Changsheng: My Experience in Patrolling the Liver

The writing is really bad! Why is an immortal rushing forward with his head raised every day? Don't have a background or a wife and children? Do you really think you can become a high official by working hard?

The biggest failure is that the system is chaotic. All martial arts and martial arts only have realms, and characters have no realms, only how many kilograms of strength they have.

I really want to curse, your two brothers have been dead for so long and you can arrange to resurrect them. They are just two ordinary big-headed soldiers. Even if you add the generals of the vanguard army later, their strength is rubbish. The level of strength is from low to high. Practice physical training, Qi training, Xiantian, Zifu, ordinary people can't even reach the peak without practicing Kung Fu. They even told me that corpses have the qualifications to become innates. Why? ! ! , One of your protagonists cheated and practiced for more than 40 years before he became the first innate in history. The corpses of other qi-training masters did not have the qualifications to become innate corpse puppets. Your two brothers are so awesome. I think I will write about resurrecting your two brothers later. It is really poisonous. You are the one who rushes to the front in everything and a big boss will kill you if you don't like it. You have Resurrection is useless. The most poisonous thing is that a person who can see the future and deduce it approaches you. Are you not wary? If I have an immortal golden finger with this person next to me, you think it is scary or not, I will kill this person first. The strength is not hidden, how much strength is revealed, don't you know Hide 7 Reveal 3? You are immortal, why are you still fighting hard? I'll give it one star. There are too many poisonous points, too few plots and plots. It's all about recklessness. The writing is too poor and I haven't even thought about the outline of the story.

Brainless article! The beginning is still readable, but the rest is just mindless. This book is probably going to end badly! I have a long life, so why not just stay here? Do you have to rush in front and act like a dog? Does the protagonist like being a dog that much? Is it okay now? Your master rebelled against the imperial court and participated in the feud between princes? You can't run away either, right? Will it not be liquidated afterwards? You don't have much credit, and you won't run away if you get implicated. How many people who have participated in party struggles since ancient times have ended well?

The protagonist has been training for several years to reach level 5. He randomly picks up two dogs and raises them for a year to reach level 3 or 4. Really nb

How should I put it? It's average. I was very cautious in order to survive for twelve years, but if I didn't practice martial arts to increase my strength, this should not conflict with increasing my life span. Later, my martial arts improved by leaps and bounds in a short period of time. It was really inconsistent and forced to complete the plot.

I don't understand why there are so many people complaining about it. This book is already very good. At least there are not many novels of the same type that can beat this book. Some of the comments are really disgusting. Just read the pirated version for free. After that, run the genuine software and complain about the author. If you are so disgusting, why did you read the more than one million words of this novel? It's normal for this kind of novel to be a little bit toxic. At least the protagonist is neither a virgin nor a stallion, focusing on martial arts, and he doesn't play those infinite matryoshka dolls. Does this novel have a conscience like those in oral literature?

I can't even understand the first five chapters of Goldfinger. I wrote it and said that I traveled back in time for more than 10 years and I can't even get the low-end martial arts. Did you just post it in AI without reading it yourself? The plot arrangement and the power system are all designed and played. If you can't write them, can't you copy them? 7 Points is overwhelming.

You are no different from a tortoise. You can only hide and dare not do anything. You are just a tortoise. You are weak and timid. You have more than 100 pictures and you are just a waste in a small place. Moreover, your understanding is not that good, and your force is not that good. You are just a waste. The entire world view and world's force system are not completely complete. It's rubbish. The welfare system is incomplete and incomplete, and the social system is incomplete and incomplete. It's just a hodgepodge of rubbish written wherever it comes to mind. It doesn't even have the most basic outline. I don't even understand what you are going to write. You are described as a generator. In fact, what is the difference between you being a generator and a dog? What's the difference? You have nothing but immortality, you are nothing

I've read a few chapters and can't stand it anymore, it's so stupid.