Tianyun Immortal Way

A wave of experience

Do you really want to ditch the last novel? The flaws include a lack of text, large battle scenes, numerous monster and demon chapters, and frame-by-frame decomposition like slow motion.

This could have been a eunuch, it would be best to continue searching for the way to the Heavenly Master!

I was just reading with enthusiasm, but then I lost my interest. Even though I was a eunuch, I said it was the end of the book.

The protagonist slowly adventures in the world of immortality from a mutilated double root. Part of the family's funding and help, as well as his own carefulness and bravery, and part of luck. There is no golden finger in the whole text. The protagonist slowly grows up based on his own experience. The article talks about various kinds of skills, magic weapons, spiritual energy magic weapons, the functions of magic weapons, as well as the feeding of puppets and spiritual beasts. Various settings are included. It's more reasonable. It's a very good-looking novel, but the results are not very good. I don't understand why. I really recommend it. I stopped reading it after I saw the main character Jin Dan returned to his original family residence. There are still some left in the back. I'm afraid there won't be a follow-up. It's such a pity. The author has a solid writing skills and is sophisticated in fighting details. I suggest you continue writing fairy tales, and you will definitely become famous! It's really a loss to the genre of fairy tales that you don't write fairy tales!

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It's a pity that this author stopped writing books. His writing skills are very good, and neither the enemy nor we are mentally weak. The layout is reasonable and the story is very strong, especially the battle. The author's writing is very exciting and I can't stop reading it. It's the only novel that has been read by ordinary people for so many years. The author's last book was also very good, but it's a pity that he won't write it later. The same is true for this book. Alas, the good book was not well publicized and the author could not see the benefits and could not continue. It is a pity!

The writing is too detailed. Even if an unimportant character comes out to fight, I have to write several chapters. Everything is explained in detail. It feels a bit slow and not so hearty.

It would be best to write out the pattern of multi-racial competition and also include some details about the situation of the sea tribe.

There is something wrong with the setting. How many spiritual root attributes are missing? It cannot be balanced? Are the three spiritual roots balanced? The fire of a single spiritual root cannot burn me to death?