a million miles away from Wen Chao Gong.

The setting is very good, keep writing. The combination of modernity, immortality, and sword cultivation is already very good so far. As for the system setting issues mentioned by others, the issue of time travel, and the equality between immortality cultivators and mortals, these are not a problem. Isn't the novel just the author's own vision of the future of modern immortality? There are thousands of imaginations , this is my idea. There is no need to focus on your own path (style setting) to write in order to fully meet the needs of all readers. Only by writing will you burst out with a different kind of brilliance. If you give up the "specialized" writing setting for the sake of "comprehensive", it will only become one of the countless works in the end, unable to highlight the characteristics and literary talent. Defects in setting are inevitable, just like there is no perfect thing, just like "the great road is fifty, the Tianyan is forty-nine, and the one that escapes", there is no perfection. Only by maintaining your own style can you be unique among thousands of works. I hope the author will continue to maintain his inner vision and describe for us a future world of freedom, equality, justice, rule of law, prosperity, democracy, patriotism, dedication and friendliness👍👍

The author was overtaken by the protagonist after he started to be a swordsman in the sun. In the place where the individual's power is supreme, he forced the immortal gate to defeat him. The immortal gate was originally 50-50 open to one of the nine rice dumplings, and the speed of light expanded to beat the nine rice dumplings. In the end, he would rather break his Taoist heart to integrate into the immortal gate system. There is indeed a reason for his high political score; in addition, the protagonist gradually became a gangster after practicing swordsmanship and started fighting. I talk trash all the time, and my character can be old and silver coins, incompetent and furious for a while. In terms of personal upgrades, I used to rely on the tip of a plug-in sword to shuttle back and forth and slowly close the distance between me and a real fairy. There is something to behold in becoming an immortal in one lifetime. I have gone through a lot of hard work to achieve nirvana in four steps and then suddenly said that perfection is actually six steps. The upper limit of deadlifts is not what you did.

The author has set up the Immortal Wood system too ideally. Mortals and immortal cultivators share information. Immortal cultivators also value mortals and design such a good system to protect the interests of mortals. Haha... It is too natural. This is a difference in life levels. This is not a modern society. Even in modern society, there are many darkness hidden.

I think there are two types of audiences for this book: one comes for the title of the book, and the other comes for the sword practice. Anyway, I came here to study swordsmanship. I really like the energy of swordsmanship in the book. The swordsmanship written by other authors made me want to vomit.

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