Daqian Martial Saint!
About This Novel
[Must-read products with over 10,000 orders] [Eighty Chapters Starting] [Unconventional Perspective] [New Martial Arts Attempt] [System Flow] [Lightly Pleasure, Bookishness and Comfort] Chen Ping'an traveled through several years and became an unregistered temporary servant under the control of his cheap daddy before his death. The world is tough and life is thinner than paper. He had planned to spend his whole life practicing his duties cautiously, but suddenly he discovered a way of practice that was unique to him. From then on, the qi and blood are like dragons, the inner qi becomes a gang, the universe is pure, and the sky rains down! Chaosuo, chaotou, chaosi, commander... "Sir, it's windy outside. Do you want to wear a cloak?" "Your Majesty, your Majesty, strictly enforces a strict martial law in the mountains and cities. Anyone who dares to cause chaos will be killed without mercy." "This is a humble position, sir. My lord is a thousand years old, a thousand years old, a thousand years old!" Treasure body and divine body, the pride of heaven, the son of destiny, the son of luck, I am invincible. "The overall situation is the overall situation, I have the overall situation! I am the number one genius of the human race, Chen Pingan! " "The overall situation? I think you got it wrong. Without me, where would the overall situation be!?" "No one helps me to reach the top of the mountain by walking on the snow." A noble daughter from an aristocratic family, a witch from a demonic sect, a descendant from the hidden world, a feudal official, a giant in evil ways, an ancestor of a sect, a princess from a dynasty, a beauty from heaven... Time flies, and when he looks back, he has reached the highest level. This is the story of a temporary servant who steps up to the top.
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Official(309)Scraped 2d ago
The story is good, but too watery
From around the 400th to 500th chapter, I felt that the content of each chapter was too watery. I read the chapters again today and felt that it was getting more and more watery. I will post the content of Chapter 610 for everyone to appreciate. This is the beginning of Chapter 610. Just the sigh of an NPC caused such a long series of emotions. The following content is almost the same. Water is terrible. From the fourth to fifth chapters to the latest 600 chapters, the story has not made much progress. The number of words about water is quite a lot. It is estimated that half of it is
💩, I can barely read it, but it makes me very sick after reading it💩, it's over 50 chapters, and I have become an official servant. Others think that the protagonist has not started martial arts. Anyway, I am disgusted. I practice some kung fu and hide it like the orthopedics of the sister Gou Shi.
At the beginning, I can cook and eat with these few pictures, but you asked me to read a hundred chapters, but with this writing style, I can't stand a single picture.
The author should pay attention to cultivating his character and not follow the same old routine. I have been shocked many times, and every region is shocked. . . I really don't want to talk about you, I just can't help it! Is it okay to write well, accumulate character and popularity, and succeed in the right way? You have writing skills, why do you do such things that make people look down upon and waste everyone's expectations of you! I hope you will find your way back and correct your mistakes! 🤞
I don't want to give one star
You're really not suitable for writing novels, it's too messy to be honest. The overall feeling is that Zuo looks like a woman. There are too many activities in my mind, thinking too much and doing too little. The feeling that my heart is as high as the sky and my life is as thin as paper. Always passively waiting for others to bully me, but not daring to reveal my strength
No more water! !
Now I give you ten tickets a day, regardless of the other books in my bookshelf. Can you drink more water? If you keep doing this, you can only keep it for a few months.
Moji, the protagonist eats it without any hardship. As for the bounty leader, just say it directly. If you insist on saying anything, you are afraid that others will find out that you are practicing fast, and your subsequent achievements will be falsely claimed. Is it possible that the protagonist's cultivation level has never been revealed?
The author has time to come in and take a look. .
It has been more than 20 years since I started secretly watching Jin Yong's martial arts in junior high school, and I am also an old bookworm. Nowadays, I can't read many books. I can only read chronicle novels occasionally. This is one of the few books that I can follow until now. The author should not care about what others say. What you write is really good. Just write according to your own ideas. Many malicious comments are posted just to disgust you. If they were allowed to write their own comments, they would probably be worse than **. Don't care what others say, do it according to your own ideas, don't live in other people's mouths, live in your own world.
Want some face?
If only the energy of deleting comments was used in writing, there would not be so many people criticizing it.
I don't want to read it. Chapter by chapter is all about inner activities. I can't stand the nonsense of rambling here and there. I'm talking about 8,000 to 10,000 words. There isn't much in the main story. It's all rambling.
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Community(0)
Official(309)Scraped 2d ago
The story is good, but too watery
From around the 400th to 500th chapter, I felt that the content of each chapter was too watery. I read the chapters again today and felt that it was getting more and more watery. I will post the content of Chapter 610 for everyone to appreciate. This is the beginning of Chapter 610. Just the sigh of an NPC caused such a long series of emotions. The following content is almost the same. Water is terrible. From the fourth to fifth chapters to the latest 600 chapters, the story has not made much progress. The number of words about water is quite a lot. It is estimated that half of it is
💩, I can barely read it, but it makes me very sick after reading it💩, it's over 50 chapters, and I have become an official servant. Others think that the protagonist has not started martial arts. Anyway, I am disgusted. I practice some kung fu and hide it like the orthopedics of the sister Gou Shi.
At the beginning, I can cook and eat with these few pictures, but you asked me to read a hundred chapters, but with this writing style, I can't stand a single picture.
The author should pay attention to cultivating his character and not follow the same old routine. I have been shocked many times, and every region is shocked. . . I really don't want to talk about you, I just can't help it! Is it okay to write well, accumulate character and popularity, and succeed in the right way? You have writing skills, why do you do such things that make people look down upon and waste everyone's expectations of you! I hope you will find your way back and correct your mistakes! 🤞
I don't want to give one star
You're really not suitable for writing novels, it's too messy to be honest. The overall feeling is that Zuo looks like a woman. There are too many activities in my mind, thinking too much and doing too little. The feeling that my heart is as high as the sky and my life is as thin as paper. Always passively waiting for others to bully me, but not daring to reveal my strength
No more water! !
Now I give you ten tickets a day, regardless of the other books in my bookshelf. Can you drink more water? If you keep doing this, you can only keep it for a few months.
Moji, the protagonist eats it without any hardship. As for the bounty leader, just say it directly. If you insist on saying anything, you are afraid that others will find out that you are practicing fast, and your subsequent achievements will be falsely claimed. Is it possible that the protagonist's cultivation level has never been revealed?
The author has time to come in and take a look. .
It has been more than 20 years since I started secretly watching Jin Yong's martial arts in junior high school, and I am also an old bookworm. Nowadays, I can't read many books. I can only read chronicle novels occasionally. This is one of the few books that I can follow until now. The author should not care about what others say. What you write is really good. Just write according to your own ideas. Many malicious comments are posted just to disgust you. If they were allowed to write their own comments, they would probably be worse than **. Don't care what others say, do it according to your own ideas, don't live in other people's mouths, live in your own world.
Want some face?
If only the energy of deleting comments was used in writing, there would not be so many people criticizing it.
I don't want to read it. Chapter by chapter is all about inner activities. I can't stand the nonsense of rambling here and there. I'm talking about 8,000 to 10,000 words. There isn't much in the main story. It's all rambling.
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