Sequence Player

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If you can't accept it, don't read it! It's pretty good, but the protagonist is a bit too naughty and scary. Don't read it if you can't accept it. Telling Haiqing Yang Dong's name is a bit too much. What if these sharks go back and give out this identity to Yang Dong? He is a member of the Great Wall. What will he do when he comes into contact with the sharks in the future? It's so skinny that it's a bit unbearable. It's not the usual show of pretending to slap people in the face, it's very interesting. Although it's still pretending to slap people in the face, it's very special. However, the possessiveness between the male and female protagonists is rather strange, and they are not together yet. If you can't stand it, don't watch it. I only saw more than a hundred chapters and no harem. However, I feel that the author is not very good at writing about girls. The male and female protagonists are good at protecting each other, but they are too possessive. They are not in the right family, and it will definitely be troublesome to be together. There is always a strange feeling in the communication between the male and female protagonists. But why does the hero give a box of gold coins to the heroine? It would be nice to change it to something else. The male protagonist is only level 5 and has a curse on him. I think that "halo" is not Japanese. I saw the comments were all scolding, I must have missed it.

Lao Lang will finish it as soon as possible If you squirt again, take a bite of my crown.

I came from the starting point At the beginning of this book, the author himself said that he had learned from players' fierceness. But it's just that the settings for levels 1-5 are somewhat similar. The operations officer next door also came to see this and clearly said that the style is completely different. The power system is also completely different Players in this book focus on the combination of title skills and sequences. The character of the protagonist was clearly revealed in the first dungeon. He is here to protect the people he cherishes. So he will face the mortal world, face Hailingshan, face Volga, face the Blood River Divine Chosen This can be considered a passionate and emotional resonance. This is irrational, but for him, he has to fight. This shouldn't be something that can be experienced without leaving any traces of ferocity, right? That was a genius character. I have a lot of skills, but I haven't seen this kind of resonance. As for the dungeons: Academy, Tang Dynasty, Deathmatch, Sea Tribe, Chaos Night, Mysterious Island, Sanatorium, War of the Seven Kings, Dream Cruise, Yu Village, The Second Tang Dynasty... What does it have to do with ferocity? Just because it's the same infinite flow of reality, it's going to be called plagiarism? Someone has seen the sanatorium. Because the protagonist killed a few traffickers and there were traffickers next door, they jumped out and said plagiarism? Haha If you say you plagiarized, please report it immediately. Don't come here and be so weird that you feel wronged after being criticized.

The protagonist's skin is not on point, and the experience it gives is not good, so it is better not to write it this way. The jokes are even more embarrassing, which I didn't find in other books, but this book is too dense, too blunt, and sometimes very nonsensical. Not friendly to those who don't understand. I'll check it out for other books, but I just want to skip this one. The protagonist is cautious, but why does it always feel like the protagonist takes it for granted? Just change your clothes and cover your face and think that your childhood sweetheart who has been with you for more than ten years won't recognize you? It's not just me. I don't wear glasses and there are no street lights at night. I can recognize a group of old ladies walking about 10 meters away and who is my grandma. And regarding joining the national organization, I feel that if you don't want to join the protagonist, then don't give too many scenes in the early stage. Fighting wits and courage with the country is boring and annoying. If you want to write about joining, give a plot in the early stage. For example, after obtaining the player qualification, you are seriously injured and saved by the country. It is much better than being discovered. As for the childhood sweethearts, it's terrible that the plot was not well laid out. After reading a few chapters, I felt that it was not well written and the friendship was just average. It seemed that the protagonist was just wishful thinking and that he didn't particularly care about the protagonist. In addition, online novels are written for readers, and they cannot make readers feel uncomfortable, otherwise they will become poisonous points. For example, in this book, if the identity of the author is discovered early on, no matter who it is, it will not be good. If you don't write down your feelings well in the early stages and work hard for this woman, that's poisonous. If your writing skills are not good, it is best not to even think about writing.

There are many loopholes, and forced explanation is the most fatal

I will give you your meaning, and I will bear your hope!

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If you sprinkle flour on it, it will turn into dust and explode. Are you kidding me? It's so embarrassing for me to see.

The disgusting thing about this book is not that the protagonist's character is weird or that he escapes a lot. Books like Horrorland and The Player have a fierce protagonist with personality, but the protagonist of this book is just disgusting. There is a problem with the author's description, it is too deliberate. It's like a novice. For example, the scene where the protagonist protects the heroine made me feel embarrassed😳😳😳.