Beast-controlling Fairy Clan

When will it be the family patriarch's turn to be an undercover agent? It's a bit absurd, the plot is a bit confusing, and it feels like it's about to collapse.

Well. . . Cultivation of immortality. . . The protagonist's IQ is really worrying. In the early stage, the poison is light and you can still see it, but the more you look at it, the more serious the poison is. This is really a chronic poison. It cannot be cured and you will vomit blood and die.

I heard that the author's character is insured! Keep it first! Don't feed yourself to death! Recently, I especially like family cultivation and farming stories! Expect

It's really disgusting. Why do you have to write about being forced to practice double cultivation? What can it show? It can only make readers disgusted. Anyway, I am disgusted. What the hell! It's not that you can't write heroines and the like, but can you stop it from being so disgusting? Is it because you don't really enjoy getting along with me, or are you like-minded? You have to write such a disgusting plot. Accepted

The rest is okay, but the character and thoughts of the protagonist are unbearable. The double standard is very serious, but I still feel good about myself. For example, when controlling the soul of Xu Fu, I felt unkind and at the same time wrote that I could only do this for the sake of the family, and that I was responsible and established. The key was not to do this to the outside world, but to coax myself. While he couldn't believe his surname, he raised his family to give Lin a pill, and he also thought about giving a fortune to someone named Zifu to buy a horse. But against Xu Fu, who has served his family for hundreds of years, it is not impossible to be on guard. Why not guard against Lin Jindan?

Everything you write is a routine. A few months later, you go out for something, and then a few months later, you go out again for something. The more you write, the more you come back!

A storage bag can hold a lot of things. Why do you need to use a spirit beast? Why do you have to spend a lot of money to hire someone like you? Why don't you use messengers and the like? If you have to write a letter, you have to use your slow express delivery. And if you have some common sense, in comparison, the history of human civilization on earth is only a few thousand years. In the history of immortal cultivation set in this book, there are people who have lived for thousands of years. With cultivation, IQ is higher. Don't treat people in the immortal world as mentally retarded.

I feel that the Gold Finger is not very powerful. If the Gold Finger is too strong, it will definitely be boring. However, the sense of presence is indeed a bit lacking. It is almost boring. I wonder if adding more space capabilities will make it better.

The story about cultivating immortals is about killing people and grabbing treasures, the fantasy academy competition, the story about Han Paopao's revenge that lasts all night, there is no woman in my heart, what kind of family should I write about, the martial arts have nothing to do with beast control, what kind of beast control should I write about?

Very poisonous 1. The protagonist's personality changes erratically, sometimes being timid and sometimes brave, and many of his decisions are too stupid. 2. It's basically useless for a family to simply suck blood. The protagonist has to do everything. 3. I didn't write about family portraits. Don't you understand why the book's grades are so low? 4. In terms of writing, the description of fighting is very average, but in terms of realm breakthrough, it is like trying to draw a cat from a tiger. 5. The biggest failure: Lin Hongyu's initial chapter was too clownish and sad compared to Xu Fu and Zhang Liang later on, and she was also an outsider. How could she, who was an enemy from the beginning, allow the Zhou family to spend almost all of the family's savings to buy elixir-forming objects to help break through the golden elixir? It was clearly stated from the very beginning that he was most afraid of betraying others after supporting outsiders. How come, he was no longer afraid of betrayal after just having an affair with the old patriarch? It's especially strange and strange to suddenly involve the lack of emotional foreshadowing. Summary: It's not as good as the old-school books from ten years ago, where everyone revolves around the protagonist, and a lot of tactics are either not rigorous in fighting or written in seconds, and it's a middle-to-lower novel.