Immortal Martial Lord

The author's last book was obviously very good, but why is this book so ugly? In the first few chapters, the protagonist didn't explain much, but his sister-in-law mentioned it more than a dozen times, describing his appearance and figure. Does this have anything to do with it? What everyone likes to read is male porn, so just tell the protagonist quickly. It's not that you can't add a heroine, but can you write some stylish female characters? You're not a primitive person. It's too low to want to make brothers end up like brothers. Why do you keep eyeing your sister-in-law all day long? Don't even think about it. In male videos, everyone will understand the situation and describe the appearance of the female character. I feel that most of the people who come in looking at the title of this novel are not coming for the plot.

I have read 100 chapters patiently. The main character has not graduated from the kindergarten class. I really don't know what the author has written. I have written over and over again. I have written **100 chapters and I haven't graduated from kindergarten yet. I have written and written again and again. The scope of activities does not exceed the three acres of land in front of my house. I am really convinced. In addition to going home, I just practiced martial arts, using Goldfinger, and a bunch of third-rate martial arts masters failed for a hundred chapters. In the end, I couldn't even afford to offend any small family in the small county near my house. This book doesn't have a thousand chapters, and the protagonist can't even leave his small county town. There isn't a book that has ten thousand chapters, and the protagonist can't even speak loudly when he goes out. It's 100 chapters, and there's no story line. There's nothing else except practicing those useless kung fus every day. There isn't even a clichéd plot. I originally thought there wouldn't be a cliched plot that sucks, but it turns out, you can't help but laugh to death, and it ends without any problem, just like that, there's nothing. Then I continued various exercises, one hundred chapters, and the story line has only passed a month. Damn it, the author has been writing the book for more than a month, right? ? ? Until now, I still haven't figured out what this book is about, what are the main conflicts, what are the crises, what are the suspenses Nothing but the repetitive routine of practice What can be written in one sentence through practice can be repeated by the author for several chapters I don't know, how do you get this kind of book? Now the Internet articles have become like this? ?

Brainless article! How many officials have you seen who rose to power through loyalty and hard work? The one who laughs last is either someone with background, or someone who is flattering and sweet-mouthed. A dynasty with an iron-clad aristocratic family and a long-running dynasty, with a county official who changes every few years? Anyone with a brain knows how to take refuge in a noble family. Even if he doesn't, he can live a neutral life. What are you doing to earn a salary? Are you feeling better now? Are you crippled? Who would protect a dog that is worthless to an official every day? If your watchdog is useless and can no longer guard the door, will you replace it with another one? A younger brother comes through time travel? The savior?

After you read a few articles, you will find that there is not much information. And the funniest thing is how can the protagonist's brother be so naive as a police officer, so he puts his hope for the safety of the whole family in the loyalty of the county magistrate? Why, when you go on a mission, you meet all good men and women? Is everything you see true, good and beautiful? Moreover, the protagonist's sister-in-law has been attracted by the villain. The protagonist's brother was just an ordinary policeman with meager martial arts before, but later he was even more useless. How many months will it take to deal with such a person? Give the protagonist time to develop? The real villain sent someone directly to your door a few days after you were disabled. Okay, what do you think of the county magistrate's face? What qualifications do you, a young detective, have to influence the county magistrate? It's good enough to try it out

Members felt that the previous chapters were very good, and they also said good things about this book in their comments. Afterwards, members read part of it and couldn't bear it anymore. After it was put on the shelves, they really couldn't stand it. Almost every chapter had to report the entire system panel, and the author really wanted to write down what the protagonist ate for breakfast, lunch, dinner, and how many times he went to the toilet a day and pooped out. The main plot progresses very slowly. Basically, one day passes in reality and half the day of the protagonist in the book. The author would update three chapters a day, and occasionally update a hundred chapters a month. However, it turned out that the author had been writing for a month and only half a month had passed since the plot of his **** book had already reached eighty or ninety chapters and the main character had not yet been published. The description of the protagonist in the book is also disgusting. In the dialogue on the surface, the senior brother, sister, master, and master are called, and he calls the protagonist by name in his heart. Others have no respect for the protagonist for being so helpful. He is simply a villain and a hypocrite. I thought there was a problem with the author's writing technique, but looking at the introduction and there is an old book that has been completed, this does not seem to be an issue with the writing technique. There are also so many typos that I really don't even check myself after I finish writing, and rely solely on readers to correct them.

