My Endless Life

The protagonist has this ability, why does he use a knife? Throw a grenade or a larger grenade. It's not much better than charging with a knife, and it's also safer. Then a chapter or two later. Inexplicably, a soldier dared to attack the protagonist. He saw the miserable condition of his companions in front of him and dared to attack him. This is such a wise move, and his commander is still beside him. Then he also wrote a classic anime body shape comparison, and another contrast, and the protagonist did not take the initiative to learn command, saying that he would not learn if he had no talent. Is this something that can't be learned without learning? The main character is pretty good-looking Xiaobaiwen

If there is any evaluation, I can give a very simple evaluation. It is not cool enough and the imagination is too small. As we all know, if an idea feels good, it must be served as soon as possible. It is secretive and excessive restraint is not necessary. If you can't catch the eye, no one will see it. According to the initial development, it is very satisfying to defeat the strong men of various countries, command one battle after another, and finally become a prince and prime minister. However, this road has been clicked, and it has spread to neighboring countries. When the great sage studied the truth, he became a disciple of the truth. A generation of Dharma God, transforming the national system, and perfecting the path of a mage is also very exciting. The protagonist written by the author does not have such courage. He has not developed at both ends, and is marginalized by both sides. In the end, even if he has some recovery, he has lost the joy of doing it in one go. Maybe the author Wen Qing is suffering from illness, and wants to create a person who is obviously capable of doing many things, but has no regrets and sorrows about accomplishing and changing anything. After some relatively simple templates are improved, , it is still very comfortable. Sages, kings, overlords, saints, etc., If they can be well-shaped, are all very perfect (I will not give examples here). However, mortals (people without spiritual courage and talent) can cause controversy to the greatest extent (here I will give an example, reincarnation without a job). This road is not easy to follow, and the author will not take this road. It may simply be that the author lacks the ability to create characters. The author may want to slowly squeeze out the fun and not want to be overwhelmed by his brain. There is no need to worry about the lack of holes and the unfinished work. This is something you need to consider only if you have a precise outline. If not, all the ideas must be brought up quickly, and then quickly collect new information, check the data, speed up thinking and create new ideas. Any cutting-edge creator is extremely expressive and sincere about the creation itself. Only in this way can the work be spiritual. Finally, I hope the author can improve his writing skills and tell a good story.

This kind of reincarnation story is the most annoying. It's all short-lived and the word count is too low.

I think the writing is good, but it feels very contradictory: he said that he wants to live hard, and that every life he wants to live is the last one. This is what the protagonist himself said. Then, how did he do it? Even though I'm underage, I want to go to the battlefield (in the novel, adult men are required to go to the battlefield). Besides, when I go to the battlefield, I won't think more about my own safety. Why are I so desperate? It's not difficult to survive with your ability, right? Also, if this country is great, it shouldn't let you go to the battlefield. So what's the problem with you being a deserter? The country is very strong, but it doesn't need you. If it's not strong, how can it take care of you when the enemy is at hand? Or maybe you haven't explained something clearly.

Did you just change two words in someone else's text and then publish it? It's been a long time since I finished the book My Diary of Becoming a God.

Out of five points, the author deducted one point for the description of magicians in primary technological wars. Everyone has guns, so why should ordinary people compete with cheating players who use acceleration, perspective, and shields? You can only hold a gun and I am a magician, right? That female doctor minus one point is disgusting. Another minus point for the spy plot, it was written entirely for the sake of writing, and the logic problems are huge.

After the protagonist turned into an undead, the plot became a bit uninteresting.

Behavior seems a bit inconsistent

Looking at it from the starting point, there are coins here and they are used up over there. Update soon!

I think it's okay, dad, dad, dad, dad