In What Age Are You Still Traveling Through the Main God Space?

The writing is not good, and the outline must have been revised. I don't know what the use of writing the first few worlds is. After reading it, it's like I haven't read it. The author used his own IQ to directly reduce the dimensionality. After writing a few worlds, I guess he only remembered what his introduction was after reading the book reviews, so the protagonist was inexplicably confused.

The more you write, the more shit you get! Just write your story! What political leanings are involved? Are you right? Can it succeed? Don't you think you are very frivolous?

What kind of sexual culture do wolves have? Does the alpha wolf go first? [Emot=default,01/]

The author's stock of gags is pretty good, and the application is OK, but the author has enough brains, but his IQ can't keep up with his own. The author sets the protagonist to be brainless, and has no hope for the protagonist. But many of the worlds created have big problems. The author just creates the world he wants at will, but it is very one-sided. Many things are inconsistent. To put it bluntly, the setting is not rigorous. The direction you wrote is a very messy fusion monster. Your own settings are still so messed up. Except for your gags, the story has no meaning at all. No wonder several book reviews mention "Several Worlds" and it feels like reading them is in vain.

In the world of Legend of Heroes, a hundred years of skill is less than a hundred tons of power. Later, after Naruto, 200 years of force was transformed into a hundred thousand tons of magnetic force. Let's talk about one hundred thousand horses being able to punch a 10,000-ton giant wheel and being propelled by electricity to fly. When I was in One Piece, I didn't expect that the author's 100% planet-level could not beat a gray knight without a kiloton, a Shinigami who didn't know much about self-reinforcement, and a kiloton protagonist who couldn't fly. I don't know anything about Junjin's world except the demon. There's obviously a lot to write about in Cyber Naruto's world, but I don't know anything about it.

I have read more than thirty chapters, and I feel that the introduction and the main content are completely different.

It's a very thoughtful book, but the author may feel that the writing is a bit incomplete in general (it's hard to describe, but you may feel this feeling as you read it). But the stories in each world are wonderful. The writing in the novel is smooth, the characters are well-depicted, and many of the imaginative plots were refreshing to me. It's not a robot, and there are some books out there. Do you have any recommendations? Ps: Personal opinions, the author lightly comments, if you have any opinions, please explain in detail

The introduction says that there is a magnetic field rotating. I haven't practiced it after reading 50 chapters. What are you doing? You are lying. I hate liars the most.

Although it looks crazy, it is consistent with reality

As a reviewer, I am not very professional, but I still want to say a few words that will help improve the author's writing style. I will write a review for each book to tell the author so that the book he writes in the future will improve the level and make readers more comfortable. I hope the author can make progress after reading my review. I won't say it anymore. After all, I have said before that I am not a professional.