How good is this book? Let me tell you about it. Martial arts are divided into nine levels, from low to high, from level 9 to level 1. Before entering the first level, you have to achieve a small level of Qi and blood, a large level of Qi and blood, and a perfect level of Qi and blood. Only then can you enter the level and officially become a warrior. Then the male protagonist didn't reach the level of Qi and Blood until Chapter 83. Maybe the author also noticed that it was too slow, so after a few chapters, the Qi and Blood reached perfection, and then he entered the game. So what was said in the previous 83 chapters? There doesn't seem to be any particularly outstanding plot. It just keeps talking about how much proficiency has increased. It's too watery.

The more you read, the more you read. There are a lot of descriptions of the practice process, skills and so on. You can already tell the content of this one just by looking at the chapter names. There is no plot in these recent chapters. From getting the news about Grandmaster Xiao Sheng to her calling, the middle ten chapters are about upgrading a few skills, and then there is no plot advancement. The purpose of reading the ten chapters is to see you upgrade a few skills. These upgraded skills should be written in one or two chapters. This is not adding water to the book, but directly looking for books in the water.

I don't understand why I finished reading this book. Let's put it this way, Pig's Knuckle is a retarded person. He likes whatever he wants. He won't fight if there are enemies. He has to be beaten by someone else or threaten his family. If someone wants to break through and cause trouble for you, he won't intercept or kill him. Wait for someone to come to your house and kill you. If it weren't for this author's abstraction, your family would have died in the aftermath of the battle. Also, the most useful thing is water. It can combine with the power of a river. He has to practice something with a low limit. It's dozens of chapters. If you have the power, don't use it.

It's a really disgusting setting. I don't know why it was recommended. First of all, I relied on others, and my relatives helped me a lot. For example, my brother's family didn't have enough resources for his children, and he licked his face and said that he had to choose between civil and military affairs. He told his brother that he just wanted to learn casually, and everyone except his brother knew what he meant. He forced his brother who was dedicated to his brother to take risks, and was eager to make meritorious deeds, and lost his arm. Secondly, there are many descriptions of the appearance of your sister-in-law. You can observe your sister-in-law so carefully. Shouldn't you avoid suspicion? And due to the unexpected appearance of his sister-in-law (coveted by Cao Cao), he took the opportunity to accept his brother's sponsorship to learn martial arts in the martial arts school and expand the success of Green Tea. In the end, because of the many hardships faced by your family who love you, you have to step on their shoulders and stand up. I just thought, in the end, even if you become an immortal and become an ancestor, what if your family can live forever? What they are going through now will make their memories painful throughout their lives and cannot be made up for in any way. But you are still complacent and think how great you are. Have you not considered the feelings of your family?

I originally wanted to give it five points, but after watching it for a long time, I found that there are serious problems. First, the plot is dragging. He obviously has the ability, but he always needs the support of others, and he is not passionate enough. This kind of slow-burning novel is not something that a new author can handle, because you will not have sincere fans to accompany you to your best. This kind of novel can only be written by a great writer. Second, the level of combat power is unclear. Several martial arts books have exceeded the limit 5 or 6 times, but in the end, they are still unable to kill randomly. In contrast to this, they have only practiced 2 or 3 ordinary martial arts books, and only when they have achieved great achievements can they leap forward and fight. Both of them have broken combat power settings. Thirdly, isn't it said that the Earth Kings of Huangtian Sect are at best equivalent to masters who have reached the peak of marrow refining? Now the protagonist can even compete with the First Master of Celestial Beings. Tell me what is the meaning of their appearance? Are they cutting grass? Fourth, the biggest problem with this book is that it is too fan-friendly and slow to death. I recommend the author to read the novel "Immortality Begins from the Thirty-six Transformations of Tiangang". The protagonist seems to be named Jiang Li, and it is really interesting. Originally I was going to give the author a reward, but when I saw the lag between level 6 and level 4, I gave up. I was afraid that the author would break his back as soon as I invested money.