Shushan Town World Immortal
About This Novel
The world is vast and infinite, with beautiful bells and bells. There are Eastern Taoist sects that have a long history, and there are also Western Shu Taoist sects that have suddenly emerged, such as the Quanzhen sect of the North, the Danding sect of the South, the Sword sect, and the Zen sect. However, in this world there are hundreds of schools of thought contending, and there are also demons causing trouble. The southern faction is cunning, the northern faction is ferocious, and there are also a group of overseas monsters watching with eager eyes. Even among the decent sects, there are also disputes between Daoxuan and Daoxuan, and the differences between north and south are surging undercurrents. In this land, calamities, killings, and demons take turns taking turns, and there has never been any real peace. Until one day, on the border of Dongfang Yuzhang, a fifteen-year-old boy worshiped at the Sanqing Fairy Mountain and advanced all the way, practicing the Hunyuan of Ten Thousand Dharma. Taoist priests do not seek to ascend, and are not subject to heaven's decrees. They only wish to be a resident immortal, vowing to control the world forever and eliminate all harmful insects. As a result, the four seas were turbulent and the five continents were shaken. A wise man is invincible.
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Classical masterpieces of immortality
The last time I saw such a good article on cultivating immortals was Ke Qiyuan. It's not time travel, not systematic, not cheating. It has the background of Chinese mythology but it's not prehistoric. I haven't seen any conspiracy theories so far. The rhythm is slow and the writing is smooth, like an old man telling the story of cultivating immortality. The protagonist is currently going smoothly, the characters in the article are three-dimensional, and there are no stupid plots that slap in the face. The few short chapters so far are all very well written, with some good and bad characters appearing, but none really stupid. The training system has not yet been fully developed, but it can be seen with the naked eye that it is cleverly conceived and has obviously been carefully crafted. There are still problems. The author works part-time and it was still a seedling when I saw it. It was too short!
I don't know what it's about, but the main character's name sounds ugly from the beginning. Then the skills he learned after joining the sect were even more ugly. Practicing a sword was not like practicing swordsmanship, and there was no sharpness at all. Practicing the thunder method is not like Lei Xiu, there is no domineering power at all. Not to mention what does it have to do with the title of your book? It was even more poisonous when I wrote about Shushan. You can write that there is a sect dispute with Shushan, but the Shushan you write is like a fucking evil devil who kills people for no reason. In the original work, Shushan is very powerful, so he does things very domineeringly. But in this book, he is just one of the big ones and has no logic.
A mess is the summary of this book. I have learned everything but am not good at anything. There is nothing particularly outstanding. Sword repair does not have the sharpness of a sword. Thunder repair does not have the domineering power. Cultivation does not have the splendor of a hundred flowers blooming. You say that the protagonist's talent is good but he has no characteristics and it feels good. It's just mediocre. The author also writes some articles about scriptures. Brother, do you think we should read some online novels if we want to understand them? It's almost enough. There is no need for several chapters and one scripture. The author had better adjust the protagonist's route, whether it is to use swords, thunder or magic, and not a hodgepodge.
The realm of this book is that of a suture monster, right? The name of the inner alchemy is used, but it is actually a state of Qi training, life storage, golden elixir, Yuanying, and Hedao. Good guy, you don't even need the most basic hundred-day foundation building of the inner alchemy and dare to call it an inner alchemy. The highest state of the inner alchemy is the golden elixir. You still want to create a Yuanying. What the hell is Hedao? Taoism does have the concept of Yuanying, but Yuanying is not on the same path as inner alchemy. How do you put them together?
This book is well written but also poisonous
You can write about the feudal orthodoxy between Shushan and Shushan. But you can't write Shushan as a brainless villain who kills people randomly. The writing is good and the main character is pretty good too. Once Shushan appeared, I couldn't stand it anymore.
I don't know why this book has such a high rating. I felt so bored when I saw it on the shelves and had no desire to read any more...
The writing is very good, but a bit too ethereal. Cultivation of immortality is nothing more than a wealthy couple's method. As a result, the six breaths are breathless and I don't even know how much money I have received. The author really doesn't understand the importance of money. This is too divorced from the actual situation.
Most of the people in the speaking area were stooges, and they read dozens of chapters of Qi Qi Shu.
Anyway, I didn't understand it
The title of your book is about both Shushan and Earthly Immortals. The key point is that I have read more than 20 chapters. The protagonist comes to worship at Sanqing Mountain, and the master he worships must be from the lineage of Corpse Executioner Immortals, and he plays the role of Ghost Immortal. This is too different from Shushan and Earthly Immortals.
The novel is okay, and the writing is good. Even though the main character is very complex, it doesn't feel like they are integrated together. Also, there are girls who fall in love with the main character at every turn. Although there is no actual development, it is quite annoying.
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Official(140)Scraped 2d ago
Classical masterpieces of immortality
The last time I saw such a good article on cultivating immortals was Ke Qiyuan. It's not time travel, not systematic, not cheating. It has the background of Chinese mythology but it's not prehistoric. I haven't seen any conspiracy theories so far. The rhythm is slow and the writing is smooth, like an old man telling the story of cultivating immortality. The protagonist is currently going smoothly, the characters in the article are three-dimensional, and there are no stupid plots that slap in the face. The few short chapters so far are all very well written, with some good and bad characters appearing, but none really stupid. The training system has not yet been fully developed, but it can be seen with the naked eye that it is cleverly conceived and has obviously been carefully crafted. There are still problems. The author works part-time and it was still a seedling when I saw it. It was too short!
