Tian Yuan Xian Ji

Does life always go by day by day? The same goes for cultivating immortality. Although the content of the novel seems trivial, it still retains the flavor of life. Since you are writing a novel, you must make one book and one world. There are all walks of life, jobs, everything. You can't just fight and kill. It would be so boring to have only fight and kill in this world. I think the novel is very well written, keep it up (ง •̀_•́)ง.

Since the protagonist has struggled to survive in difficult situations since he was a child, he has also been involved in martial arts in the world, and even entered cultivation for decades due to fate. But why is the protagonist still so stupid... The protagonist's experience in the article should be ruthless and thoughtful... And his character is better than this, right? A protagonist like this who has been cultivating for decades is too bland and has no highlights!

The framework of the novel is pretty good, but it doesn't seem to be suitable for the background of cultivating immortals. The protagonist is so ignorant that he can actually cultivate immortals. After building the foundation, he is still a fool. I really can't agree with it. I don't know if I can endure it for a few more chapters before giving up.

The plot is very good, the IQ is absolutely online, the relationship between the characters, the system, the training system, etc. Are clear and clear, surpassing Netherworld and Master Road.

I've read a lot of books, and at least this one doesn't have any plot lines about over-level killing or the collapse of combat power. The logic is clear and the story is smooth, so that's fine.

Very good work. The concept is grand and reliable, and the three views are correct. It has thoughts and connotations, and the writing style is also good.

The main reason is the writing style. The plot logic alone is not a big problem. The problem lies in the author's conception of the social framework of cultivating immortals. The reason why novels about immortality appear is because people desire and yearn for "immortals". In fact, this is true not only of the immortality genre but also of other fantasy, science fiction, and superhero genres. If cultivating immortality is just to be a better social worker, and immortality is just to work longer, do you still yearn for "immortality"?

These are the disciples trained by the sect. Whatever they get, they can sell it privately. It's better to hand it over to the sect, which can not only improve the sect's strength but also get rewards from the sect!

(Chapter 38) A total of 11,000 spiritual stones were sold. He took 2,200 and I took 2,200. The remaining 6,400 spiritual stones were left. I took another 2,000. How did you get it? No matter how violent it is, it won't be like this. If this is the case, the sect will just sell herbal medicines without refining elixirs. Do you think the state is collecting interest and copyright fees now? Do you understand? There is no shipping fee. Do you still have a gap? I believe you said there is still a gap between the two worlds. In a world of cultivation, there is only one or two levels at most.

The characters in the novel are rich in personality, and the cultivation settings are rich and diverse. They are full of conspiracy, power, and different concepts. There are many settings and cultivation systems in the novel.