Jade Pendant Fairy Mansion

To be honest, I immediately gave up the book when I saw that the protagonist has a fourth or fifth spiritual root. Everyone in the world of immortality knows that the fourth or fifth spiritual root is the most rubbish and yet he writes a protagonist who makes rapid progress? Apart from anything else, as long as the protagonist builds the foundation, unless no one knows that as long as someone knows, the Golden Core Yuanying will immediately come to search for souls and rob him of his opportunity. Fools all know that a person with poor spiritual roots has a huge chance to build the foundation. Unless the people in the world have bad brains, or it will be written like a mortal cultivating immortality biography, when casual cultivators keep changing the map, and others don't know what spiritual roots the protagonist has, then I might as well go see Han Laomo. Don't tell me that you can secretly build a foundation without letting anyone know about it. As long as you have a family or a sect, you can't hide it all the time. Unless you don't want resources and hang out with a group of people who are practicing Qi every day, otherwise just write a hundred-year-old transformation god.

As he said in the article, he can't earn 20 spiritual stones a day, but he pays 3,000 spiritual stones for alchemy tuition? Show me directly and I am speechless...

I don't feel that he is cultivating immortality. It's more like adding a little something from the world of immortality to the ancient world.

I have read all the author's books, and my favorite is Cultivating Zhenguan. The author really likes that the protagonist is an ordinary person who is a little smarter than ordinary people, but a long way from a genius. He has a small golden finger and only relies on modern knowledge to reduce dimensionality. For example, he engages in a monopoly economy in Zhenguan, and plays Red Will in Battle of Arms. The standard and exciting writing is very exciting... However, it is difficult to do this in the world of immortality. Cultivation is like scientific research, which cannot be played by normal people's wisdom. People with ordinary IQs can be emperors, but it is impossible to become Einstein.

Overall, it's pretty good, but the details are not good, there are too many typos, the sentences are not fluent, and the semantics of Xiuxian Modern are repeatedly skipped. I hope it can be refined.

3 points at most for me personally. Because he involves all living beings. He writes very well. If it doesn't involve sentient beings, he is just a running account. It gives me a headache looking at it. There are about the same amount of daily writing and AI writing.

The author has two golden fingers, one is equivalent to the space of the tuba, and the other is equivalent to the avenue explainer.

Chapter 161: A sudden plot appears. It seems that I want to give away my daughter? Anyway, I can't stand it anymore after this.

I'm not feeling any better after reading Chapter 40, and the merits haven't appeared yet.

The words in this book do not convey the meaning, the sentences are not fluent, and there are various grammatical errors. It often uses modern words to write about ancient immortality. Why.