Seventy-two Transformations Starting from a Thin Dog

Author, don't you read what you wrote? People who live in mountain villages. I don't have firewood to boil water, so I have to buy it in the city. You are really an immortal living in heaven and don't know anything about the world.

I can barely take a look at it, but the logic is too nonsense, and it keeps deliberately creating contradictions. The villain keeps trying to blame the protagonist. Although it was him who did it, he can't explain it to a normal person if he can explain it more reasonably. This dog has never been with the protagonist. Just because the dog killed his little brother, he suddenly had an idea and realized that this was the dog raised by the protagonist and came to kill his little brother. There was no concept of a weapon weighing a thousand pounds. People around him didn't react at all. It would be difficult for a normal person to wield a weapon weighing a few pounds for a long time. If a person weighs ten thousand pounds when he is born, why didn't he blow the placenta out with one punch? Some settings are not impossible, but you are an ordinary person with this world view. Don't be too outrageous when you pull an ancient holy body like Gouba. But about that genius brother-in-law, I don't even want to say it, hey💩, if it doesn't work well, don't write it. It doesn't matter if he is dead or missing, or if he is alive and well, the protagonist's family is so bad at the beginning🐏 If he doesn't come over to take a look, I suggest you rewrite it and take a look.

I couldn't stand it at the beginning. It requires evil spirit to improve my abilities. It consumes a lot of money and can only be used for half an hour. I can't write without suppressing it, right?

From the first chapter alone, it can be seen that the author has no life experience and knows nothing about firewood, rice, oil, and salt. It is equivalent to the purchasing power of the earth. Rice costs 10 yuan per catty, and pork costs 30 yuan per catty. The poor eat dirt. They live in the village and go to the city to buy firewood to boil water. Their brains are cramped. Even now there are a lot of wild trees in the countryside. If they are not cut down, even the dead branches and large hay can be used to boil water.

The design of the force is a bit complicated and looks too numb, and many similar plots are too childish. They always say that they look after others and look after others. When he really looked after others, a person in the village asked him to be the manager. Did he take it? , And there is also a person who was hired directly from the medicine hall. Although the store is offering high wages, why should his store be compared with the medicine hall? If a county has such a high level of military force, how will it be written in the future? , And there is a county magistrate who speaks so loudly. How many experts are there in a county with only 100,000 people in total? , You can have as much as you want

Can it be read by an author who has basically zero common sense about life? In reality, he may also be a fool. Mountain people in the mountains actually go to the city to buy firewood? Do you think this is human speech? You are a fool on a par with those young people who say they will be fined for not working, and the poor people who rent out their houses. Author.

I feel so uncomfortable. Your writing skills are good, but the logic of the world is really bad. The top master in the county has close to a million kilograms of strength, which shows that the world level is very high, but the world level is high. 150 Soldiers, most of you have a few thousand kilograms of strength, you can't push it. Master Yang killed him by himself, and he didn't even breathe. Come to the sixth level. The entire county has been killed. You want to write like this. The sixth realm has millions of kilograms of strength. The number of people is of no use. I have read more than 140 chapters. You want to write this book longer, but can you sort out the world view in your book? You said this difference is equivalent to a monster with a strength of 10,000 kilograms. Can a group of young children with a strength of 10 kilograms be able to hurt him! If it were me, in the era of cold weapons, my hair might not even fall out. Are other people so strong? The protagonist has multiple stacks and cannot jump directly. You have to respect your strength, okay?

In Chapter 10, I used 7 evil spirits to upgrade the organs transformed from a thin dog, and two of them were weakened. This upgrade gave me a weakness. It is really a rare book in a century!

Trash, restricting the protagonist to death, it is obviously a golden finger on the fantasy side and it costs money to upgrade. One evil aura is not enough, it needs to be divided into stages. Moreover, your evil aura is not easy to obtain, so you have to suppress the protagonist hard.

In fact, my reading requirements are very low. I think the plot and writing are okay, but I really can't stand the forced creation of conflicts. I have no reason to doubt the protagonist. Is the villain named Huang Conan or Holmes? Moreover, the backstage of an ordinary village tyrant is actually a middle-to-high-level leader of the largest force, or is he one of his closest subordinates? Is this just a village tyrant? Then the Huang family, the largest force, randomly knocked on your door. They insulted you casually, broke the bow of your second master, and then just left when they couldn't beat you. How about fun? The reason is that the Huang family needs face, but the co-author doesn't need face where the protagonist is? And the prices are too unreasonable, right? The protagonist gave away a weapon weighing more than 1,000 kilograms when someone invested in it. Just like it was a joke, it also cost a lot of money, so after killing the yellow villain, he got a total of 200 taels of silver? ? ? I mentioned earlier that one act of corruption cost me more than 500 taels of silver. How many years have you been engaging in corruption? He only has two hundred taels of silver with him, which is awesome. And the brother-in-law of the protagonist, who is a master of inner energy and doesn't care about the protagonist at all, is so forced in the beginning that I even want to sell my sister-in-law? ? ? Even if his brother-in-law doesn't take the initiative to care about others, he dares to mess with the protagonist? ? No one dares to offend an entry-level martial artist. How dare you offend someone in the Inner Qi Realm here? ? The protagonist's eldest brother has such an awesome brother-in-law, and he actually goes into smuggling? Moreover, the penalty for smuggling here is to expel the whole family from their household registration and become a refugee, even if you are sent to the frontier? Does this dynasty think it is too good, so it creates unrest among the refugees?