Long Life Journey

Long Life Journey

by Ah Bai Chi

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2.3Mwords1,049chapters
Latest:
Ch. 1049Three Corpses of Greed, Anger and Idiot (Chapter of Filling in the Holes)
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About This Novel

Zhang Shiping, a Qi-refining monk from a foundation-building family, was crawling and tumbling in the world of immortality. The new book "Da Luo Hunyuan Immortal" has 100,000 words. Please support!

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User 53990060334560mo ago

Tai Shui, more than 310 chapters of elixir formation, more than 430 chapters are still in the second level of elixir formation, and it is still in water. I don't know when the third level of elixir formation will arrive. I feel that the author wants to write the elixir formation period at the pace of more than a thousand chapters. It is disgusting that the nine levels of elixir formation are divided into nine levels and each level is endlessly watery. This book is the most watery and trivial I have ever seen. There are a lot of small things written about, and the main character just sighs when he has nothing to do. This kind of mentality is like a fairy, and he doesn't look at what the main character does. He almost doesn't write about the main character's adventure opportunities. Every time he follows the sect, he gets nothing. Every golden elixir party is filled with water, for fear that the readers will not know what the golden elixirs are called and what they look like. The details of the party are endlessly written. Well, that's it. I won't give you one star to lower your rating without spending money. Those who like to watch slow-burning movies may be able to accept it. Anyway, one golden elixir and one weight can water more than 100 chapters. I can't accept this, so I can only give up.

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Book Friends 2023012313482074mo ago

saw a beautiful picture

This is mine, everyone can move aside

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feel

Gradually, it becomes a family cultivating immortality. The protagonist suddenly has to take care of the family. The protagonist's father personally feels that his character is about to collapse. He dotes on the female apprentice that the protagonist accepts and does not let the protagonist force her to practice and choose the family to give up his son. This is in vain as he has been a monk for more than a hundred years. The protagonist himself happily accepts the family, and wants to share his only adventure with the family. Are you so loyal to the sect that raised you? Children and grandchildren will have their own blessings. If the protagonist had not gone to the sect, the family would not be much different from before joining the protagonist. It should decline or decline. If you think family blood is the most important, should you continue to be a nanny in the future? I still think it's reasonable for things like Qi Yu to rot in the stomach before dying. After all, there is only one first place. Since it's not to the point where you can't break through until you die of old age, wouldn't sharing Qi Yu and all else be a stepping stone for others? There are also things like accepting disciples. Shouldn't it be that you are no longer good enough and only accept them in order to pass on your own way? The protagonist is considered a young man based on his lifespan. Is he accepting a disciple so early just to give him more care? Do you think you have too many resources and no place to use them? What I said may be a bit harsh, but it is indeed a poisonous point in my opinion. You are welcome to reply and refute me, as long as it is not a nonsense.

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Gone in the Maple40mo ago

You're a max level stupid pig, you've been lucky all the way, otherwise you'd have died n times after reading dozens of chapters.

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feel

Overall, it looks okay, but it's a bit far-fetched to start helping someone I've only met a few times to accompany the spirit stone, and who happened to get a cheat from the protagonist. Another one is that the protagonist in more than 20 chapters makes Tengling tea, which is really poisonous. Also, I feel that the protagonist should cut off contact with the family as soon as possible, and just help the family with some foundation-building puppets and so on. The family has trained the protagonist to Qi Training 4. The protagonist even went to the sect under the guidance of his father. It has nothing to do with the family. It is enough to give him so much in return. After all, as far as the protagonist is concerned, he is still a real person. During the period of rising power, the protagonist does not need to think about the family for everything, including if the protagonist is promoted to the Golden Core, as the protagonist, it is impossible to become stronger, then the family will be a burden. It is better not to worry so much about being a mortal. Isn't it Long Aotian who has so much energy to drag his family along the road to immortality? Also, why did the protagonist suddenly develop a crush on Senior Sister Bing Linggen? It feels a little sudden. Finally, the author's writing style needs to be improved.

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Chen Mo Valley1mo ago

Finished

I finished it. I was so poisoned at the beginning that I couldn't read the book reviews.

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Hell Ange44mo ago

Too bland. It's watchable, but not good-looking and unbearable. The plot is too watery, like running water, with no highlights and no attraction at all.

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Jiangxi Stir-fry45mo ago

Regarding realm, the author explains

There are over 900 chapters and it's almost 1000. We are still in the middle stage of Nascent Soul. Is this cultivation realm too low and too slow? Is this a super low-end cultivation world? Nascent Soul is the ceiling? The author explains it so I can decide whether to continue reading or not. After all, the beginning is still okay!

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Book Friends 2023012313482075mo ago

Come on (ง •̀o•́)ง (ง •̀o•́)ง

Thank you for your support. I wish you all a happy Spring Festival and all the best.

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Reader 153052827959244875mo ago

Come on, go faster

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