I don't know what it's about, but the main character's name sounds ugly from the beginning. Then the skills he learned after joining the sect were even more ugly. Practicing a sword was not like practicing swordsmanship, and there was no sharpness at all. Practicing the thunder method is not like Lei Xiu, there is no domineering power at all. Not to mention what does it have to do with the title of your book? It was even more poisonous when I wrote about Shushan. You can write that there is a sect dispute with Shushan, but the Shushan you write is like a fucking evil devil who kills people for no reason. In the original work, Shushan is very powerful, so he does things very domineeringly. But in this book, he is just one of the big ones and has no logic.
A mess is the summary of this book. I have learned everything but am not good at anything. There is nothing particularly outstanding. Sword repair does not have the sharpness of a sword. Thunder repair does not have the domineering power. Cultivation does not have the splendor of a hundred flowers blooming. You say that the protagonist's talent is good but he has no characteristics and it feels good. It's just mediocre. The author also writes some articles about scriptures. Brother, do you think we should read some online novels if we want to understand them? It's almost enough. There is no need for several chapters and one scripture. The author had better adjust the protagonist's route, whether it is to use swords, thunder or magic, and not a hodgepodge.
The realm of this book is that of a suture monster, right? The name of the inner alchemy is used, but it is actually a state of Qi training, life storage, golden elixir, Yuanying, and Hedao. Good guy, you don't even need the most basic hundred-day foundation building of the inner alchemy and dare to call it an inner alchemy. The highest state of the inner alchemy is the golden elixir. You still want to create a Yuanying. What the hell is Hedao? Taoism does have the concept of Yuanying, but Yuanying is not on the same path as inner alchemy. How do you put them together?
This book is well written but also poisonous
You can write about the feudal orthodoxy between Shushan and Shushan. But you can't write Shushan as a brainless villain who kills people randomly. The writing is good and the main character is pretty good too. Once Shushan appeared, I couldn't stand it anymore.
I don't know why this book has such a high rating. I felt so bored when I saw it on the shelves and had no desire to read any more...
The writing is very good, but a bit too ethereal. Cultivation of immortality is nothing more than a wealthy couple's method. As a result, the six breaths are breathless and I don't even know how much money I have received. The author really doesn't understand the importance of money. This is too divorced from the actual situation.
Most of the people in the speaking area were stooges, and they read dozens of chapters of Qi Qi Shu.
Anyway, I didn't understand it
The title of your book is about both Shushan and Earthly Immortals. The key point is that I have read more than 20 chapters. The protagonist comes to worship at Sanqing Mountain, and the master he worships must be from the lineage of Corpse Executioner Immortals, and he plays the role of Ghost Immortal. This is too different from Shushan and Earthly Immortals.
The novel is okay, and the writing is good. Even though the main character is very complex, it doesn't feel like they are integrated together. Also, there are girls who fall in love with the main character at every turn. Although there is no actual development, it is quite annoying.
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[-Premium Channel-]- 🔝 -Push it to the top for 2000 likes next time! This is a Shushan fan novel, but if you don't understand Shushan, it shouldn't be a big problem, because I don't know Shushan and I don't feel there is anything I don't understand. Let's talk about the advantages. First of all, although the world view of this book is that of Shushan, it is friendly to readers who are familiar with Shushan or not. This book inherits the core setting of the "Xianxia World" in Shushan culture, and the background of the story still revolves around cultivating immortals and slaying demons. Scenes such as Sanqing Mountain and Meiji Mountain in the novel continue the traditional images in Shushan culture, creating a world of cultivation full of fairy spirit. At the same time, the author also introduced unique practice systems such as "Inner Alchemy" and "Corpse Raising Technique", which further enriched the diversity of the Shushan world. Compared with traditional Shushan culture, "Shushan Zhenshi Dixian" has made bold innovations in details. For example, the concept of "Pleiades Star Lord" and the setting of "Five Elements Magic Power" in the novel not only increase the level of spiritual practice, but also show the author's new interpretation of Shushan culture through the unique magic system. This kind of innovation within the traditional framework not only retains the classic charm of Shushan culture, but also brings freshness to readers. All in all, "Shushan Zhenshi Dixian", as a Shushan fan novel, not only inherits the classic elements of Shushan, but also gives the work new vitality through innovations in worldview, character creation, practice system, etc. Through a deep understanding of Shushan, the author successfully integrates tradition and innovation, presenting readers with a world of Shushan that is both familiar and unfamiliar. It is a good work and worth reading.
It's fairy-like and flavorful, a classic fairy tale!
It's fairy-like and flavorful. At least it doesn't have high blood pressure for the time being, and it's not boring.
Traveling to the specious world of Shushan, Emei is just one of several righteous sects. The protagonist worships in Sanqing Mountain, seeks immortality, and performs chivalrous and righteous deeds.
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