Subdue the Dragon

The writing is quite good, but the golden finger doesn't work. Since there is a golden finger, it should be used. It doesn't have to appear that the protagonist is mentally retarded. When he has no strength, he focuses on slaying demons and demons and uses the golden finger to gain strength. When he has strength, he practices on his own every day. The author should think about it carefully.

Before it was released, I could have given it four stars or even four and a half stars, but after it was released, what happened after more than 110 chapters? The young man was ill and had to be cured of his illness. He was forced to surrender his intelligence for the sake of the protagonist of the plot. The master who had only known him for a few months was considered a blessing, but he risked his life to escort an old Taoist friend and almost died several times. Then he took the initiative to provoke big shots and big monsters (this is also a big poison. If it weren't for the protagonist's halo, he would have died long ago. ), And knowing that the other party will find you soon, you have to stay in the local place to wait for the missing veteran to come back. The problem is that you don't know whether your so-called master is dead or alive, or even where he is. How can you forcibly bind him and then fight the big boss after knowing him for a few months? Finally, literary youth should not write novels. After finally seeing a good book, they thought they had found gold, but it turned out to be adulterated. . .

The appearance of various characters, differences in power, levels of cultivation, classification of monsters and monsters, etc. Are all written in a mess. They all appear suddenly and the foreshadowing is confusing.

To be honest, an author with extremely poor professional ethics is extremely fluent. One chapter has 4,000 words, and he writes completely irrelevant things? How does it relate to the plot? There were a lot of typos, but they were not corrected and the book was deleted.

There are a lot of typos, which seriously affects the reading experience.

Why do I have to charge for everything before it is put on the shelves? Isn't that a free chapter?

Can you use an armor-piercing arrow for the protagonist's arrow so that it doesn't bounce off when it encounters armor?

The more I look at it, the more uncomfortable I feel. The protagonist's level has been improved, and his skills have been upgraded, but I don't know when he will "return to the city" to update his equipment. Every time he fights, he doesn't break his defense. You can't really pass the level with that crappy equipment and all the stats.

The first three chapters are written like an idiot, and they have a tendency to abuse the protagonist. I don't recommend them.

He went to rob a tomb and killed the tombkeeper, 666