A Mob of Clones

In terms of comic quality, Sun Moon Tongwu is definitely no worse than Under One Person, but it is not animated and its popularity is slightly lower. If the author writes well, he should get good results.

This golden finger is a bit too exaggerated. When you write a clone style, if you can't share power, you have to share memories. Otherwise, can you get used to it just by practicing in space for a few days? Newcomers come in and don't know anything. How long do you have to teach them to practice martial arts and open their veins? Furthermore, this kind of book is not suitable for writing without shared power, because you have to write each story, not too long or too short. Each new person comes in to write a plot, and then practices for a period of time and writes another plot. This new world is almost ready and has to be replaced by the next one, but Before changing to the next world, this character was still a weakling. As you write more and more characters, there will be more and more plots in other worlds. Each character has to slowly level up by himself. As you write, it becomes a gathering of weaklings, especially in the eternal world. I can't imagine what will happen to him later. What about leveling up? This world is not where the main character cheats. If you practice once in a while, there will be a lot of dead people in the time and space. It is estimated that they will not be able to cultivate Wanshou or even the small golden elixir. How can you write a more enjoyable article? I can understand if you read the introduction and say that it is not an exciting article, but you can't keep abusing the protagonist, unless the author is crazy and cheating. Otherwise, everyone's leveling time is too long, and it would be boring to watch, because when watching fandom, you all want to watch and participate in the plot. Do you have the ability to participate in the story by slowly leveling up by yourself? Why should you compare with others if you have nothing? You can't just write to death and change to the next world if you can't continue. Also, the power system in that world cannot be used after a person dies. What the hell is this? What's the point of this? This kind of golden finger that you have to slowly level up by yourself is rubbish enough. It also imposes restrictions. The more you look at it, the more frustrated you are. Every weakling will die easily. Practice If you practice hard, you will die in vain. If you want to deliberately write about frustration, then write to death the eternal world in the later stage. How can such a crotch-stretching golden finger live in eternal life? His death is just right. All other practitioners of immortality skills will be tortured to the extreme.

Although the changes and contradictions in the psychological description of the protagonist in the last picture are not clearly written, that is, the details are not in place, but overall it is still very good. He wrote that we Chinese are also things that most people of our nation will choose. There is nothing wrong with the knowledge point for survival. There is nothing wrong with preparing to escape in order to survive in the face of a stronger person. The actions he makes when there is no way to escape are like a trapped animal fighting, but in fact it is so that others can escape, because among the few people present, he is the strongest and the one who is most likely to be able to hold down the boss Long You, so he came He worked hard, just like our martyr ancestors who used their flesh and blood to fight for the future of us younger generations in that poor and backward era. This kind of tenacious will, unyielding and fighting spirit is described quite well, but the details are not in place. The focus is on the details, and overall it is very good. And this is not very similar to what Duke's anorectal doctor wrote, because they cannot share each other's consciousness and experience of cultivation. Therefore, in addition to the most basic points, the characters in each world should also write about their different ways of doing things and some thinking. So far, I have done pretty well. The above is my personal opinion.

To be honest, I read 20 chapters, but I didn't see anything. This novel is a novel about the world's clones, but I didn't see anything special about it. It was as calm as a lake, with no ups and downs. I couldn't figure out what it was about in some details. I added some modifiers to the content, and some twists to the plot. Even if it's not a cool novel, it has to have ups and downs.

The author's introduction is the same as if he didn't write it. The logic is too confusing. It's better to delete it. It's a bit disgusting.

You have changed too much, just like "The Adventures of Jackie Chan". Why don't you write it carefully? The more you change it, the more outrageous it becomes. Liu Bei can even blame it on Lope. And the worlds you mentioned above are really true. I doubt whether the two books above were written by you.

Shining Tiga is theoretically no worse than Ultra Ao. It's good to fight Hypha larvae in the original dark state. I hope there will be a plot in the future where SanDisk completes the entire Hyperjetton.

When I saw the introduction, I wanted to complain. Power cannot be shared, but knowledge can. Once you have knowledge, you are still afraid that if you don't have power, you won't be able to do fantasy. You can go to the technology side. You have this ability to be a clone, so going to the technology side is the best choice.

Keep repeating a routine. Obviously knowing that he is already in danger. Not cautious at all, got slapped in the face again and again by the minions

I don't know if the author will read it, but I really suggest that the author use less flashbacks and narration writing techniques. One is that the content of the 99-story story itself is relatively fragmented, and it will be even more messy if you come back this time. The other is that the author himself likes to write various theories, and the content of the story is relatively thin. Adding flashbacks and narrations is equivalent to killing himself after a serious injury.