Sacrifice to God

Any woman can do it I saw that I was having sex with my sister-in-law again. Goodbye

The author has put so much effort into writing this book, but so few people have read it. After reading a few chapters of this book, I read your first one, and I found that the plot you wrote is okay, with not many loopholes, but your shortcomings are obvious. The power system is always broken. It is best to fix the power system. For example, in your first novel, the second-level breakthrough can be better than the first five who have not broken. Later, it is said that the second-level breakthrough is better than more than ten third-level. Overturned, the protagonist has not learned any strong martial arts from the middle to the late stage, and has not used light kung fu. Then, wouldn't the late stage be similar to the mid stage, and he can deal with several late stages? If the first level is not beaten to death by a bunch of second level in minutes, the power system you described is very different from level to level, but it is not easy to use with the protagonist. The following are the key points. You can refer to good immortal cultivation novels. In the early stage of Qi training, it is difficult to beat noon. Unless you have some good magic weapon or the level of spell practice is higher, you can beat you in the middle stage. However, those who have perfected their Qi training will definitely not be able to beat the ordinary foundation-building early stage, but they can run away at a high cost. The fake elixir learns some awesome spells or magic weapons, and can barely protect themselves in the early stage of the ordinary golden elixir. By the time the fake infant is in the early stage of the ordinary Yuanying, the protagonist's combat power is growing, and when fighting across realms, he must be ordinary, not elite. The elite can surpass you in the later realms. The display of power must be accurate. You cannot break rocks at the first level, but you can break slates at the second level. At least you have to break a rockery. The description of the power must be accurate, otherwise the image will be very poor with the readers. Alas, I have written millions of words. I hope your efforts will be worthy of your efforts. I hope your next book will have a good ending. From reading novels in 2005 to now, from borrowing books to MP4s to mobile phones, I have seen a lot of routines. If the logic of the plot is not good enough, don't write it in a bad way. For example, it will offend a lot of people, but when you go out, you will be wrong. You don't pay attention without a bodyguard, and then write about how the enemy is thinking about playing tricks on the protagonist. Although the danger is saved later, it will give readers the conclusion that the protagonist is an idiot. Many authors will write such idiot plots. The protagonist can go out, but don't write about how the enemy is playing dirty tricks on the protagonist. Avoid some plots.

The protagonist has reached the ultimate level through every realm, and he is a great perfection, but he still doesn't dare to fight with a fake innate, and he doesn't even have the courage to fight. What I said before is different from others, it reaches the extreme. And then this? All members use their wits to highlight the protagonist. They have all been in the officialdom for decades. Which one is not an old fox. What I wrote here is like a fool, how childish and stupid.

There are no big holes in the logic of the plot, except that the protagonist is like a bulldozer, moving wherever he goes, and often describes these contents in large and colorful ways, which is frowned upon.

A typical novel written by a novice, anyone with any brain can't read it. It can only be said to be very poisonous. .

Does it look good? Does it look good? Does it look good? Does it look good?

Martial arts is martial arts. I hate engaging in conspiracies and tricks. I think I am very smart.

The main character was replaced with flesh, and instead a person was directly chopped up and sacrificed. Don't write the protagonist as a bad guy, as this will attract more people.

I've been following it for a few years, and I recommend it. I think it's okay. Of course, it's limited to my personal style. It's decisive in killing, not a virgin, and it has a bit of modern emotion, which looks very comfortable. Another point is that I actually like the plot and background. I hope it won't be poorly written, and there will be no eunuchs. This is the second reason for recommendation.

Are you an amateur? Updates are so slow. I quit my job and write novels at home. What kind of job do I still have to work? I will update more than twenty chapters every month. I will give you a monthly pass. Are you embarrassed to ask for it?