Immortal

First of all, I really like Toad's imagination and writing style. But Toad has a problem that many books have, that is, it has baggage, but it tends to become duller and duller. I think this book has also shown signs of this, and it has begun to become dull and ordinary. As a result, many people became tired just watching it. Without the number of people, they would be too lazy to edit it, and then it would be unfinished. There are too many online articles now. I feel that if most of the unfolded worldview is known by everyone, then either the conflict will be intensified or the map will be changed... It doesn't mean that things are falling apart all the time, but there must be turning points, excitement, and collisions. If you keep chatting with old friends in this small pond, you will be abandoned by many people. The above is my immature personal opinion. Toad is a professional who wrote it, and I am not a professional who reads it. I just think I'm being ridiculous😘.

It's getting more and more outrageous. The unruly spirit fetus mirror of a top sect worships a small sect as a Qi practitioner. The main character just accepts women when he sees them😐

Just asking for votes, the donkeys in the production team don't dare to rest like this😘😍

1. The protagonist is an outsider, and his IQ is about kindergarten level. 2. Chance treasures are like those brought by the strong wind. They don't require money, but there are plenty of them. The protagonist gives away magic weapons casually. 3. He overestimates his abilities and starts to get involved in the golden elixir matter even when his cultivation level is just entry level. 4. The people inside are like idiots. There is no charge or tax in the market. You can use it as you like, and there is no need to manage or maintain it on a daily basis. 5. The sect doesn't even have any restrictions. You can enter as many tokens as you want, and you can pass on the skills at will. 6. The protagonist is blessed with great fortune, full of peach blossoms, and turns misfortune into good fortune. I really can't stand it after watching it.

This is inexplicable, irreverent, silent... It has stopped updating again! Toad, do you really want to fight Fenghuo for the position of Ouchi Manager? It's a good idea to have written tens of millions of words to lay the foundation for it! What are you doing? 😴😴😴Update quickly! ! !

Drive high and go low? It starts to fall apart after chapter 170, isn't it unfinished?

It's getting worse and worse, from counting updates a day to no updates a day, from exciting to hydrological, it seems that Toad Shi really can't get up.

1. The content is smooth but contains many ancient texts. 2. Setting, travel through ancient times, become famous with Li Du's poems and be regarded as a child prodigy. The background is not clear. This needs to be set to a different world similar to ancient Chinese culture. Otherwise, if you switch to Western ancient times or barbaric ancient times in a cultural desert, you may not know what to expect. 3. The person names and angles in Chapter 2 are strange and off-kilter. 4. During the qi training period, the protagonist found a dual cultivation with a golden elixir period eldest sister who failed to break through, and they started to have conflicts. At one time, they said that the two parties rarely talked, and there was no emotion in the second life memories, but they missed her. At another time, she said that she and her old wife depended on each other, and they gave up their family wealth to treat the old wife who fell into the qi refining stage. They also bypassed the sect's ban and secretly taught the protagonist's skills. This is not the end of the world of immortal cultivation when the sect discovers that the person is gone. I don't know whether this feeling is deep or not? One person said that Sister Jin Danqi was rich at first and had seven or eight servants. The other person said that she was frugal but the servants consumed a lot of money and she relied on the protagonist's flower charms to support her family. Is this how much Jin Danqi's net worth is? 5. It's understandable that the protagonist wants to become a famous teacher, but when he meets a little girl and a young mage, he doesn't know their character, or whether the other sect is a demon sect or an evil sect, so he opens his mouth and asks if he can become a teacher without fear of being taken into a trap. 6. The protagonist became famous as a prodigy in his first life, and met the immortals through the prodigy officialdom route. In the second life, I felt that I could cultivate immortality and no longer wanted to be famous. If you don't enter the officialdom, you can understand that the first life of the Kung Fu has been obtained. If you don't become famous, where will the resources come from? The use of yellow paper for practicing talismans is limited in quantity, low in quality, and average in quality.

The protagonist is a bit stupid, and too much emphasis is placed on the rationality of the protagonist's childish behavior.

The heroine of this book has a deep love for each other, a noble character, and the protagonist's smoky atmosphere and the vicissitudes of life in three generations. It really made me feel emotional after reading it. I hope Toad will write well and not let down such a good Xiaoliuzi and senior sister.