Mysterious Resurrection: Weighing the Earthly World from S Level

You know, I rarely comment, but you write a fan about indigenous people? How do you say this? No wonder, just write about other similar ones, which one is not 8.0 Or above?

It can only be said to be a big mess. The fifth chapter starts to make nonsense. At the beginning of the plot, there is a person in charge who has been working for several years and has also dealt with more than a dozen supernatural incidents, as well as three A-level supernatural incidents.

I didn't want to read it when I saw it was aboriginal, but I reluctantly read it because of the lack of literature. But when I saw the ninth chapter, I was blown away. I was really convinced. Why was it written like this? I had no desire to read it. Later in the chapter, the protagonist asked about the role of gold. Brother, we have all read the original work. Did you write about aboriginals and lead us to read it again? I keep fast forwarding. The character Feng Jianjun in the first few chapters is really a failure and cannot retain readers. If you just let the protagonist control the evil ghost by chance, wouldn't it be over? Why do you do so much? At most, you can put some effort into describing the abilities of the ghosts. No one will be offended by it. Because you are the protagonist, you can control the powerful ghosts. Don't you understand that you will become the captain and die in the future? And to be honest, it's really difficult to write about indigenous people. In the indigenous world view, there is only one god, Yang Jian. Even if you write the protagonist as a god, your score will probably be lower. Just because you are not a time traveler, we can't accept it.

There's definitely something wrong with the timeline, and any person in charge would know the crash. You're weird, you're so funny.

The writing is very good, better than most Mysterious Resurrection fics, and I didn't guess any thunder or inexplicable intelligence. The low rating is probably caused by no one commenting. The ghost controlled by the protagonist is also very interesting, full of weirdness and authenticity. At present, I feel that the two ghosts are not very closely linked. The way it unfolds in my fantasy is full of authenticity: Four layers of rain curtains unfolded, and the downpour washed everything around. The dense raindrops obscured the surrounding sight. The water under the feet was like a shallow lake. The buildings in the distance gradually disappeared under the erosion of the rain curtain, and the surrounding area became empty, revealing the hazy black shadows like mountains in the distance. Unknowingly, the earth beneath me turned into a huge window mirror without knowing when, with the frame surrounding the mountain and the lake inlaid in the mirror. On the ground, what is reflected under the feet is the real-life high-rise cityscape. Reality has been separated. It turns out that the people in the rain curtain have been pulled into the world inside the window at some point. Looking up, behind the black clouds are reflected layers of window mirrors. The depths seem to be connected to a deeper supernatural place. As the water under the feet deepens, the layers of windows disappear in the water. The people trapped in the windows are imprisoned behind more windows, and the separation from reality is gradually out of reach. (The effect of a deep window is not necessarily weaker than that of a supernatural place. It is an independent space formed by the superposition of the window's supernatural powers. The window can choose to directly connect to the supernatural place, or it can choose to connect to an independent space formed by its own supernatural power and can be superimposed. After all, sometimes being exiled to a supernatural place is not a good thing. For example, if you are locked in a ghost, it will help the starving ghost collect and develop puzzles.)

Not a time traveler? Not a time traveler, you wrote the same article about Fart's mysterious resurgence by Sha Bi

What the hell is the beginning? The author must be a lunatic! What a mess! ! ! Zhang said that Zhou Mei is an only child, what! Newspaper guy again? Those two girls knew that Zhou Mei had a brother but didn't explain it clearly, and they were even more confused! Then I heard from Yan Li that he had met Xiao Yang, that is, behind the shopping mall and in front of Huanggang! The person in charge of Dayu came to Dachang and refused to let Xiaoqiang come to help! Wu Biao and her two dogs just let them watch, and in the middle, they even gave Dad a piece of advertising for me! This author is indeed a lunatic!

As someone who has read the original novel, I read a few chapters of your fanfic and it made me dizzy. All kinds of irrationality

I read it at Qidian. The writing was so messy that you didn't even know what he was writing.

Although it is an Aboriginal text, it can be seen that the author wrote it seriously. There is no water flow and the text does not follow the original work. The protagonist is not a virgin. Just because the protagonist is Aboriginal cannot deny the author's efforts.